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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
Part 1

Maan-Arjun-Karan...best friends trio...sounds nice...together since childhood and the fact that they make Maan forget his worries is nice...:)
oh Poor Maan...stuck between his parents...
its true that its always the child who suffers the most in a failed marriage and I guess the same is happening with Maan...
in trying to prove who loves their son the most, they are troubling Maan and he is getting irritated obviously
(Arjun is so cute...trying to get benefit after seeing the photos...LOL...make pe chauka...)

we usually have one friend like arjun

Dadaji seems to be strong character and I am glad Maan has his grandparents and his friends in his life to cope up with his troubles caused by his parents...
loved how calmly Karan makes Maan understand...
am guessing Karan is the more sensible one and Arjun the more naughty one...all in all makes a balance in Maan's life...:)

oh yes, maan's friends are kind of balancing him and you will get to see them a lot in the coming updates too.😊

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: m32223
Interesting start...😊
Maan having a very troubled childhood.. glad he had his granparents to take of him.
Poor Maan is getting pulled in the tug of war between his parents..😆
Hope his grandfather comes to helps him to come out of this situation too..
Its amazing to have friends like Karan and Arjun (is it SRK-SK pair😛)

thanks, this is first time i have written something where maan's parent's are not nice.

no its not SRK-SK pair

they are my imaginary characters.

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
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fascinating update! superbly written! feeling for Maan! can understand him! his parents do not care about him! sad that they just impose on Maan! his anger is justified!

at least Maan has his dadaji and dadima! glad he confided in his friends!

Karan and Arjun are wonderful friends!

thanks, chetna

maan had a troubled childhood

his friends are more of a family

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Prabh

@MomiArti

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#34

Superb part.poor maan struck between their parents ego.maan love geet but she dont gave him bhaav.waiting for their past.

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 6 years ago

#35

Part 2

Maan indeed has a good relationship with his grand parents...his dadima is fussing over him just like any worried mother and I liked it...the thought that Maan had to grow up without a mother's love was unsettling but now that we know Dadima was there for him, it makes it pleasant...:)

also loved how Maan denied having anything at the cafe knowing that dadima would be waiting for him...

My heart went out to Maan knowing that he wanted constant attention from his parents...even against his grandparents wish...Poor boy...loved the support and love he got from Karan and Arjun...so sweet of them...

loved his idea of a wife...

oh so they know Geet since school...that is interesting...

hehe...seriously Arjun is fun...:)

LOL...looking forward to read more about Geet...:)

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Fast update great

Oops meri nazar na laage

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#37

maan is little bit correct thinking that he is doing wrong with his grandparents giving more importance to his parents who are very much selfish

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

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Posted: 6 years ago

#38

Awesome update maan grandparents eagerly waiting for maan to come unlike his parents who least care about him or his emotions poor maan craved for his parents love who only was busy competing themselves masn friends tried to make him understand that if he married he should find girl of his choice and masn choice is geet but geet jhalli doesn't gives a damn to him

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 6 years ago

#39

Part 2

Impressive update! superbly written!

feeling bad for Maan but at least he had his grandparents! can understand SD's concern for him! Maan also loves and cares for them!

sad that Maan wanted his parents love... but never got it! they only cared about their ego!

Adore the bond between Maan, Karan and Arjun! they know Maan so well! can understand Maan's feelings!

great that Maan revealed the attributes of his ideal life partner!

so Maan likes Geet! lovely choice!

hate that cos of Arjun, Geet will never look at Maan!

waiting for Geet's entry!

Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 6 years ago

#40

Lovely update. Maan's grandparents are waiting for Maan for dinner. Maan with his friends is discussing the problem in which he is stuck. He does not want to get married to a girl of any of his parents choice. Arjun and Karan realised that there is some girl whom Maan likes. On asking Maan told them about Geet Handa. Both are shocked as the only Geet they knew was their schoolmate of eight years ago.

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