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Part 37

The hallway was half-lit, late afternoon sun spilling across the white tile floor like it didn’t belong.

Rounds were over.

Charts updated.

The quiet had returned.

Dr. Radhika—junior resident, two months into rotation—walked down ICU corridor B with a tablet in one hand and exhaustion pooling in her knees.

She didn’t intend to stop.

But her steps slowed outside Room 407, like everyone’s did now.

She glanced through the glass.

And paused.

Inside, nothing had changed.

Maan Singh Khurana was in the same chair he’d occupied every day for two weeks. One hand resting on Geet’s, thumb moving in an absent, rhythmic motion like he wasn’t even conscious of it anymore.

She hadn’t moved.

He hadn’t left.

No talking. No pleading. Just presence.

And something about that sight—quiet, steady, raw—pulled the breath from Radhika’s throat.

Her colleague, another young doctor with earbuds in, stopped beside her.

“What?”

Radhika didn’t look away.

She said it softly. Not bitter. Not loud. Just… honest.

“My fiancé couldn’t even wait two days after my surgery before going to brunch with his ex.”

The other doctor blinked, confused.

“What?”

She nodded toward the window, chin tilting slightly.

“That man’s still holding her hand. After two weeks. Without a word.”

Her voice caught on the last syllable—not with grief. With clarity.

Because what she saw wasn’t patience. It wasn’t romance. It was something more sacred than either.

It was a man still sitting beside the same girl.
Fifteen days.
Countless hours.
No guarantees.

And still—

He held on like her silence was the only thing keeping him alive.

They moved on.

But she kept thinking about it.

And back inside Room 407, Maan adjusted the blanket near Geet’s shoulder.

Didn’t know he was being watched.

Didn’t care.

He wasn’t trying to prove anything.

He just stayed.

Because she hadn’t let go.

And neither would he.

+++

Most interns moved quickly through the ICU.

Eyes on clipboards. Pages turning. Words flying back and forth between nurses and doctors and consultants. Always rushing, always behind.

But Arnav, barely twenty-two, awkward, sleep-deprived, and still unsure how to properly hold a stethoscope, moved a little differently.

He watched people.
Watched how they stood. How they sat.
How they waited.

He’d heard whispers about Room 407 from his first week.

The girl in the bed.
The man in the chair.
The silence that had begun to feel sacred.

He hadn’t dared pause before.

But tonight, the hallway was quiet.

He was walking past to deliver a sealed vial from pathology when something made him stop.

He turned, glanced sideways—

And froze.

Inside, through the glass pane, he saw it.

Maan Singh Khurana, head bowed forward, fast asleep.
His entire body leaned inward, like gravity had finally won.

But it wasn’t the sleep that struck Arnav.

It was the way his cheek rested lightly against the back of her hand—not holding it, not gripping it—just… touching, like even in unconsciousness, Maan couldn’t bear the distance.

Her hand was wrapped in gauze, fragile, unmoving.

His was draped over hers.

Their fingers, not laced—but aligned. Barely touching.
And somehow, it was more intimate than anything he’d ever seen.

Arnav’s breath caught in his chest.

He looked around once.

Then slowly—almost shyly—he pulled his phone from his pocket.

Lifted it just high enough.

And took the photo.

No flash.

No sound.

Just a quiet click.
A stolen moment.
A soft confession to himself.

He didn’t take it to post.
Didn’t even plan to show anyone.

He just needed to remember this.

Because years from now, when the world felt cynical and hollow and loud—

He wanted proof that once, in a silent hospital hallway at three in the morning—

He saw what devotion looked like.

+++

Nurse Tara’s shift was almost over.

Her legs ached. Her shoulders slumped. The edges of her glasses pressed faint red marks into the bridge of her nose.

She sat at the corner station desk, surrounded by half-filled charts, digital vitals, auto-saved entries blinking in sleepy green.

But Room 407’s file—that one she still did by hand.

She didn’t know why.

