MG FF Oh Saathi re.. thread 2 updt Epilogue pg 45 Apr 14 - Page 17

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful part

Geet made maan understand so innocently

Hope mansi can stay with maaneet

Cont soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

awesome update................


me too feeling bad fr maan n geet..............mansi should be there with dem only...........


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Posted: 3 years ago

sad update.............


maansi ko chhodo na tara............ane do uski ghar.........


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Posted: 3 years ago

awesome n fabulous update..................


muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....................


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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 97

Awww .... so glad that Nani brought mansi

Geet enjoys spoiling mansi

Hope she doesn’t spoil her too much

Moments b/n geet & Nani are sweet .

Thank you

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 98

Glad that Nani finds out the truth behind geet’s devotion to mansi & her sacrifice

Good that she overheard their conversations

Maybe now she can knock some sense into Tara now

Thank you

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Posted: 3 years ago

Rajji knows the big secret about Geet. But she doesn't know Tara had pushed her into it.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Rajji has seen enough to convince her that Mansi is at home.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Maybe Tara would get some feedback out of this and begin to change her mind.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part – 99

Next day Rajjinder is all set to go…

Geet and everyone else is waiting to send her off ..

Geet is very upset… she doesn’t want Mansi to go, but as she said Rajinder can’t leave without Mansi….

Rajinder can understand Geet better now….

Rajjinder: kush raho beta, babaji tumme tummare sare kushiyan jaldhi wapas de

Geet is still holding on to Mansi ..

Ranno: aap se milke bahut kushi hui didi

Rajjinder: aap ki beti bahut samajhdar hai, aur sab ka bahut achche se khyaal rakhti hai, aap ko toh garv hona chahiye ki Geet aap ki beti hai

Ranno: aap ne sahi kaha didi, ye sab ka khyal rakhti hai, par apna Khyaal nahi rakh sakti

Geet: maa, tumme meri chinta karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai, Maan haina, woh hummare khyaal rakhenge

Ranno: haan haan, issiliye tum apne mann maani kar rahi ho

Geet is already in a very bad mood and Ranno’s insensible words are not helping it ..

This is not the time to talk about Geet and her baby…

But, poor Ranno, its her daughter and grandchild, she has her own agenda after all, haina?

It’s not easy for Rajinder too to take away Mansi from Geet…

Rajinder keeps looking at both of them quietly…

Where’s Maan?

Haan, Maan has escaped, he has an urgent meeting????

If Maan stayed back he would not let Mansi leave… so, he thought that it’s better for him to leave it to Geet to decide….

Maan knows that he could stop Mansi from going, but he also knows that Tara is capable of coming to KM and creating havoc if she gets to know that Maneet deliberately kept Mansi back with them…

She must be fuming already, for her own mother didn’t support her …..

Nandhini just comes back from the gurudwara….

She rushes to meet Mansi…

Nandhini: babaji ki lakh lakh sukhar hai ki aap log abhi tak nahi nikle

Geet: tu subhe subhe kahan chali gayi thi Nandhini ? Sab mujhe akhele chodke chale jao

Geet is not happy with Maan leaving….

Nandhini: woh didi mein babaji ke ashirwad lene gayi thi, mujhe pura yakheen hai ki babaji bahut jaldhi Mansi ko aap ke paas bhej denge

Nandhini keeps looking at Rajinder while saying that…

Geet: tu toh pagal ho gayi ho Nandhini, Mansi meri beti hai, aur babaji kabhi nahi chahenge ki ek beti apne maa se dhoor rahe, Mansi toh chotu ke aane se pehle aajayenge, haina Mansi?

Mansi: haan, mein chotu ko welcome karne aaoongi

Nandhini: promise?

Mansi: promise

Nandhini: agar app usko welcome karne nahi aa sakte toh chotu ko bahut bhura lagega

Geet: Nandhini, tum thode dher chup raho, choti si bachi ke saath aaise batein karthe hai kya?

