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Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations to all Winners


of Part 33


Well Done !!!!



Part 34


Maan and Geet are out shopping and even eating out

but Geet has deliberately taken Maan to her type of shops

just to see if he will feel comfortable or not

and it seems like Maan was very much comfortable

I think Maan can easily fit into any situation accept it and handle it well

so Geet had fear to date Maan because he is rich

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 35


Fantastic and so Awesome


Geet herself can see a difference between Maan

and other rich guys

while he sees that she is happy and smiling smugly

so Maan finally got tired I'm sure by now the drug is out

of his system but his habit of having his alcohol , cigerettes

and occasional drugs will surely make him

crave for it so I somehow think the hard tough days are still to come

he falls alseep and Geet touching feeling and trying to imagine what

it all would feel like until Maan crabs her and sleeps off again

they are cute together

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 36)

Winner: Creampuff ⭐️

Runner-ups: ferdouz,kkiran

SpecialMention: Khwaishfan

EarlyBird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): kavitha_r,NeenaD, sanum23

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Part 37

G-emm...thank you

Maan nods

Then again silence

She again blurts out

G-Are you using me for s*x?

M-It’s more like you are using me for s*x

she laughs nodding

G-Yeah

He raises his eyebrow

M-So are we dating now?

G-No

He wants to say something but stops, instead rolls his eyes ki isse kuch nahi hona

Geet is afraid that her heart will be broken & shattered,pehle se hi defence mechanism taiyaar rakho

According to her logic, when Maan can have all those glamsuper models & all...with all those flawless beauty...why would he choose Geet....with so many flaws...those girls don’t even look like humans

She doesn’t realize that maybe Maan wants to be with a woman who just as flawed as him

G- It was good

She says after realizing that her last retort came out asrude

s-It was

G-Maan

G-Hmm?

G- Do you think I have a loose character?

M-Geet Handa, just cut the crap and stop thinking about it!

Geet chup ho jaati hai

Maan speaks up after a while

M-Geet, have you ever dated?

G-I dated Piyush

M-I mean real dating

G-I dated Piyush

She repeats

M-Piyush is gay

He blurts out

M-Have you dated any real heterosexual men?

Geet ka toh muhh khula khula reh gaya

G -He is not gay! He dated me

Ab Maan kya hi bole

M-You want me to call him & ask?

Maan Piyush ko phone milaata hai

M-Hey Piyush

P-Hi Maan! I..I wasn’t expecting your call...after....

M- I wanted to say sorry to you about what happened when we were in college. I was immature & didn’t know better. At that time, I didn’t know about you being gay, so when you confessed your feelings about me…I was taken aback. I am sorry I humiliated you. I should have just rejected the proposal

P- Its okay. Let bygones be bygones. Let’s meet up and sort things out. Also don’t mention this to my wife…she doesn’t officially know

M-Oh she doesn’t know? I mean I thought you were bi or something coz after college you were dating a girl or something….

P- Yeah, I was dating Geet. By the way, are you still seeing Geet?

Piyush asks cautiously

M-Why? What happened?

P- Nothing…just wanted to caution you….I feel she is not good enough for you…she has some mental problems... I will tell you everything once we meetup

M-Abhi to mushkil hai. Let's talk again later. Bye


Maan brushes him off

Maan hangs up the phone

Pehle toh Geetko lag raha tha ki counter argue kare ki Piyush might be bi-s*xual but ab toh she is shocked by his crassness

It doesn’t matter whether he is gay, bi or Martian...he was bitchy and as Maan says a pure 'a-hole'

She digs her face into the palms of her hand

G-oooo...I always choose wrong men. I even question my judgement now

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 34,35,36,37

Oh my days..... Arre yeh gadha Piyush toh Gay nikla yaar.... Khud hi ek problem hai woh Geet ko mental kehraha hai idiot. What am I hearing Piyush Maan ko propose ki tha arre wah kya twists diya hai kahani me... Didi your really brilliant... I think now Maan and Geet can finally be together... 😁🤗 sorry for the late response...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Piyush is completely a disappointment,

Them as a duo is completely adorables...

Looking forward to further..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ohh Piyush is such a bad person good his truth out in front of geet hope now geet agree to give maan chance and start dating him

Update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

Geet is surprise when maan want to eat in small shop bz she thought every rich person like piyush status conscious and she's happy seeing him with her causally but bechara maan get tired and slept after reaching home geet came close to see if he actually sleeping or pretending but she lost in him and now she get trap in his arms

Hope soon realise she loved him

Y not his bodyguard searching fr him is he instruct them


Well, i dont think Maan in this story ever had a bodyguard. Hence he himself carries a gun

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kkiran

Is she trying to get him better or learn that he can stay in an area that is not posh. He clearly is not having any trouble staying with her. OMG Geet u have no sense of distance....Creepy there u tracing his face while he is asleep like LOL These 2 are something else.


Geet u have no sense of distance.


🤣I loved this line

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks for the pm! hope you are fine!

Congrats to the winners! well deserved


Part 35

Phenomenal update! awesomely written

sad that Geet judges Maan without knowing him.

like how you portrayed their inner thoughts

wish they would voice out what they are feeling

nice seeing the comfortableness with each other

of cos Maan is exhausted and well asleep

at least she closed the curtains

Loved how she admires Maan and touches Maan

wow she is thinking about the times that they kissed

gosh I thought she would be caught by Maan

but he just traps in his arms

well she is unable to move

I guess she will fall asleep as well


Question to Maan

what is bothering you that lead to you taking drugs?


Question to Geet

will you date Maan?


update soon


Thanks dear for the wonderful comments. Sorry I am not able to take on the questions. super busy with work, but will surely answer them. Keep them safe with you

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Chapter 35

Bewitching update !!! 👏👏👏👏👏

Geet’s nakhre are so adorable ..... .. she is pleased by the simplest things like maan carrying her heavy groceries.... like she won some sort of unattainable accomplishment..... 😆....... her world is small & she thinks that maan cannot survive in her simple world but she is totally wrong b/c when maan & geet’s worlds collide it will earth-shattering bliss.

I don’t think no one else could put up with either of their perplexing personalities 😆

& geet really doesn’t know how to social distance ...... inching closer & closer 😆but do you blame her when her handsome hunk is sleeping in her bed

Loved the ending where she slept in his arms 😃 happy dance time !!!!

Can’t wait to see their reactions when they wake up !!

Thank you for the bewitching update & pm


Geet really doesn’t know how to social distance


🤣I guess she will be total fail in this pandemic world

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