Battered Hearts|| Chapt 3 page 3 Updated 08/03 - Page 2

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Congrats on the new story


Intriguing prologue... finely written

feeling for Geet

angry seeing what she is going through

Thank God she managed to escape

hope she will be fine

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Posted: 5 months ago
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Chapter 2

Captivating Chapter

I actually feel bad for Maan as his home life is certainly not good

seems like his parents just don't care about him

is he perhaps adopted by them

but Geet sees him as a person and respects that


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Posted: 5 months ago
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very sad for maan

his life is very much complicated

with geet he feels different n alive who see him as a normal person

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Thank you for the update. It was great! I feel so sorry for Maan. His confidence has been eroded by his father and it has made him very defensive in front of everyone. He thinks everyone will think the same of him. What awful parents he has. They are obviously rich and it just shows, his father cares more about his business and reputation, the mother it sounds is drinking away her sorrows and it is a dysfunctional family. Often being rich does not mean happiness. Those who don’t have a lot often are the happiest.

Maan is the hero here though. He has in fact saved Geet’s life. Geet’s acknowledgement of him as a person has thrown him off balance as no one ever has. Let’s hope he falls in love with her and she reciprocates. I have a feeling he is not going to like it if she doesn’t. He has never known love, kindness and friendship and I think he is going to just rely on Geet to be his everything. Thank you!

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Posted: 5 months ago
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It's all Maan's family fault that he is not himself but thankfully Geet is treating him like a person.

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Great update wonderful story looking forward for next update 💝 maan ll open up to geet I guess

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Nice update. So sad for Maan he has everyone but no love and Affection

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Why maan family treating him like that

Liking geet initiative for maan

But prologue ,???

Kya maan geet ko apni khushi smjhke cage krke rakhenga

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Chapter 1

adore the bond between Geet and Khushi

enjoyed the banter between the friends

so Dev and Arnav are also part of the group

well Maan Singh Khurana is in his own world

of cos he is aware of his surroundings

feeling for Maan

he indeed has a tough life

hate how his dad treats him

hmm Maan envies Geet

glad that she does not treat him like an outcast and is kind to him

liked that she even spoke up for Maan

Maan's thoughts were reasonable

as expected Maan said that he would do the project solo

pleased that Geet agreed to be his partner

Dev was clearly unhappy

good that she got Meera to be his partner

does Dev like Geet?

not surprised with Maan's remarks

but Geet was adamant stating that she needs him as its a joint project

angry that Dev taunted Maan

loved that Geet defended Maan

she had a valid point

Geet's thoughts were understandable

at least Maan turned up at the library

now Geet divided the work

oh Maan remained silent

finally he spoke....

its going to be a great partnership

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