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Posted: 2 years ago

Part 24


‘Geet’

She hears her name

She starts to step into the cold rain towards the voice but is surprised to find herself not being strangulated by the icy drops

She looks up to find Maan holding an umbrella over her head, protecting her from the harsh rain drops

A smile of assurance and relief appears on her lips looking at him

Her cold hand feels the warmth of his hand as he softly holds her hand to guide her towards the car

She did not expect he would come

She did not expect he would come and rescue her like a real husband would do for his real wife

+++++++

Geet was visibly shaken, hence silent during the whole journey while Maan was also silently driving

Maan stops the car as they reach home

The whole area is engulfed in darkness due to power outage

Maan turns on the flashlight of the phone to help Geet climb the stairs

Geet is relieved to finally be back home

Maan gets her a towel to dry herself up

M- Tum nahaalo, baarish ke paani se thand lag jaati hai

He says as he goes to the kitchen and puts a cauldron of water to heat so that Geet could take a shower

Geet looks at him while drying her hair with the towel

She walks towards her cupboard to fetch her dry clothes and goes to step into the bathroom

M- Ruko! Paani garam ho raha hai. Garam paani se nahao

She didn’t realize he was heating the water for her

G- emm….nahi…theek hai

M- Thande paani se nahaayogi toh thand lag jaayegi

Maan fetches a bucket from the bathroom and pours hot water onto it and then lifts the bucket of water into the bathroom for her

She follows his words and goes into the bathroom

+++++

Maan changes his clothes while Geet takes a shower

Jab tak Geet nahaake bahar aati hai she finds that Maan has prepared hot tea for her

As she gets out of shower, she almost collides with Maan

G-Oh!

M-Oh!

Both of them retrieve back

M- Chai?

He puts the tray with the tea and some snacks on her bed where she usually sits

Geet comes and sits on the bed looking around and the ongoing rain outside

Maan sits at his usual place, foot of her bed

She looks

‘Upar baith jao’

Maan hears her say

He is little taken aback hearing it

But pulls himself up

Geet moves a little to make space for him to sit

She is sitting hugging her knees, warming her cold hands on the teacup

She could see Maan’s profile in the darkness

G- Thanks

She utters quietly but her voice had sincerity

Maan doesn’t say anything just looks down

They are sipping the tea in silence but still there is a presence of an unspoken assurance

Geet realizes Maan has his gaze on her

G- Kya dekh rahe ho?

She asks softly

M- Tum theek ho yaa nahi

He also answers with softness in his deep voice

G- Main bohot…darr gai thi

She looks down and confesses

G- Darna nahi chahiye tha

M- Kyun? Darr sabhi ko lagta hai

G- Tumhe lagta hai?

M- Bohot

G- Kis se?

He sighs

M- Waqt se

There is another moment of lull

Geet again hugs her knees to herself

G- Mujhe laga tha tum nahi aaoge

M- Kyun?

G- Pata nahi

Both are again silent and looking outside the window

Few moments pass by like this, in comfortable silence

G- Woh car…jismein tumne mujhe pick kiya woh…

She is thinking aloud to herself

G- Who toh uss creepo ki hai naa?

Geet says referring to her creepy landlord and turning her head to look at Maan for an answer

M- Haan

G- Tumhe woh car kaise mili?

M- I borrowed it from him

G- Aur usne de di?

Maan sighs

** Flashback

After the call from Geet, Maan was struggling to find a taxi to reach Geet. He couldn’t force an innocent man’s life in the dangerous storm to reach Geet. He needed a vehicle that he could drive

He barges in the landlord’s home in haste

M- Gaadi chahiye

Maan demands

Landlord- Kya?? Kyun??

M- Geet musibat mein hai usko pick karna hai

Landlord- Toh humne kya yahan pe charity khol rakhi hai. Mooh uthaake aa jaate hain! Arre apni gaadi….----

Before the landlord could complete, he finds himself in death choke

M- Keys

Maan repeats calmly

Landlord hands over the keys

G- Huh?