Maybe because typing felt too sterile.
Maybe because handwriting felt more... human.

She flipped open the chart, pen already in hand, and recorded the usual:

Patient stable.
Vitals consistent.
No distress noted.
Ongoing pain management administered as scheduled.

She paused.

Glanced up through the open door.

Maan was seated just as he always was.

Not asleep.

Not speaking.

Just there—his hand resting lightly over Geet’s, his gaze steady on her face like he was watching her through time.

Tara’s pen hovered for a second longer.

And then—

In her neat, steady script, she added a line.

Partner present throughout.
Never left.

She didn’t say it aloud.

Didn’t call attention to it.

Just wrote it quietly. Clearly.

Then closed the file.

Slid it gently into the slot at the foot of the bed.

And left the room without a sound.

Not because anyone would read that note.

But because some truths deserve to be written down, even if they never make it to a report.

Because even in silence—

Someone saw.

+++

Fifteen days.

Fifteen days of machines breathing in her place.
Fifteen days of stillness so total, it had started to feel normal.

Room 407 had learned to live without motion.

The IV bag changed. The oxygen hissed. The heart monitor pulsed. But she didn’t.

Not a blink. Not a sound.

Not even a twitch that wasn’t written off as nerve response or sedation artifact.

And Maan?

Maan stayed.

Not like a visitor.
Not like someone hopeful.

He stayed like someone anchored. Like leaving wasn’t an option because part of him no longer existed outside that room.

His body had molded to the hospital chair. His breath synced with the soft beep of the monitor. He slept in uneven snatches—if at all—and when he did, it was always with his hand resting near hers. Sometimes over it. Sometimes barely touching. But always there.

That night was no different.

The hallway lights were dim. Outside, the world continued.

But inside, it was still a room of silence.

Maan sat forward again, elbows on knees, head bent, eyes on her.

She hadn’t stirred.

Not once.

His fingers were cold. His spine hurt. His skin itched from the same shirt he hadn’t changed in three days. But none of that mattered.

Because she was still.

And he refused to move first.

It happened suddenly.

Without sound.
Without prelude.
Without warning.

Her chest hitched.

Not the rise of breath from a machine-fed rhythm.

But a real hitch.

A stutter of life through lungs that had forgotten what initiative felt like.

Maan straightened instantly.

Not loudly.
Not frantically.

He just froze.

His breath held.

He stared at her face.

And then—

Her fingers moved.

The smallest flex.
A shift in skin.
A pull in the muscle beneath the bandage.

Not a spasm.

Not a twitch.

A decision.

The air changed in the room.

It wasn’t hope yet.

It was shock.

Raw, living disbelief.

“Geet…”
His voice broke on her name.

He leaned closer, too fast, gripping the bed rail with one hand, the other ghosting above her hand like touching it might end it.

And then—

Her brows moved.

Just slightly.
Just enough.

As if something beneath the skin of her face was trying to speak before her mouth could remember how.

Her lips parted.
Not wide.
Not enough for sound.

But open.

And he felt it.

A force. A presence.

Like the room was no longer housing silence, but return.

She was in there.

Fighting.

Pushing against the weight of whatever had held her captive.

He didn’t cry.

Not yet.

But his hands began to shake.

Not from fear.
But from the violence of relief his body couldn’t contain.

He leaned forward, so close now.

“You’re here…”

It wasn’t a question.

“You’re here.”

Her eyelids fluttered—once.
A broken tremor of lashes.
No focus. No gaze.

But life.

He pressed the call button.

Didn’t look away.

“Room 407,” he said, voice steady but shredded. “She moved.”

He dropped the button. Didn’t wait.

“Geet... if you can hear me—don’t stop. Don’t stop.”

His hand hovered at the edge of her shoulder, trembling.

He didn’t touch her face.

He couldn’t.

She looked too fragile, like touching her would break the thread she’d just found her way back along.

But his voice stayed. Right there.

“You’re doing it. You’re doing it, baby, come on…”

A sound escaped her throat.

