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Jeevana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: suni_104
Awesome one
Different start for future story
Alone child left behind for sorrow
In past marriage pattern like this elder decision final
Hope marriage bring happiness to family

Thanks

Yes trying to keep the story according to timeline

Hope so

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Sahiba

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Posted: 6 years ago

#112

Congrats on a new story on our Maaneet

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Sahiba

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Posted: 6 years ago

#113

Part 1

Very wrong on the parents' part to have completely neglected their child in the grief of an unborn baby...felt bad for the small boy who was forced to learn the adversities of life on his own...how can they turn so ignorant towards their own baby whom they did cherish in the past...not fair for the child...

really different plot

looking forward to reading it more

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Sahiba

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Posted: 6 years ago

#114

Part 2

Devika has changed a lot over the period of time as suggested by their neighbor

really typical advice given by MOhan...why spoil your kid's life by getting him married just so as to get a kid to play with...ridiculous thought but I guess the thought about your own child is never on their mind as they are so deep in their own pain

he heard a voice in the train and that makes him happy...that is nice...at least he is able to find solace in someone...

loved the way how you depicted him and his wife...that scene was beautiful

did he not recognize her voice?

loved how he understood her wife's silent wish to visit the temple

hoping they both would get happiness in each other

PS: loved the title...really trying to relate it to the context of the story

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preetidhawan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#115

Nice Update

The boy got married at such a young age to fulfill his parents wishes but he got such a wonderful wife a true soulmate and still wondering what type of parents the boy have that they never consider their son,s wishes , they are lost in their own miseries

when we will get the names of the son and his wife

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#116

Lovely Chapter

The young man was mesmerized with the lady's voice in the train

but now it seems he is mesmerized with his wife's sounds

is she the same woman

there does not seem to be much communication though his gestures will soon be

understood by her

so getting the son married Madhav hopes that when a heir arrives his wife will be back to her own self and that is a great possibility because the child would be her son's child

but will this couple develop understanding and love for each other or are they just doing their duties as of what is expected of them

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Jeevana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: MomiArti
Nice update.his and her family fix their marriage without asking them and like obident child they are agree.pls give a character name also.

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Yes they agreed...

You will get that soon

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Jeevana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Part 2

awesome update! wonderfully written!

their families fix their marriage without their permission! he just follows with questioning!

at least both are happy and have adjusted!

update soon

Thank you...

Ya all well has happened

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Jeevana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: custodian75
He overhears his elders talking about his marriage and he does not say anything aloud. The one little wish in his heart is nipped in the bud. He completely accepts his wife though he has trouble saying his thought out loud.

Yes ...😊

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Jeevana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: priyasree

Parents completely ignored him.
Marriage also fixed without his knowledge.
Both bride and groom are happy with each other though they spoke nothing

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Yes 😊