MG FF - Indebted Part 45 May 19 Pg 152 New Thread Link Pg 1, 153 - Page 13

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Posted: 3 years ago

Geet get restless when Maan not coming home mohinder and rano knows Geet missing Maan pampering but they don't have idea about their deep feelings

what's Mohinder planning for Maan Geet results bit down bz Maan was not their Geet parents want them to solve their matters

Maan talked to her and she was happy he came and Geet was happy Maan not happy with her result he made her study well and she fulfilling her weird wishes with him he want her to b in limits and Geet don't want anyone else when Maan is their

Both having exam and their life is like this

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Posted: 3 years ago

Lovely update

Waiting for next update. ...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi Anu

How are you and your family?

thanks for the update


Chapter 9

Superb update… marvelously written

so Maan and Geet are restless

at least Geet's parents realised that slapping Maan was not a good idea as Geet was at fault

Geet's parents are indeed selfish

they know that Maan will do anything and everything for Geet

good that they acknowledge that Geet is doing well at school because of Maan's guidance and hard work

what plans does Mohinder have for Maan?

no wonder he wants resolve the matter

hate that Mohinder is using Maan

finally Maan speaks to Geet

of cos Maan boosts her ego

upset how she orders Maan

as expected Geet's results are affected when Maan is not around

Geet is ecstatic seeing Maan

dismayed how she blackmails Maan

he is helpless

while he does enjoy it he does stay within his limits

well with Maan around, Geet is focused

Geet leaves no opportunity to tease Maan

liked Maan's care for Geet

great that Maan is a good teacher and Geet excels

sad that Geet uses Maan as a toy

not surprised that she just demands to see his body

he finds it hard to control

Maan's question regarding what she meant when she said that she loves him is reasonable

does she even love him?

Maan's thoughts are justified

anyone can manipulate Geet

loved how he handled Geet and set targets for her

but Maan giving into Geet allows her to as she pleases

which is wrong

no one corrected Geet's behavior


update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 9


I finally read and commented on blog

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Posted: 3 years ago

Don’t like Mohinders intention for Maan. Hmm wondering what he wants him to do to keep the indebtnwss !!!!

Everyone senses geets restlessness when Maan is not around especially the way he left


Maan too is not stopping his humiliation from coming back and helping geet. He realises he is keeping her from getting into trouble with other boys and things. Her attention is only on him. So that’s good. He also realises if he keeps quiet with all her doings then he too will not get into trouble. He just has to control himself


yea he is definitely attracted to her for sure but knows he cannot reach her

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Posted: 3 years ago

on the fanfuction page

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 10 - Sweet and Sour


For this long post please like and comment dearies. Thanks to all my readers for showering your love to this story. 😊


All last post likers, tagging you all. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 10: Tagging more

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 10 - last tag list

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Posted: 3 years ago

commented on fan fiction page.....

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