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suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Endgame
Nice update
She has so good gurdiands like own parents
Her chacha chachi treat her like own

Thank you for commenting

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suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
Part 3

Nice to know that Geet had her chachaji and chachiji to cope without parents...and her brij veerji too...
Can understand how difficult must have been for her...
She is a doll to have thought of sharing the shoulder with her chachaji
But loved their love and concern for Geet

Am glad Maan cleared his conscious by letting it all out in front of his Dadima...guess it was needed for him

Waah Arjun...abhi preeti chahiye huh? Great...
Aur kya kya kaand kiye hai inhone school mein?

Maan toh bas apni Geet ko dhund raha hai...:)

Loved the part
Vaise missed Karan here
Suhaana...who have u imagined Arjun and Karan as? Like which actors? And preeti?
Would like to know that

thanks for commenting sahiba

yes, geet feels that she should shoulder some responsibilities despite knowing that her family never wants any kind of discomfort for her..

hahah, you missed Karan don't worry you will get to see him and arjun in next part along with preeti

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suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: m32223
Geet's past has been covered in this chap.
Maan and Geet kinda have a similar past..
They both had their relatives taking care of them..the only difference is Geet has lost them permanently and Maan even having his parents his kinda parentless😭

Geet has too much on her plate ATM to even focus on Maan lol😆
With bad history between the two.. Maan will surely have to be on his toes to please Geet🤣
Reunion party... interesting 😆😆

i agree, geet is very busy to even look at maan, now let's see how he will make her reciprocate his feelings...

thanks for the beautiful comment

what should i call you?

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suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Part 3

superb update! wonderfully written!

Adore the bond that Geet with her chachaji and chachi! Geet and Preet share a wonderful relationship!

glad that Geet got a loving family after her dad died! liked Preeti teasing Geet!

can understand Maan's feelings! great that dadi assures him!

wow going to meet Geet! not surprised that Preet recognized them!

as expected Maan is searching for Geet!

School reunion?

update soon!

thanks chetna

Oh, yes school reunion, well maan needs some plan to reintroduce himself to geet😆

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suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: cutical
Nice finaly maan na arjun here to invite g eet fr school reunion um smart boys
Hate taya n tayi for hurying geet selfish persons
Good to see that her uncle n aunt care fr her n treated her like their own daughter

there are so many people like taya and taiji of geet

thanks for commenting

i am glad you liked the update

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suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
A clear picture of Geet's life
They are so similar... unlucky yet lucky ... her chacha chachi best parents
It's hard to find people like them ...
Geet so paraku good good ... Liked preety she is wity may be perfect for arjun let's see

thanks for commenting sabina

i am glad you are liking geet's family

yes, maan's and geet's situation are kind of same. let's see it would help them to connect with each other

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suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#107

TEASER

It has been some three hours passed since Arjun and Maan had returned and for the first time in his life, Maan has realised that having a friend like Arjun has its own side effects.

Maan was pacing like a caged lion in his room, when Karan entered the room and saw that the room was a mess, everywhere things were discarded, the pillows were on the floor and magazines lying around on the sofa carelessly instead of the shelf. Amidst of all Arjun was lying comfortably on the bed. He was looking very pleased about something..

What happened now? Why did you call me.. yar tum dono na kisi din mera Bina shadi ka divorce karwoge... Badi mushkil se toh plan banaya tha Nandini ke saath, ab woh naraz hogi wo alag... Tum dono dost Kam Dushman jyada ho.. ranted Karan as he settled down on the other side of the bed..

Dushman.. Haan Kyun nai , Dushman toh ye Arjun hai hi mera.. pata hai kya Kiya hai isme.. Maan said in an irritated tone..

Ab kya Kiya isne.. asked Karan as he turned towards Arjun who was now glaring at Maan..

Ek toh madad karo upar se suno.. oh bhai, isse acha mauka nai milega geet se Milne ka, aur bhai tujhe kya lagta hai tu Bina kisi help ke usse baat bhi kar payega.. Preeti Naam ki bodyguard hai uski.. Arjun was rambling when Maan angrily replied..

Haan.. wohi Preeti jiske saath flirt karne ki naakam koshish aaj tak jaari hai teri.. the taunting and fight was going on when Karan stopped them..

Are.. chup dono.. koi batayega kya hua hai...

Isse Pucho.. school reunion ke liye geet Ko invite karke aaya hai.. snapped Maan and Karan all while confused looked at Arjun making some sense..

Konsi reunion.. Jahan tak mujhe pata hai... Ek hamara hi Lauta school hai jisne aajtak koi reunion nai ki h.. said Karan confused..

Haan toh isme konsi badi baat hai... Ab ho jayegi.. said Arjun making Maan more angry..

Aur kon karwayega.. principal yaad hai ek number ka khadoos hai aur chemistry lab me Aag lagwane wala stunt tujhe lagta hai wo bhul gya hoga..

Arjun made a relaxed face..

Bhai tu alumni hai Sabse successful school ka.. teri baat Kon mana karega.. said Arjun making Maan and Karan roll their eyes simultaneously..

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hey guys seeing the response here, I am really not sure to continue..

between enjoy teaser, next part will be up soon..

Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago