SS ~ Heart on the Line ~ Note page 44 - Page 9

This Maan is very different, jovial and with no signs of the usual business tycoon image! Geet’s ex husband is a pain😡 hope he won’t start brainwashing the baby girl

thanks for the continuous updates

Chapter 7

Lovely update, wonderfully written

hate Rahul attitude's

sad that he is not interested in Nyra's talks

she is so happy seeing him and he just nods

what kind of a father is he?

Geet's anger is justified

upset that that Rahul blames Geet?

would he be able to get over it if Geet cheated on him?

he is the one that ruined everything?

was it worth it?

Gosh now he decides to keep Nyra for sleepover

Geet was correct that he should arrange with her

great that she warned him

glad that Geet was firm and took him to court

ha ha Maan has a thing for crazy women!

loved Maan and Geet's convo

oh he invited himself over for pizza

so Maan was impressed with Geet's work

liked Geet teasing Maan

at least they spend time together

enjoyed their game of ten questions

well Maan is not into relationships

nice seeing Geet relaxing

I hope Rahul does not manipulate Nyra

Interesting..

Rahul finally showed up.. But he just appeared without informing...

Nyra is excited to be with him..

At least he doesn't mistreat her..

He is always blaming geet for not getting over itn breaking the family. Just for once ask him to think about it the other way around, if geet would have done that then would he have gotten over it..

Well we all know the answer..

Maan n geet spend some time n are on a way to becoming friends..

Rahul is garbage. I think Nyra will learn what kind of man her father is as she gets older. Maan and his hookups are going to land him beaten up. Love how he invites himself at Geets pizza party, but looks like they becoming good friends. It probably nice to have company though even though she hates the fact she shared a huge pizza with Maan.

Nice update..

Rahul want geet to forget everything..

he is blaming geet for separation..

Waiting for next update..

Sorry for late comments

Chapter 6

Fantastic Chapter

Gurvinder , Maan's father he truly seem a good social man

at first I had thought that he and Kiara may be a little nasty but

it was interesting to see how they all socialize with Geet and Nyra

when Gurvinder asked about Geet's husband immediately Maan decides to stop him

as he probably felt that it would upset Geet

I really liked the flow of conversations though no one touching personal front much

Chapter 7

Fascinating

So Stranger Danger enjoys woman and does not like

having a serious relationship

I had thought that he is in a relationship already with Sameera

though he did tell Geet before that Sameera is a regret

I like that both Maan and Geet are slowly getting to know about the other

probably it can lead to great friendship

Geet and Rahul have a sour relation it almost seem like he wants to be

nasty and wants Geet to regret that she divorced him

Great parts

Just came across your story and concept is too good

Maan and Geet trying to be friends soon

Nyra is so cute

Cont soon

Hello MQ..... looking forward to reading Chapter 8, thanks

Superb story

Totally enjoyed it