MG FF Oh Saathi re.. thread 2 updt Epilogue pg 45 Apr 14

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Link to First Thread...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5220621/mg-ff-oh-saathi-re-thread-2-link-jan-6-pg-150



Part – 86


Maan is not there to create problems for anyone…

He knows that Tara would get angry with anyone who goes against her wishes…. She wouldn’t even spare her mother…..

Ritu is trying to pedal… her wheels are stuck….

Maan helps to release them and helps her pedal…

Ritu is happy… she starts to pedal….

Nani: hare, rukho, hum andar jaake khelte hai, Rituuuu, rukho

Mansi: papa aagaye, papa aagaye

Maan goes to see Mansi…

Mansi jumps from her Nani’s arms into Maan’s….

Maan hugs her and kisses her…

He also gives her chocolates…

Mansi is very happy… she tries to open the wrapper…

Maan: abhi nahi, badh mein Ritu ke saath share karke khana, you are my girl haina? my sweet princess

Maan takes them from her and gives them to her Nani…

Nani: aap yahan kyun aaye? Jaldhi chale jao, warna Tara aajayegi

Maan: mein bas apne beti se milne aaya hoon

Mansi: papa, Mansi cycle, achcha haina?

Maan: bahut achcha, aap bhi chalaoge?

Maan puts her on the cycle… he helps her pedal…

Ritu has gone ahead…

Mansi: Ritu Ritu

Mansi tries to catch up….

Maan pushes the cycle from behind to help her reach Ritu….

Then he lets them to race…

Maan follows them…

They reach the nearby park…

And they meet their friends… they show their cycles to their friends…

They forget the cycle and go play with them in a moment…

Their Nani is after them…

Maan decides to leave for he doesn’t want Tara to know he is here….

Maan: mein kal aatha hoon

Nani: ye sahi nahi hoga

Maan: kyun, kal Mansi ki birthday hai, mein uske papa hoon, mujhe meri beti se milne se koi bhi nahi rokh sakta, aap chahe toh aapki beti ko achche se samjhana

Nani is helpless, beti uski baat ko kahan sunti… yehi beti baat sunke aayi hai har waqt….

Maan goes home….

Geet is eagerly waiting…

As soon as she sees him she starts her inquiry…

Geet: aap kahan chale gaye? Mujhe chodke aaise kya kaan tha? Hum Mansi se milne aaye hai, hum jaake milthe hai, ye dekho meine uske liye ye cute dress bhi kareeda hai, kal Mansi yahi pehnegi, kit a cute lagegi hummari princess, haina?

Geet goes on non stop…

Maan: mein Mansi se milke aaya hoon

Geet: kya? Aap Mansi se milke the? Usko saath lekhe aathe, shamko wapas bhejthe hum, aaj hummare saath rehti, mein uske liye cookies aur pudding banathi

Geet has been looking into a lot of kids recipes which she wants to try for Mansi…

Maan: Geet, tumme ho kya gaya hai? Tum jaanthe haina ki kya chal raha hai

Geet: phir toh mujhe bhi aapke saath le jaathe, mein bhi hummari beti se milthi, maa hoon mein uski, mujhe bhi haq hai

Maan: mein bas park mein usko dhoor se dekh ke aaya hoon, choron ki tarah chup chup ke apni hi beti ko dekhna itna aasaan nahi hai Geet, tum woh nahi kar sakti

Geet: mein kyun chupoongi, mein seedhe jaake apni beti se miloongi, kiske himmat hai mujhe rokhne ki? Mein kissi se darthi nahi, ye toh aap bhi jaanthe ho

Yahi problem hai, Maan is afraid that Geet would lose her senses if anyone stops her… she is someone who will retreat without a fight… that would be a problem with the matter still in the courts ….

Maan pehle hi pareshaan hai aur Geet toh usko aur pareshaan kar rahi hai…

But Geet will never give up her rights over Mansi, she might be her step mother but she has all the rights in her mother’s absence, even Maan can’t take away her rights as a mother, he can only claim his rights as a father…

Geet: mein kuch nahi jaanthi, ye sab aapki problem hai, mein ek maa hoon aur mujhe apni beti se milna hai, kal bhi mujhe chodke jaane ki sochna bhi mat

Maan: mein tumse yahi baat karna chahta tha, kal wahan tumme koi insult karega toh mein bhi chup nahi rahoonga, pehle hi tumme kamakaam pareshaan karke rakha hai usne, ye meri mamla hai, kissi ko koi haq nahi tumme issi beech laane ki, tum meri wife ho aur mein tummari beizatti harkiz barsdhast nahi kar sakta, samjhi tum?

