||MG SS - Namesake||Part 4||Page 33|06-02-19 - Page 25

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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice part
Little one is attached to grand parents... He never felt need to reach his parents... Feels bad for madhav's son and dil... They don't have any independence neither felt they needed it... Hope things won't go worse under their nose...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi Jeevana

It took me ages to figure out what copyleft was lol, yeah a numbhead at times lol. I like how your painting a different picture but I suppose I still don't feel empathy for Devika or Madhav, so really can't inderstand their view point. Sorry, maybe because I really didn't have grandparents or at least they pat away even before I could understand tehir importance

Chapter 4

Devika is supportive of the wife, aiding her healing process by looking after the baby which is a good thing I suppose however the husband hasn't yet or let's say isn't allowed to see the wife or the child due to contamination issues, is this because it's based on the old days and sanitisation or let's say infection control was poor then. I feel for the husband though

Soon enough the wife recovers and takes hold of the household and Devika is more of a mother figure. The birth certificate shows the potential problems, that's something I tell you. But from the looks of it, both husband and the wife don't realise the change in shift and happily going by. You can't reallh blame any one member and of course the child would turn to the one he is close to and in his case his grandparents. So does the history repeat itself, is this anothe namesake child?

Thank you and really do want to know who maaneet are in this tale, although I reckon is the husband and the wife
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update jeevana ye Kya tha ok not only madhav son got to see his kid nor got to pick him in his arms so much detachment from his own kid if that wasn't enough the grandparents became ranjits parents and no one had a clue what the hell ye Kya jeevana the kid is close to his grandparents not his own parents ok I get madhav and devika lost their kid but at least they should let the kid jell with his own parents what are these 2 doing
Edited by nakh5683 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Superb update
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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful update. Madhav's son [whom you have not named yet, what's the secret] is craving to see his wife and son. But is not able to meet them due to one or the other reasons. Madhav arranged a big naming ceremony. Registrar come and register baby as Madhav and Devika son Ranjit. Time is passing and Ranjit is growing in the care of his grand parents. No one is known about the blunder that registrar did.
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Posted: 6 years ago
So baby name is Ranjit. It look nice that everyone taking care of Geet. Madhav organise birth ceremony to share his happiness with everyone. Every villager was happy. But a mistake , accidentally Madhav and Devika's name got written on birth certificate and no one realize.
Ranjit got too closed to his grandparents that not need his parents. Its good to see he has so loving and caring grandparents but parents place can't be filled by anyone. Wairing for further update.
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Posted: 6 years ago
hai thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
What is name of madav son
Grandparents become parent's in birth certificate of their grandson
Their son and bahu r so obedient
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Posted: 6 years ago
Part 4

I am getting appalled with the insensitivity of the Madhav and Devika.
Not even once they are thinking about the emotions and feelings of their son and daughter-in-law, even careless and oblivious in front of the birth registrar. Madhav shares his worries with Mohan but not with his son.

Ranjit does not even know if the parents exist 😲
I have same doubt 😲

his senses are very acute as always although he seems to limit his way of expressions and she as always is silent about the happenings and not a word against it for herself or for her husband.

and they are killing their parental emotions and feeling of love towards the child. I am feeling bad for them, but at the same time feeling strange why not even once they are expressing it.
wonderful update..the suspense is intact and the mystery is building up.
Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful update as always. Looking forward to what is in store next as the baby starts getting older.

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