||MG SS - Namesake||Part 4||Page 33|06-02-19 - Page 21

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: preetidhawan

Feeling bad for baby,s parents, baby,s father could not hold his son in his arms😭, Is Devika out of her mind she ordered glass of milk for a newly born baby😲😡 Devika and Madhav both are selfish, hate them



You are not alone in the list of haters...

When was Devika in her mind...😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: priyasree




Awesome n wonderful update





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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: usss

Devika taunt her bahu even when she does all the work before anyone ask and her bahu doesn't complain but thinks that elders do everything best for their children.

Baby boy is born and Devika's pain comes out after holding him. She feels that her baby Ranjeet is returned to her. Devika doesn't let anyone hold the baby even her mother. Hope everything become fine soon with time and devika doesn't become too much possessive for baby.


Lets hope for the best...

what has destiny planned for them
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Part 3

Devika and Madhav are so selfish...
they are concerned just about getting their grandson and are the least bit concerned about their own son and dil...
poor them...the guy could not even rejoice and hold his own baby and his wife could not even nurse her son on her own...

loving this story too much
and the fact that you have not yet mentioned their names in the story is nice


Yep they are...

well everyone has there own way of viewing things...

thank you
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 3

Why Devika is acting as the mother in law who do not like anything that their daughter-in-law will do, I thought she was in grief, less emotionally attached to everything around, but the pain for her loss of the baby has turned her into bitter one, bitter about everything and that includes her son and his wife.
In the house, the daughter in law too became insignificant like her husband..for people their presence may not be felt, but their absence will, because they are significant part of running the house and people do not realize that.
I can see what's going to come next to the parents of the baby when Devika has put herself in-charge for taking care of the baby. Hope they are not kept deprived of showering their love to the child. Hope they express and speak that out if required, there is a way to resolve the issues in the house and of the people you love, and they should use these methods than getting obliged or scared or emotionally blackmailed.
I have a weird feeling about Devika and Madhav, for not caring about the son who is alive, for not talking to him once, not even after the arrival of the baby. Something strange about them, not just them, rather the entire family.



Not just her...but towards everyone...who ever interacts with her has to bear with her bitterness..and once the DIL came she became the point of contact and hence she was the one to bear all


Yes that what happens when you are too efficient in life..😉

Lets see how they shape there life...

well things used to happen differently in yester year generation...so just doing justice to that


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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: uluvmg

wonderful update...very well written...newly wed DIL took the responsibility of all household works still had taunts & some silly mistakes found by her MIL which she had to bear all of it... she was happy with her husband who loved her... wow she gave birth to a baby boy but her FIL handed baby 1stly to her MIL by calling that their son back & her MIL was not allowed to touch by anyone even denied to feed him by his mother...baby's father was witnessed it from distance but both were silent even they were not asked about baby's name & grandparents named ranjit as their son back...excited for next...thanks for pm...!!


Thank you...

yep thats what happened...

sure wait for it...


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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: maansi25

Ch 3

I am reading your story first time
It is somewhat different
Still you haven't given the name to boy and bride

Devika not giving baby even to feed
Waiting for the inevitable to happen


Welcome to my imaginative world then...

if you wish to try other works of mine then here is the link



Well my stories have some suspense's always...

Ya wait for that...
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

I feel that u did injustice to the parents..may be maneet..u havent given them name n still keeping us in suspense..geet is so devoted but what she got..even maan has to see his son from long...arghh jeevana...is our guess correct or the newly born is maan...ufff


well thats what is my story...

you know me for giving suspense in stories...

keep guessing...😆

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 3

Sure after Devika had lost her baby she had changed her persona
while Madhav her husband was the one suffering seeing his wife lost
and aloof throughout these years now when their son brought home
their daughter in law she was supposed to be loved but instead Devika taunted her
and the daughter in law patiently took in all the taunts while she become an important
family member but her presence was taken for granted by all including the servants
thankfully her husband bought gifts to make her smile in happiness and his presence
was her strength now giving birth to their first son both young parents could treasure that
very moment as Madhav had ordered the midwife to hand the baby over to Devika but he was wrong in saying that their son is back to them because now Devika believes in his words and obviously she would not want to part with the baby while their son seeing his parents
so emotionally involved with his baby had to step back
but I do wonder if Devika will ever allow the baby to be with his mother as she already has given her dead son's name to the baby


Well you have summarized the whole update in a right way...

ya thats the plot now...what will Devika do now??

wait to know more
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: neasya

very interesting part...
will be waiting for the next part dear please update soon and thank you for the pm...


Originally posted by: saf24

superb update. The DIL sure handled the house and everything that came her way well. A baby's cry brought out Devika's emotions. Looking forward to what is in store next.



Thank you

wait to know more

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