Low. Raw.

“...hhuhh…”

His knees almost gave under him.

He dropped back into the chair. Reached for her hand fully now. Clasped it like she was going to disappear.

And for the first time in fifteen days—

he sobbed.

Silently.

Head bowed.

Forehead pressed to her wrist.

Because it wasn’t a miracle.

It was her.

And she was trying.

And it was enough to tear him in half.

Nurse Tara arrived within seconds, her expression alert but calm. She’d been waiting for this too—all of them had.

She moved quickly but gently, sliding her stethoscope from her neck.

Geet’s brow was faintly creased now. Her lips parted again as another ragged breath slipped out.

“...uhhhnn…”

The monitor beeped slightly higher—her heart rate elevating.

Tara checked reflexes, shining a soft penlight into her eyes.

They didn’t track.
They didn’t focus.
But they opened.

Just barely.

A thin sliver of iris appeared. Then closed again.

“She’s responding,” Tara said quietly. “Briefly. Inconsistently. But it’s volitional.”

She made a few quick notes in the chart.

“No additional sedation tonight. We’ll let her continue coming out naturally.”

Maan stayed beside her, standing now, watching every inch of Geet’s face like it might disappear.

He saw her throat move.
Saw the faintest wince cross her brow.
Saw another whisper of sound escape her lips—

“...mmhh…”

Like the body doesn’t know how to ask for help. Only that it needs.

Tara glanced at him.

“It’s good. This is the beginning. But it’ll be slow.”

Maan didn’t speak.

Didn’t smile.

He just sat again.

Closer this time.

His hand returned to hers—two fingers brushing along her knuckles.

He leaned in—closer than before, his breath steady now, as if holding it might take her further from him.

His fingers trembled as they swept a stray hair off her temple, avoiding the gauze.

He whispered—not with desperation, but with the kind of quiet only someone who has known long silence can carry.

“That’s it, Geet...”

His voice cracked, barely above a breath.

“You hear me, don’t you?”

She didn’t move. But her brows were still faintly furrowed, the muscles of her face straining like someone reaching up from deep water.

“You’re almost there,” he murmured, leaning his forehead briefly to the edge of the bed. “Whatever it is—whatever’s holding you back—fight it. Just a little longer.”

Another broken sound escaped her throat. A whimper, not shaped into anything human yet.

“Come back,” he whispered. “You don’t have to rush. Just… don’t stop.”

His hand cradled hers again, thumb brushing over the bandaged edge.

“I’m right here. You’re not alone. I’m not leaving.”

And then—

He said her name. Like it was the only thing in the room that mattered.

“Geet.”

It was a prayer. Not to a God. To her.

Her eyelids fluttered once more.

And for the rest of the night, Maan didn’t blink.
Didn’t move.
Didn’t sleep.

Because now—
She was trying.
And he was the voice she had left in the world to follow.

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 months ago
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A sign. Not just one. There is movement. There is sound. Its enough for now.

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So many people were affected by the devotion they saw. All the nurses that came by, the interns.

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Its so touching

Thank God writer ko dya aayi

And geet showed some sign

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Part 37

Devoted and a Wakefulness Update

Now that Geet is showing signs of fighting

Maan been there encouraging her

this certainly is a golden ray of light for him

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37

finally geet respond

maan encouraging her by saying he is there with n for her always so she can not stop fighting

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Part 36

of cos Maan never left Geet's side

well Maan was in tears

the nurses are in awe of Maan and Geet

dismayed seeing no progress in Geet

so Maan was guarding Geet

as expected everyone was rooting for Geet

Meera was correct

now the nurses were rooting for them

not surprised that they saw the love that Maan has for Geet

aww Maan is praying for Geet

great that Kamala told Geet to awaken for Maan

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Part 37

everyone in the hospital reveres Maan

liked his care and love for Geet

Maan is genuinely devoted to Geet

its now the fifteenth day

finally there is some movement from Geet

of cos Maan relieved

his reaction was reasonable

glad that Geet is responding

its a good sign

as expected Maan implored Geet to fight back

hope she recovers soon


update soon

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Part 38

Early Dawn

The world was still blue.