Geet: jaise hi mein aapki wife hui mein Mansi ki maa bhi ho gayi, aur ye aapka mamla nahi hai, ye hummara mamla hai kyunki Mansi hummari beti hai

Maan: issiliye mein iss shadhi ko postpone karna chahta, mein nahi chahta ki tum iss mamle mein kamakaam phaso aur mere saath saath tum bhi takleef sehlo

Geet: shadhi ho ya na ho, meine tab se aapke saath dene ki faisla kar liya hai jab se aap ne mera saath dena shuru kiya tha, kya aap ne shadhi ke liye mere saath diya tha? Nahi na? Toh mein kyun aap ki saath nahi doongi?

Maan: tumme samjhaana namunkhin hai kyunki tum samajhna hi nahi chahti ho

Geet: mein sab samajh gayi, aap ko hi samajhna hai

Maan is not ready for further arguments…

He goes out to save any fighting…

Geet understands his plight and knows that it’s better to leave him alone… .

That night Maan skips dinner and Geet doesn’t interfere for he must be thinking about the past, he lost someone on the same day…

He should be still remembering her… Geet is ready to give him his space… she knows that this is not her time to interfere….

Next day….

Maan is still sulking….

Geet is eagerly waiting to meet Mansi…

Geet has only seen her a couple of times… will she remember Geet?

Geet knows that it’s not going to happen overnight, Mansi is still a child, she is living with her Nani and Tara from birth… she will need sometime to accept Geet as her mother…

Geet only wants to make friendship with Mansi as of now… Mansi got comfortable with Geet even on their first meeting… friendship ki shuruwat bhi hui hai…

But today she will be with her family…. She might not even remember Geet, Geet should be patient, that’s the wise thing to do now….

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 86


Fascinating and so Interesting


Maan sees his ex mother in law and Mansi

and it seems like Tara has given her mother orders that

Maan and Mansi should never meet

she is just been mean and ugly

Mansi loves her Papa

and Maan also loves his daughter , he surely has a right to be in her life

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Congratulations for new thread

Nice part , Geet is very excited about mansi's birthday but Maan don't want to take her stress .🥺

Thank you for update ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice update 👍

Geet is right and can't wait to see what happens in mansi birthday

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Posted: 3 years ago
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86

congrats for new thread


great update

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Congrats for new thread


Nice update


Maan meets mansi n mansi happy to see her dad

Sweet child


Geet was eager to meet mansi n maan left alone to meet her ... As always maan wants to safe guard geet


Geet is still same n so as maan ... Both Always try to make other understand their point n than argument


Geet is so excited for mansi s Bday ... Hoping for something good

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks for the pm and update


Part 86

Marvelous update..... nicely written

feeling for Maan and Mansi

Tara's mom is so scared of her

liked that Mansi is so excited to see her papa

great that he helps Mansi to pedal

at least he got to spend a few minutes with her

glad that he told Tara's mom that he will attend Mansi's bday

he indeed has a right to after all he is Mansi's dad

Tara is so selfish and mean

she should realise what she is doing

not surprised that Geet bought a dress for Mansi

so Maan tells Geet he met Mansi

as expected Geet wants to meet Mansi

well Maan reminds her of the situation

but she is adamant

Maan explains his point

of cos he will not keep quiet should Tara insult Geet

loved that Geet has accepted Mansi wholeheartedly

Maan does not want Geet to get hurt

she is Maan's saathi and will always stand by him

Maan needs to be alone and Geet understood this

Geet wants to be Mansi's friend for now


update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Maan met mansi but his ex mil afraid of Tara so she told him to go before Tara come

Geet in her excitement forget that case in court so Tara won't let them meet mansi easily

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Congratulations for the new thread...

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Interesting..


Geet is excited about meeting mansi on her birthday... Maan is worried ..


Hope ab koi problem na ho..

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