MG FF - Indebted Part 45 May 19 Pg 152 New Thread Link Pg 1, 153 - Page 14

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Posted: 3 years ago

Lovely update

Waiting for next update.....

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Maan excelling in his studies and loved to explore his skills in every event and doing best he also got 100% scholarship in London university he also have his business plans he want to tell this on his last year

Mohinder to have some plans for him

With his studies he also seeing Geet studies and guide her on phone she only love the way of studies of Maan

He always protect Geet he also young boy growing he have crush on her but he can't treat her like girl friend Geet already all crazy for him he tried best to keep distance to control his desire too but he can't ignore her totally so she always keep talking freely and hug him kiss him but he always control his self around her

Rano making everything for her own son and giving Maan only little bit things when Geet pinpoint Maan heart also missing his mom love

Geet show him CD Maan get angry seeing adult sex CD he snatch them Geet try to take it back but Maan get angry

After finishing her food she intentionally left bowl from her hand it's break in pieces Meera called servant to clean the mess but Geet stopped her saying Maan will clean it or she her self do but Maan control his anger and start cleaning one piece of bowl get inside his hand and blood getting out of his hand Geet get concern but Maan didn't let her hold his hand so Geet call Meera she bandage his hand and beautiful bracelet fall down from his pocket Meera asked but he said nothing just brought it from his first earning Geet and his eyes met but he was angry Geet run away and cry bz she knows she spoiled their moment bz of her stubbornness hope Maan left bracelet in her room

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi Anu

Hope you and your family are well

thanks for the update and for tagging me

Happy Mother's day to you


Chapter 10

Fascinating update…. terrifically written

glad that Maan is doing well at college

liked that he is making plans for his business

great that he applied for and got the scholarship in UK

Maan is indeed thinking ahead

I feel that Maan has already paid his debts to the Handas

he has taken care of Geet, guided her and became her punching bag

why must he promise them that he will available for family service?

despite his hectic schedule, Maan always finds time to guide Geet with her studies

good that Maan ignored Geet's signal to spend time alone

at least for her pre-board Maan stayed with the Handas to help Geet with her studies

oh she convinced to go for a movie

of cos Maan wanted Brij and Meera to go with

Geet did not like the idead but relented in condition that Maan sit next to her

so Brij and Meera refuse

well they are aware of Maan and Geet

as expected they tease Maan

they clearly know Geet well

liked that they trust Maan

not surprised that Geet kisses Maan

admire that Maan controls

wow Geet openly shows her feelings for Maan

upset with Geet's behavior towards Maan when he rejects her wish

does she really love Maan?

proud of Maan and his achievements

a big company made an offer

why would Maan reject?

what plans does Mohinder have for Maan?

loved that Maan has his own plans

hate how Rannoo treats Maan

seems like she only asked him to pack ladoos as he was helping her

Gosh Geet has plans for Maan

Geet never ceases an opportunity to get closer to Maan

nice how he tries to divert her attention

feeling for Maan

he misses out on a mom's love

Omg Geet got an adult movie

Maan's anger is reasonable

he took the CD away and Geet is furious

dismayed that Geet intentionally dropped the bowl and insisted that Maan clean up

disgusted with her attitude

pleased that Meera shouts Geet

Maan injures his hand while picking up the glasses pieces

now Geet is worried seeing this

Maan telling Geet to stay away from him is understandable

Thank God Meera nursed him

hmm Maan got Geet a silver bracelet with his earning

his comment to Meera's question is justified considering Geet's behavior

why is Geet now crying?

she is the one that treats him so badly and hurts him all the time....

is this her so called love?

she never respects Maan

wonder if in the present, Maan still has feelings for Geet


update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 10


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Posted: 3 years ago

Maan is already making plans to out and start a business. Will the family easily let him go?

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Its good in a way that Maan kept his plans secret.

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Rano is acting all generous but she shortchanged Maan compared to Brij.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Did he buy that bracelet for Geet?

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Posted: 3 years ago

Such a lovely update.. it was worth the wait. Sorry for commenting late..

What a bitch😖 Being a snob & everything is one thing, but like Maan said, does she have anything else in mind other than that?? Too horny for her age.
Maan did a smart thing by hiding from this family his career plans. After all, this is why he had to endure all these years of humiliation from the family and mostly the brat.
This time she just pushed his limits.. almost like a blackmail this is, if he doesn’t relent just do anything to get him insulted. There’s only so much a man can take. Poor poor Maan. That lady Rano, she is a a mother of 3 kids, yet couldn’t see him as her own son even after so many yrs. I wish Maan gets all that he missed in his past life now. Pls pls do something & compensate this for him later 😢 my heart goes out to him.. I eagerly wait for these updates so much… & so excited when you update it. Pls pls next one soon sooner soonest

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Unbelievable!!! Even geet realises how badly Rano handles Maan. Really showing affection. Don’t understand how she can be so selfish. Brij and Meera don’t like it but what can they do too??

between geet and her parents Maan slide is a mess. And what humiliation !!!

Wonder if geet made it hard for Maan with the cd ?? She brings it but am sure blame will be put on Maan


feel so bad for him. Looks like he hit the bracelet for her but now he will not give it to her !!!


brij and Meera realise Maan and geet relationship. They don’t want to interfere. It will only make it harder for Maan and they don’t want that


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