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Chapter 17

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Chapter 17

Wonderful update… magnificently written

poor Maan lol is forced to take Nyra shopping

of cos he tries to get out of it

alas Geet was adamant

Maan was harsh calling Nyra a weasel

aww Nyra was excited to go shopping with her best friend

ha ha Maan was overdramatic

as expected Nyra tests his patience

at least he took care of Nyra

ahh Nyra managed to shop

finally they were home

Gosh Maan wanted Nyra to lie

liked when she told Maan to calling her weasel

Nyra was indeed displeased seeing Rahul there

oh she feels uneasy with his presence

he is not fit to be a father

Rahul ruined his relationship with Nyra

adore Geet and Nyra's moments

Nyra is so cute

as expected Geet was shocked seeing the number of shopping bags

Maan immediately justifies

nice that Geet taunts Maan

Maan's concern for Geet was reasonable

Rahul was incensed that Geet sent Nyra shopping with Maan

hate that he threatened Geet

admire how Geet dealt with Rahul

agree with Geet that Rahul was just a donor

glad that Nyra ignored him

good that Geet told Rahul to leave

oh Rahul went to confront Maan

Maan handled the situation well

disgusted with Rahul's behavior

he deserved that punch

Geet was not perturbed with what happened

wow Savitri hit Rahul with her cane

Kiara was right that Rahul is a loser

Geet is better off without him

pleased that Geet is going on a date

she looks beautiful

loved Maan teasing Geet

enjoyed their banter

nice that he complimented Geet

Indu was correct that Geet needed a night off

hmm Geet was not sexually attracted to Aryan

she was amazed seeing Maan with his date there

why did Maan go the same restaurant

Gosh Maan ruined Geet's date and chased him away

well she returned the favour

hmm so he did that deliberately knowing Aryan's character

now Maan and Geet are on a date without realizing it

update soon

Amazing update.

Geet make maan to take nyra for shopping.

As geet wants to complete her project as nearing to deadline.

As usual maan doesn't wants to go.

Its make u laugh after seeing d condition of maan while taking nyra to shopping.

Nyra doesn't wants to talk with Rahul now.

Geet went to date n co incident maan also came to same hotel with his date.

Poor Maan got stuck taking Nyra shopping. And came home with everything under the sun.

Rahul got a well deserved beating. Even the grandma got into action.

Maan showed up there on purpose. And ran her date off.

Looks like they are on the date now. Its a first.

Amazing update... Loved it...

Rahul got it good.. He deserves more though...

Chap 17

Lol Maan and Nyra’s shopping trip was hilarious 😆

Lol I love how Maan’s dadi had hit Rahul and forced him to get out 😂

I believe it was intentional of Maan to have gone to the same restaurant that Geet went to! Both of them forced each other’s dates out 😝

Maan specifically asked her if she was only looking to date or wanted a sexual partner as well so will they somehow start some sort of a relationship together? Maan isn’t the serious type and Geet likely wouldn’t indulge with Maan however Maan surely finds her attractive!

Can’t wait to know what will happen next???