||MG SS - Namesake||Part 4||Page 33|06-02-19

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Rashmi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#91

New Story?

great

Congratulations JP... hope i will be able to read it's epilogue without waiting for years😆

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Rashmi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#92

part 1

ye story Maaneet ki hi hai na?

I just thought to ask because it strates in 1958

Hopefully Maan ya Geet ke dada dadi honge

but i was really thinking hard about the indifference of the parents towards the kid..

What if devika had a misscarraige she already had a son to be taken care of but both parents neglected a living kid just for that baby who could not made it to the world

Obviously the kid had turned in to a silent and timid human being..

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Rashmi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#93

Part 2

Poor man

kam se kam ek naam to de deti un dono ko..

shadi bhi ho gayi but we don't know their name

Maan ke dada dadi hain ya Geet ke?😉

But one thing i must say that he is feeling happy after getting married to his life mate

she too is just like him.. calm and composed

Mujhe darr hai ki Maan ya geet itni asaani se iss duniya me aayenge😆

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swapna.p

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Posted: 6 years ago

#94

Nice update..

Continue soon..

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Shinchan_20

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Posted: 6 years ago

#95

Quite different yet captivating!

You showed two generations in two updates! Quite fast😆

Waiting for Maan and Geet to come

Thanks for pm

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indiegirl

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Posted: 6 years ago

#96

Part 2:
Beautiful update, not a spoken word yet the feelings conveyed are so precious... couldn't have portrayed them so nicely like you did... they really seemed to have bonded so well and have accepted each other whole heartedly... looking forward to reading more of this,
Thanks

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metromasti

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Posted: 6 years ago

#97

interesting updates , but wanna know characters name . madhav & devika ignored their child but when time came , they didn't asked their son's opinion & married him off to someone whose nature is same like their son .

waiting for next

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Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#98

The title pulled me in. I wanted to know what the story is about and I am glad I decided to read this. Devika and Madhav, such beautiful names. It's sad that they didn't let out their grief, didn't even share it with each other at the time it happened. Instead, they chose to withdraw in their shell. Should they have expressed it out, at least to each other, the pain would have lessened. They could have poured more love into the upbringing of their son. Alas, through the thick shroud of grief and loss over their eyes, all they saw was their unborn child. What about the one who lived. His existence just for namesake?

You write very well.

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Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#99

Second chapter and it seems I have started understanding where this might be heading to. I think so but I will love to be surprised.

A child took her away from the world, so a child to bring her back to the world. Will they have a child? Will the child have a name? Would these two people just be a means to an end? What about their individual lives? Their development?

The one who has a sweet voice and an even sweeter fragrance of jasmine about her, that's how I am going to relate to this new girl-woman who has entered the life of our reticent protagonist. And I am also assuming that it is she who he got married to. His Thursday girl. They haven't spoken to each other but the deep soul to soul connection that people aim for has already been established. Kudos to you for the unconventional storyline! Please update soon, I am already waiting.

Edited by Ginnosuke_Nohar - 6 years ago