Not morning yet. Not night anymore. That hushed hour just before sunrise when the air itself seems to hold its breath.

Room 407 sat in stillness.

No footsteps. No voices. No beeping alarms.
Only the soft whisper of oxygen. The steady hum of life.

And in that soft light, her eyes opened.

Not wide. Not all the way.

But just enough.

Her lashes parted by fractions. A blur of soft light rushed in. Shadows. Shapes. The faint burn of effort.

She blinked.

Once.

And in that blink—

She saw him.

Still there.

Still seated.

Still watching her like her breath alone tethered him to the earth.

His posture hadn’t changed. One arm rested on the edge of her bed, the other cradling his brow. But his eyes—those dark, sleepless eyes—were on her.

Not blinking.
Not wavering.

He looked like he hadn’t moved in hours.

Because he hadn’t.

She blinked again. Slower this time. Her eyelids trembled with the strain.

She wanted to keep them open.

But the fog pulled her back.

The heaviness of her body, the ache beneath her ribs, the distant thunder in her skull—it was too much.

Still, before the world slipped again, she saw one more thing.

His face softened.

Not with relief. Not yet.

But with something quieter. Something achingly steady.

He didn’t speak.

He didn’t move toward her.

He just leaned in a little closer. His voice barely there.

“I see you.”

“You’re here.”

“I’ve got you.”

And then her eyes closed again.

But the memory of his voice… it stayed.

It followed her back into the quiet.

+++

Light.

Or maybe not light—just a paleness behind her eyes. A slow glow pressing at the edge of a world that had been nothing but dark.

There was a sound too.

Something soft. Low. Not sharp like machines. Not cold like memory.

A voice.

“I see you.”

She wanted to follow it.
But her body was so heavy.

So far away.

Her eyelids burned. Not from tears, but from effort—like lifting them had cost something. Like her whole body had rusted, and now she was trying to turn the gears again.

The world was wrong. Tilted.

Her throat ached. Dry, raw, like it had been scraped hollow.

Her chest felt… bound. Tight.
Breathing wasn’t easy, but it was there.

And under her skin—

Pain.

A dull, full ache. In her ribs. Her leg. Her neck.

Flashes of it sparked across her body like electricity trying to remember its path. It didn’t scream. It hummed. Deep, guttural pain that said: you survived, but it cost you something.

Something shifted beside her.

A shadow moved.

Not fear.

Warmth.

Her skin remembered it before her mind did.
Fingers. A palm. Pressed gently around hers.
A thumb. Tracing.

She couldn’t open her eyes again.

Couldn’t speak.

But the pressure was there. Anchoring. Real.

And the voice again, closer this time.

“You’re here.”

Another pause. Her brain barely caught the words.

“I’ve got you.”

Then a breath—his. She felt it more than heard it.

And for a flickering second, the noise in her body quieted.

The fog reached up again. Pulled her under.

But now… she didn’t fall as far.

Because somewhere inside her bones, her breath, her blood—

she knew she wasn’t alone anymore.

And she remembered the warmth of fingers holding hers.

+++

The room was still cloaked in shadow.

The kind of dark just before dawn begins to think about coming back. The machines kept their rhythm. Steady. Unchanged.

Maan hadn’t slept.

He hadn’t even closed his eyes.

He sat hunched forward, elbows on his knees, his hand wrapped around hers—not tightly, but completely. Like a thread he refused to drop.

His eyes stayed on her face.

Not searching. Just… being there.

The quiet had become familiar. Not comforting. But known. And sometimes that was enough.

Until it wasn’t.

It started small.

A shift in the air.

Her chest hitched—not from pain, not from rhythm, but like a breath paused halfway through itself.

He blinked.

Then it happened again.

“...hhuh…”

His body went still.

