SS ~ Heart on the Line ~ Note page 44 - Page 11

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rahul blame geet as he not able to keep nyra happy n also hurt geet by saying that she is a bad mother

enjoyed the conversation between geet n indu

Nice update. Rahul is really a pain calling her a bad mother.

As always enjoyed the update. No surprise that the ex-husband upset their daughter. They described him well as an ass. Can’t wait for more Maan, Geet and Nyra and Papa bonding.

Please update again soon🥰

How rude how can he hurt his own kid. Crazy dude. Geet is so better off without him

aww maan not knowing how to answer baby. And geet enjoying his no knowledge about kids

love their bonding maan pepper geet and darling baby

Nice update..

Rahul is blaming geet as bad mother..

Geet nyra to park and found maan and pepper at park..

Waiting for next update..

thanks for updating😃

you made my Sunday 🤗

Chapter 8

Dynamic update... Fabulously written

at least Maan and Geet got to know each other

This Rahul 😡

he cannot even handle Nyra

I cannot understand what Geet saw in him

hate how he treats Nyra

wonder how he will treat the baby?

at least Geet consoled her

I am dismayed with Rahul's arrogance and attitude

he always blames Geet for everything

liked that Geet put him in his place

how dare he tell Geet she is a rubbish mother?

Geet is an amazing and loving mom

she always puts Nyra first

In fact he is a terrible and useless father

he is the one that made Nyra cry

feeling for Geet

hope she does not let this get to her

nice that Nyra distracted Geet

great that Geet decided to take Nyra to the park

as expected Nyra wanted to take Pepper

sad that Maan was not at home

glad that Nyra is enjoying herself at the park

wow Maan was already at the park

Loved Maan interacting with Nyra

Nyra was so happy seeing stwanger and papa

adore Nyra cribbing to Maan

well Maan does not know what to say Nyra

Nyra indeed has so much energy lol

not surprised that Maan is the eye candy for all ladies at the park

Indu is defn interested in him

she seems nice

I guess that Geet will make friends with Indu and Maya

and the kids will bond

update soon

Chapter 8

Brilliantly written!!!

Liking the progression of maan & geet’s relationship

Rahul is a complete ass !!!

He not only sucks as a husband but as a father as well

The way he insulted geet’s mothering skills was in unfathomable!!!

He himself has zero parenting skills & he is blaming geet !!! And geet was financially supporting him as well !!

His mom doesn’t sound much better.... not even bathing the child .

How did geet fall in love with this lowlife ??

Hmmm, Indu seems like an interesting character...,. Will she be maan’s new love interest ??? I hope not ...... hoping she will become geet’s friend .

Thank you so much for updating

Very well written!!!

Y rahul took nyra when he and his mom not want to do anything fr nyra

Rahul again blame her fr spoiling nyra

New entry indu

Great part

Omg enjoyed maans reaction to nyra.. the way he could hit express what to say

Hope he ables to interact more with her

Cont soon

Loved the update. Hate Rahul for being an ass though. Like who does that to your own kid. I wish Maan could see how big of an ass Rahul is, or either or Geet's brothers, or her father. Someone who could bash his head in.

Waiting eagerly for the next update!!