MG FF: In the dark between stars||Note page 38|| - Page 16

Part 2

Geet was only 13 when she was teased. Oh she was too small. And now when she is blossoming into a young girl she wants a boyfriend. Just like any teenager. Haha she can't get one because she has Prem in her life.

Shocked to read the second part of the update. Maan , the cool guy is actually a victim for abuse. Never ever imagined the story would turn like this. My heart went out for him seeing him out in the cold like a homeless.

Wonder what will Geet do. She already feel bad for him as she looking out for him secretly.

I loved the poem and now I can very well relate it to the FF name.

Oh shocked to know that maan is suffering never realize that behind the happines

A broken child is hidden

Gopd he shared it with geet atkeast some one is her not to judge her both r nt friends but tgeir bond is developing n like geet family that they care fr him but maan dont want any one to find out he still cares fr his dad that he is the only famiky hao dad really heartless to beat a child geet os innocent but she is also strong girl to support maan n care fr him

They start understanding eachother

Oh jay os toatlly latoo on geet🤣 but afraid from prem like prem is a protective bro fr geet

N persoanl bg of geet so akbir always shut up n thinks before teasing her like the bonding bw siblings 😊

Plzzz uodate soonnnnnn waiting fr next part

OMG i feel so bad for maan....My heart just goes out for him , ifelt like crying listening to him ....n above all he is so brave n it really needs a lot of courage to comfront someone dat too a younger girl ....i liked the way det talked it out n geet took a promise to share his feelings with her ,bt everythin has two sides dere must b some reason dat maan's father is such a chronic drinker....

waiting for more n more

i just hate maan's father now how cruel he is....n wat is with him throwing maan out of the house daily.....

geet has become bold n also very intelligent she helped him with food n made sure he is not cold....

maan is 18 now he shud just run away or do something which wud protect him provided he does go outside n has frnds....

I cannot c maan suffer lik dis bt den everyone hs his/her own destiny, maybe its destiny which wants maaneet to come closer in dis way....

I like dis story more coz here geet is strong n i really want to c her strong in the whole story n now being the chui mui girl who after falling in love just becomes the shadow of her lover..

Amazing update.

Kabeer said wrong to geet.

It was not geet fault that she is pretty .

Kiara is really ncy .

She is pretty then she should not go anywhere according to Kabeer.

Maan told his story n his dark side to geet.

It's good that now he will b less burden n feel less pain ..

I am so so so sad...truly heartwrenching to see all that Maan endures in the hands of that monster! I really wish that he would fall & die as a victim of his drunken stupor!!!!! I know I am mean....But nobody....nobody should ever have to go through such hell....ever....

Oh god! I so hate those fellows who are looking at Geet with such low thoughts! But Kabeer blaming her with such filthy words sprouting off his mouth....Its really disgusting & hurting!!! I hope Prem teaches him a good lesson...a lesson he never forgets...and learns to be a responsible brother to Geet...

Actually I was thinking if Geet would by any chance go overseas for her studies? If she did, could she bring Maan along too on a sponsorship of some sort by Prem? I hope Prem suggests this in view of how Kabeer is and the need to straighten him up...So Kabeer would naturally pull Maan along...I know...its my wishful thinking but yaar was just thinking of how Maan can possibly be saved from that monster....

Hey just started reading your this story and loving the concept.

Poor maan ....he is bearing so much and not sharing with his.

Geet atleast there to give him little bit support.

Kabir has a problem with Geet looking like a geek or beautiful.

Loved the interaction between Geet and Kiara, you brought out the teenager meeting the brother's girlfriend.

The way you ended the chapter was fab. The last 4 lines 👏 kudos to you.