Nandhini: nahi didi, ab aapki Mansi bhi badi hogayi hai, usko bhi haq hai, apne pariwar ke agle mehmaan ko swagat karne ki

Mansi: haan, mein badi baby ho gayi hoon, aap baby se kaho ki mera intezar kare, mein usko chocolate lekhe aaoongi

Geet hugs Mansi and kisses her …

Rajinder: Ranno ji, ab humein jaana hai, warna dher ho jayegi

Rajinder can’t directly ask Geet to send Mansi….

Ranno: chalo Geet, ab unko bhi jaana hai

Ranno takes Mansi and goes with Rajinder to send them off…

Geet keeps staring them as they start to walk….

Geet: ek minute maaji

Geet runs and stops Rajinder…

Geet: maa tu Mansi ko lekhe jao, mujhe maaji se baat karna hai

Rajinder takes Mansi out….

Geet: Nandhini, tu bhi jao

Rajinder is puzzled…. What does she want?

Geet: thank you maaji, sahi waqt pe Mansi ko laane ke liye, aap please ek aur madat karo

Rajinder thinks that Geet would ask her to leave Mansi here itself…

Rajinder: mein jo kuch bhi kar sakthi thi, woh meine kar liya hai puttar, ab mein kuch nahi kar sakthi

Geet: aap aaise nahi keh sakte, ek baat batao, agar mere jagah pe app ki beti hothe toh app kya karte? App aaise waqt par Mansi ko unse dhoor rakhte kya?

Rajinder couldn’t answer ..

Geet: aap ek bar aur Mansi ko lekhe aana aaise hi, delivery ke ek mahine pehle hi, Dr ne kaha ki uss waqt kabhi bhi delivery ho sakti hai, mein chahthi hoon ki Mansi apne chote bhai ko sabse pehle dekhe

Rajinder: lekhin puttar

Rajinder is helpless….

Geet: mein maanthi hoon meine Mansi ko janam nahi diya hai, lekhin Mansi Maan ki beti hai, aur ye bacha bhi Maan ka hi hai, issiliye ye Mansi ka bhai hi haina?

Rajinder: hum sab samajhthe puttar

Geet: toh app ye bhi samajhthe honge ki mujhe kitna bhura lagta hai ki mere wajhe se aaj Mansi apne papa aur bhai ke saath nahi hai

Geet breaks down….

Rajinder: aap kaise baat karthe hai puttar, aaisa kuch nahi hai, aap apne aap ko kyun doshi samajhthe ho? Aaise waqt pe aap ko sirf apne bache ki barein mein sochke kush hona chahiye

Geet: aap hi bathao ki mein kaise kush rahoon jab meri badi beti mere paas nahi hai?

Rajinder goes speechless…

Now she understands Geet’s pain….

Rajinder: aap chinta mat karo puttar, babaji aap ki zaroor sunenge

Geet: mujhe babaji se zyada aap pe vishwas hai, kyunki aap bhi ek maa ho

Rajinder leaves without answering as she can’t see Geet’s plight….

Geet goes to her room and stays there itself for the whole time….

Maan comes and Ranno complains to him as usual…

Maan goes to see Geet….

Geet is very angry… where was he all this time when she needed him the most?

She ignores him completely…

Maan was stuck in the lawyer’s office….

He wanted to make sure that there is no more delay in getting his daughter’s custody…

The lawyer was pretty sure that there won’t be any mistakes this time….

The next hearing is coming in a couple of days time….

This should be the final hearing, they have to make sure that there is no chance for any more hiccups….

Maan himself went through the whole details and added a few more points for their support….

Maan is a man of action, he knows what he has to do….

Maan: Geet, utjao

Geet doesn’t even turn to see him….

Maan: Geet, mein tumse baat kar raha hoon

Geet doesn’t respond…

Maan: tumme ho kya gaya hai? Tumne teek se khaya bhi nahi hai, chalo, jaldhi utto aur kuch khalo

Ranno comes with the food…

Ranno: ye kya hai? Ab ye ladhki app ki baat ko bhi nahi maanthi?

Ranno asks Maan in disappointment….

Maan: aap plate ko rakh ke jao, Geet khalegi

Ranno: waheguru, ab iss ladhki ka kuch nahi ho sakta

Maan: app ne suna nahi meine kya kaha?