Maan comes back to present with Geet’s voice

M- Haan

Geet is shocked

G- Kaise?

M- Maine kaha ki tum musibat mein ho. Mujhe zarurat hai

G- Kya zarurat thi uske saamne gidgidhaane ki? Ab uska aur attitude badh jayega

M- Aisa kuch nahi hoga

He says calmly

G- Usse madat maangne ki zarurat hi kya thi

M- Aur koi raasta nahi tha uss waqt

G- Ugh! You are too soft. Aise logon ke toh main mooh hi naa lagun

She gets up in frustration while picking up the teacups

While Maan sits their slouching

G- Notice kiya, Creepo (landlord) ki car mein kitni cigarette ki smell aa rahi thi? Itna smoke karta hai, uff! Car mein itni badbu bhari hai ki koi aur bhi baithe to uss par buu lag jati hai

Geet continues the conversation from the kitchen

G- Tumhare kapdon pe bhi lag gai thi, mere pe bhi lag gai hogi

Maan is silent

** Flashback

Maan hastily gets in the landlord’s car after borrowing it.

He doesn’t want to admit but he is feeling a paralyzing sense of worry

He starts driving to Geet’s location while being on call with her, so he knows that she is safe

Achanak Geet ka phone bhi switch off hua hai due to low battery

Maan’s body gets engulfed with that jarring fear of unknown

He spots a pack of cigarette in the car...

Cigarettes are his poison; he had been trying to quit. He even punishes himself by doing inhuman number of push-ups when he loses his control

Paani ka level bhi badh raha hai and the anxiety to quickly gets to Geet gets the better of him

He knows the Landlord won’t dare mention how Maan borrowed his car or the pack of cigarette missing from the car

M- Waise tum xyz place mein kya kar rahi thi? Tumhara office toh woh side nahi hai

Maan says to change the topic

G- emm ....woh...woh ..kuch kaam tha

She doesn’t want to divulge that she went to the forensic lab after work

Maan’s eyes sharpen as he realizes the hesitation in Geet’s voice

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Glitter_Goldie

Loved it Neelu dear🤗 Thanks

Awesome and beautiful part

Great that Geet was rescued on time & and at the right time she had Informed Maan about the entire situation

She must have landed herself in a trouble if she had held on to her ego that moment but good that everything was settled & Geet was safe True, she had to let go off her ego and allow him to help her and admit to herself that she indeed needs help

Waiting for more

Thank you for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗


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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: ranumohanty

Hi, thanks for pm, update is too small dear, thank god maan came to resque Geet.


Thanks for reading & commenting. I know the update is small but this was the most difficult update to write. the whole subtle emotions and feelings with every action and putting it in writing was a challenge. the next part is longer, hope you will like it

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Originally posted by: Alamelu

Poor girl till now she loved independently only so did not expect any help. Yup But then situation warranted she call someone and she did call Maan

Glad he picked and reached to help her

Atleast at this moment he is her savior

but what is his background. Still confused Sab pata chalega


waiting gif that yo be revealed Keep reading



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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: heycookie

aww maan did came for her rescue

loved it Thanks

geet felt someone came for her that too her husband..just like husband protects his wife, m songlad for her rn that she got happy for this. hope everything goes well from now Yup, this might be a turning point for them


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Posted: 2 years ago

She went to the lab in that bad weather? What was she trying to do there?

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Posted: 2 years ago

Maan arm twisted the creep into giving his car. The man must have been intimidated enough.

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Its nice how Maan took care of her. Heating up water, making her tea.

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Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 23


In creditable and so Amazing Update Thanks


I'm glad that Geet phones Maan and let him know

about her situation

but the best part is Maan coming to her protecting her

even from rain drops Thanks for noticing it, it is my personal favorite scene

Geet truly needed some assurance from Maan

and finally he did it ❤️the silent assurance

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

23

geet's colleague alert her but she ignore it

she is alone as everybody left

geet scare when try to go home in worst condition

finally she call maan n surprise as he come as real husband to rescue her

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