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Posted: 6 years ago

What! But who is Tia and how is Geet related to her? That Maan accuses her like this? Is Tia Maan's wife or sister? Or bestie? Is Tia the one in coma? And Piya is her baby that is confirmed...I am now so intrigued as to what is Geet's fault in all of this that Maan is accusing her of...Eager to read next part to see if Geet knows Tia...

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Posted: 6 years ago

why maan torturing her sooooooooooo much..........nw m really very curious to knw d reason behind all dis..........why he is doing all dis?


scary update n painful too.........


loved it........

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Posted: 6 years ago

Superb update

Geet thinks maan take advantage of her when she not conscious and maan enjoy this bec it’s gives him immense satisfaction and Geet accuse maan for Priya mother condition which angers maan more so blame Geet for priya mother condition

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Posted: 6 years ago

kya kya geet ne?.......maan kyun geet se itna nafrat karta hai?


nice update..........


loved it.........

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Posted: 6 years ago

Intriguing Chapter


Maan was happy that Geet believed his lie and seeing her tears

made him at peace but when she stood naked asking him to misbehave with

her now he was shocked and lowering his eyes slapping her to keep her away

this shows that Maan is a decent man he is not after Geet's body but yes he wants her to be in pain .

Geet hearing a sound and goes and check only to see a baby crying

she takes the bay and little Piya stops crying on getting Geet's warmth but

Maan snatches Piya from Geet accusing her of trying to harm the baby

and Geet getting angry shouted back at Maan that he must have tried to kill

the baby's mother and this broke Maan instantly and he almost pleads telling Adi that he love Tia then how can Geet say he tried to harm her

so Tia is Maan's love and the baby is hers while Maan blames Geet and tries to give her pain because of his situation

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Posted: 6 years ago

nice update

this part is emotional and relieving their inner pain

geet is devastated by maan's actions

and also admire the baby hope she will make nice bond to the child

maan is very angry and pain now but that does not gave right to misbehave geet eventhough that was his first and foremost motive

can't wait for next update

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Posted: 6 years ago

PART - 7



Maan enraged. He left the mansion. Adi knew he don't do any thing stupid but he can't denied the truth that he was disturbed,and he needs to check upon him.

Geet was numb,scared and in shock. Her breath was chocked. Piya's nanny made her sat on bed and stroked her back while giving a glass of water to her. Adi keep two guards there to keep en eye on Geet. He left to follow Maan.

Maan reached to hospital. He was restless and only found solace with a person who was laying dead on hospital bed. "Tia please open your eyes. Do you know what she said? She said i hurt you." while holding her limp hand he pleads. Maan caressed her head. "But you don't worry. I will punish her. What she did with you,i will never forgive her." His eyes shed tears. "But Tia please wake up. Your Piya needs you."



FLASHBACK:-




MAAN: Piya? Ye kaisa naam hai?

TIA: shut up Maan. Its a very cute name plus rhyme with my name. You know in future when ever i get a chance to become mother i want baby girl. Or uska yahi naam hoga samjhe tum.

MAAN(laughed): and what if boy born? You name him papaya?

Maan teased Tia and she grew angry. She hit him and Maan ran to save himself. Tia running behind him and hit against the couch.

TIA: ouch..

MAAN: Tiaaaa....



FLASHBACK ENDS.....




Tears and smile both were there on his face. But all suddenly changed when he looked at Tia. "Piya, yahi naam rakhna chahti thi na tum apni beti ka? Tia maine woi naam diya hai use. But Tia she don't even got a chance to feel your warmth,or ye sab us Geet ki wajhse." his voice broken and hopes shattered bit by bit. Corner of his eyes turn red not with anger but the pain he endured since the day he brought Tia here, drenched in her own blood pool. The flashes of that moment is still green. Maan leaned over her and kissed on her forehead.

Adi glance them from outside,but not come inside. He was in peace that Maan was here. Maan rest his head on her lifeless hand. She was breathing with the help of life support system only. He stayed with her. His heart only found solace near her.

Whole night Maan spend in hospital room,near Tia and came back to KM when sun dawn. He was completely forgotten about locking Geet before leaving so he straight went to the dark room where he use to kept her. He entered and found the room empty. His temper goes high and he bursts on all servants.

"sssir wo Piya baby ke room me hai." one of his servant informed and he rushed towards the room.

Maan was struggling with so many emotions in just few seconds. Fear and anger both. With a jerk he entered but the view fumed him more. Geet was sleeping on the bed. Maan raised his hand to dragged her out of the bed but another old hand clenched his fist and stop him from doing something. He stare her furiously but before he burst on her,she took him aside. "Maan baba Geet ko uthane se pehle ye dekh lo." she showed him from other side and his eyes widened with shock. Piya was clunged to her. Maan's anger towered.

"daija aap aise kaise kar sakti hai?" he gritted his teeth and fists his hands.

"Because i want Piya's health first. Do you know after how many days Piya slept peacefully. Two month baby and not a single day of proper sleep. Maan baba apko pata hai in dono ka fever kal raat se kam hone laga hai. May be you don't know but i know Geet too had a high fever. That night when i changed her clothes,her body was heated with high fever. Pls Maan baba let both sleep." she tried to convince him but Maan was only staring Geet in anger. Her proximity with Piya was not acceptable for him. When daija not got any reply she spoke to him again. "okay Geet k liye na sahi par Piya baby k liye hi maan jao. If you awake Geet and parted both then Piya's sleep get disturb and she start crying. Do you want her to cry?"

This was something which Maan can't handle. He can't see little soul in pain and only for her sake he spare Geet. "jaise hi Piya uthegi ise iske room me wapis jana hoga." he declared and left disappointed. Maan changed and Adi came to check him. Seeing him he got relief. "kaisa hai tu?" he asked and Maan signals only him. "okay one good news for you. What we plan for him is on last stage. Till evening you got the result."

Maan rested his hand on couch. "now that b*****d know what he had done. Mr. Handa khud use uski aukat dikhayenge." his eyes and voice reflect the storm he planned for his enemy.

Edited by Gurti_Maaneet - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update

Maan is remembering tia

Later when he went home he was angry that Priya is with Geet

But he stop himself just for Priya

Adi tell Maan that soon Vikram will be out

As Mr. Handa will know his truth

Thanks for PM

Update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome part. Maan left to meet his friend tia and was sad to see her lifeless

Maan and also planned something for Vikram

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Posted: 6 years ago

maan geet k barein mein pata toh karo pehle........shayad woh begunah ho........maan kahin bewajah geet per zulum toh nehi kar rahe ho......kya kisine aur dosh kisi aur per.........


lovely update.............


loved it...........

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