Maan shouts…. That’s a warning for Geet too…

Ranno keeps the food and leaves immediately…

Maan: Geet, ye kya bachpana hai, tum abhi bachi nahi ho, tum maa banne wali ho

Geet: mein already maa hoon, aapko shayad yaad nahi hoga? aap ko toh sirf aapki kaam ki padhi hai

Maan: Geet, mein koi important kaam mein pasgaya tha, I’m sorry, ab toh khalo, khana tanda ho jayega

Geet: mujhe bhook nahi hai, mujhe meri beti chahiye

Maan: ye kaisi zidd hai Geet? Pehle khalo, phir hum baat karenge

Geet: mujhe app se koi baat nahi karni

Maan: teek hai, baat mat karna, par khana toh khalo

Geet: aap ko toh Mansi ki koi chinta nahi hai

Maan: Geeeet, bas, bahut ho gaya, Mansi meri beti hai, aur tumme uski chinta karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai, tum bas apne bache ki chinta karo aur chup chap khalo

Geet is shocked to hear that…

Aakhir Maan bhi sab ki tarah hi sochta hai….

Geet keeps crying silently…

Maan realized his mistake….

Maan goes near her and turns her face towards him…

He gently wipes off her tears with his rumal….

Maan: bas karo Geet, I’m sorry for what I just said, I was worried about you, you know that you shouldn’t be doing this, it’s not good for you and the baby

Maan keeps his hands on her tummy ….

Maan: Geet, dekho ye kya kar raha hai?

Geet is still angry….

Maan: Geet, lagta hai ki ye bhi mujhse gussa ho gaya, kaise laat martha hai?

Geet: aur maro app ke papa ko

Maan: Toh ye bhi mama’s boy nikla? Lagtha hai ki mujhe hamesha single man army hi rehna padega

Maan: ye mera bhi baby haina? Aur ye Mansi ka bhi baby hai, tum isaka khyaal nahi rakhogi toh Mansi ko bhura lagega na?

Mansi ka naam sunthe hi Geet utjaathi…

Geet: I’m sorry Maan, mujhe patha nahiein kya kar rahi hoon, Mansi ke bina ye pariwar adhura hai, mujhe patha hai ki mein galti kar rahi hoon, chotu ko aur sab ko pareshan kar rahi hoon, lekhin mein kya karoon Maan? Aap hi bathao

Maan pulls her into a hug…

Maan: mein sab samajh sakta hoon Geet, tum udaas mat hojao, iss baar koi galti nahi hogi, mein lawyer ke office se hi aaraha hoon, iss bar hummari Mansi humme mil jayegi, mein bhi dekhta hoon ki kaun humme rokhtha, koi kuch bhi nahi kar sakte

Geet: sach? Toh wada karo ki aap iss bar Mansi ko ghar lekhe hi aayenge

Maan: I promise, ye Maan Singh Khurana ka wada hai, Mansi apne bhai ko swagat karne ke liye zaroor aajaayegi

Geet is happy as she knows that Maan stands by his words….

Geet: mujhe aap pe pura bharosa hai Maan

Maan: phir ye Darna warna chod do aur khana khalo

Geet looks at the plate…

Ranno has made dal palak and lauki ki sabji…

Geet ko ye bilkul pasand nahi hai….

Geet looks at Maan disappointed…

Geet: Maan, isse kaun Katha,? Mere baby ko aap ye khilaoge?

Maan knows what’s coming up…

Maan smiles…. : Toh baby ko kya chahiye?

Geet thinks for a while…

Geet: hmm, koi chat pata chahiye

Maan: chat pata?

Geet: Maan, aap ne bhi kuch khaya nahi hoga, hum bahar jaake kuch achcha khana khathe hai, iss Ranno ke haath ke khana khaake baby bore ho gaya

Maan: that’s a good idea Geet, chalo chalo, jaldhi tayaar ho jao

Maan doesn’tn’t like the sulking Geet at all, he wants to see his bubbly Geet… he wants to divert her from her worries…

He takes her out for dinner and later on, they go for a long drive….

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