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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Thanks for the pm


Part 23

Tensed update… pleasantly written Thanks

Gosh the weather is terrible

Geet is all alone

at least she called Maan

of cos she feels relieved

Thank God Maan came and fetched Geet

Geet was indeed overwhelmed


update soon


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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: simranDi

That’s a sweet update. Thank you. She was reluctant to call him as he has never been there for her and she wasn’t even sure that he would come. True The happiness and relief she felt that he came and rescued her was sweet. Thanks for liking the scene, it was the most difficult emotion to convey Let’s hope he doesn’t show her dreams only for him to vanish again. Hope so too


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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

She got so used to being on her own, that she did not want to ask for help.


But when needed it, Maan is the person she reached out to.


And there he was.


Yup, she hoped he would come but didn't expect he would

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: janu2006

Great part Thanks

Maans life is mystery Indeed

Hope maaneet are safe in this weather and they voice their feelings kuch toh progress hogi hi😉

Cont soon

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Originally posted by: Kkiran

This woman I swear like give Maan some credit for being a decent human. She is like one who got them married technically well her family but she said yes as well. She clearly takes national weather warnings not very seriously but whatever. Thank you Maan for risking your life and your car to rescue this jasoos.


I loved loved loveeeeed your comment!!❤️ Agree, Maan is one of the most decent male lead ever. You have points, her family technically screwed his life free main so Maan is not obliged to do anything for her. That's why she hoped he will contact her but didn't expect. Ab why she risked the warning uska bhi reason hai, keep reading😉

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Posted: 2 years ago

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Posted: 2 years ago

Lovely update. Thank you! Aaawww, he is being the perfect husband. I would love a husband like that. Makes the tea and heats the hot water.


He is definitely in love. His worry is a clear sign of that. I’m sure he will quit the poison just like that, now that he knows his Geet can’t stand the smell. Let’s see if he does.


So Geet lied at the end and obviously this Maan is too sharp for his own good. Looking forward to the next.


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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Mg13

Aww...

Last part was so beautiful...❤️ Thanks a lot. It is close to my heart

But so much short update yaar ...😒 . I know the update is small, but this was the most difficult update to write. the whole subtle emotions and feelings with every action and putting it in writing was a challenge. the next part is longer, hope you will like it

It's just started and ended so soon...

Try to increase the length na ...plz...

So Geet's ego died the moment lights went off...😆 it happens all the time, we think we won't be needing any help atleast not from some particular person and wahi person at the end will be helping us...🤣 sahi baat hai, sab phuss pathaka hogaya bechaari ka😆


Thanks for the comment. i always look forward to your comment

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Posted: 2 years ago

There is lot we dont know about maan

so does geet

but i am glad geet is happy for a while

maan seems to care genuinly about her

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