She wasn’t groaning. Not like before. This wasn’t pain. It wasn’t reflex.

It was something closer to language—or at least its ghost.

Then again—

“...nnnn…mmhh…”

It sounded like a consonant, choked and struggling, caught between inhale and intention.

Like her body had started the sentence and her brain hadn’t caught up.

“...huhh… mhh—nngh…”

She was trying.

Not speaking.
But trying.

Maan leaned forward, slowly.

Closer now.

Not to stop her. Not to rush it.

Just to let her know he was there.

Her lips trembled. Slightly parted. Jaw slack, trying to move but too heavy with effort.

No words came.

But he heard it.

The moment her breath caught again, like she was almost there.

“...mmmh—”

He whispered, barely moving his mouth.

“Don’t force it.”

His hand brushed her wrist, his voice a breath.

“You don’t have to say it yet.”

She stilled again.

Breathing slow.

The moment had passed.

But he had heard it.

He had seen it—
The way her lips formed the beginning of his name.
The soft “mhh…”
The ache in the breath that followed.
The way she tried to reach for him, not with her hands—but with the word that had always been his.

His throat clenched.

Tight. Sharp. Like something sacred was caught there.

His fingers curled into the blanket.

And then—
just one sob escaped him.
Uninvited. Unguarded.

He bowed his head forward, still holding her hand.

Not in despair.

But because he had waited so long for her voice—
And when it finally returned,
It came back trying to find only him.

+++

The sun hadn’t fully risen.

But the room was beginning to glow.

That soft, bluish light filtered through the blinds, painting stripes across the floor, across her blanket, across him—still bent forward, his shoulders slouched in exhaustion he hadn’t named.

His hand still held hers.

His thumb rested along the slope of her knuckles, unmoving.

After that one broken sound—his name, almost spoken—he hadn’t spoken again. He’d just sat there. Like he was afraid words would undo it.

A nurse had come and gone.

Vitals stable. Sedation holding. Still low, still tapering.

She hadn’t made another sound.

Until now.

There was a shift in her breathing—so small that anyone else might have missed it.

But Maan had been listening for weeks.
He felt it before he heard it.

He sat up straighter.

And then—

Her eyes opened.

Fully this time.

Not fluttering.
Not by accident.

They opened slowly, and for a moment, they didn’t focus—drifting somewhere between ceiling and shadows.

But then they moved.

Her pupils shifted.

Her gaze swam—

And found him.

It took her a beat to register what she was seeing.

But once she did—

She didn’t look away.

She blinked, once.
A slow, heavy blink like it took strength.

And when her eyes opened again—

they were on him.

He didn’t move.
Couldn’t.

Every part of him stilled under the weight of it.

The first time she had looked at him in sixteen days.

Not through fever. Not through memory.
But now. Here.

Her face didn’t change.

She was too tired. Too disoriented.

But her eyes stayed locked on his—like her mind hadn’t caught up yet, but some part of her knew.

Knew him.

Knew the shape of his shoulders.
The way his brow furrowed when he was scared.
The way his hands never shook except when they touched her.

And in her eyes—

there was no fear.

Just confusion.
Exhaustion.
And something that looked like recognition—a half-remembered warmth in a blinding world.

Maan didn’t speak.

He couldn’t.

His throat was too full. His chest too tight.

He just leaned forward, barely breathing, his voice a thread.

“Hi…”

A tear slipped down his cheek. Quiet. Honest.

She blinked again.

Her lips moved—

But no sound came.

Just the ghost of a word.

A shape.

“…M—…”

His name.

Or maybe just its shadow.

It didn’t matter.

He nodded once. Just once.

“I’m here.”

His hand gripped hers, finally—not loosely, not absently.

With purpose.

“I’m right here.”

And this time—

she squeezed back.

Not strong. Not steady.

But enough.

Enough to know the veil had thinned.
Enough to know the war wasn’t over—
But she’d come back to fight it with him.

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 months ago

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