||MG SS - Namesake||Part 4||Page 33|06-02-19 - Page 14

Originally posted by: indiegirl

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Beautiful update, not a spoken word yet the feelings conveyed are so precious... couldn't have portrayed them so nicely like you did... they really seemed to have bonded so well and have accepted each other whole heartedly... looking forward to reading more of this,
Thanks

Originally posted by: metromasti

interesting updates , but wanna know characters name . madhav & devika ignored their child but when time came , they didn't asked their son's opinion & married him off to someone whose nature is same like their son .

waiting for next

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar

The title pulled me in. I wanted to know what the story is about and I am glad I decided to read this. Devika and Madhav, such beautiful names. It's sad that they didn't let out their grief, didn't even share it with each other at the time it happened. Instead, they chose to withdraw in their shell. Should they have expressed it out, at least to each other, the pain would have lessened. They could have poured more love into the upbringing of their son. Alas, through the thick shroud of grief and loss over their eyes, all they saw was their unborn child. What about the one who lived. His existence just for namesake?

You write very well.

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar

Second chapter and it seems I have started understanding where this might be heading to. I think so but I will love to be surprised.

A child took her away from the world, so a child to bring her back to the world. Will they have a child? Will the child have a name? Would these two people just be a means to an end? What about their individual lives? Their development?

The one who has a sweet voice and an even sweeter fragrance of jasmine about her, that's how I am going to relate to this new girl-woman who has entered the life of our reticent protagonist. And I am also assuming that it is she who he got married to. His Thursday girl. They haven't spoken to each other but the deep soul to soul connection that people aim for has already been established. Kudos to you for the unconventional storyline! Please update soon, I am already waiting.

Originally posted by: drrose31

PART 2

Nice part...

So the boy getting married at the tender age of 20 not voicing his wishes of whatever accepting elders decisions...

The girl turned out to be of his perfect nature...

So without speaking, they know what the other want or say He knows her thoughts... Hmmm... Nice going...

Thanks for pm Ji...

Originally posted by: Jeevana

Good you are coming on track...Lets see who will crack the nutshell first...

you seems to have lot of questions... lets see how many I can answer in my updates...

Thank you...

surely you will have the update soon

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

The story seems different..the title and the banner. In the banner, there is a mask, like someone hidden intentionally behind the mask, who wants to keep the identity covered like an unknown, unnamed..anonymous.

Part 1

that's a yesteryear era..and biggest question is who is he..

like the mask his name too is hidden...the backdrop on his growth had come very well as to why he would be so sharp but silent, obedient and neglected.

the parents could not move on from the grief, and in that they did not realize that it is impacting their elder son, he grew deprived of the love, attention or care he otherwise would have got.

I was thinking why the title namesake..is it like him being the son just for the namesake purpose but no more attachment and care involved or like no more identity of his own but the son of his parents..it is interesting and intriguing start.

PS - I normally keep track of the updates from the title and sometimes comment on 2-3 chapter together based on time availability, so deleting the PM buddy invitation for chapter updates, hope you won't mind 😊

and a Happy New Year !!

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 2

Why I am feeling, it is not so straightforward. It is like a mystery being unfolded and I am in for all the twists, turns and shocks.

I like to make guesses, so have made a few here as well, but will wait for few more updates 😛 😆

Being the introvert, shy and not so outspoken personality he agreed to the decision taken by his parents about his marriage..although he seemed to have attracted to someone during his journey, but the marriage gave him the same happiness. And he related the fragrance of flowers, the Jasmine flowers..unknowingly to the girl in the train, his fascination..understanding the pleasant happiness he felt that time lies with his wife now and then the sweetness of the voice and the sound of bangles in a similar way.

I loved the morning temple incident. It connected the two more, there was a moment of worry for her, may be the thought of him not liking her, but the next second it disappeared with mutual trust and feeling of being together building up between them.

Originally posted by: saf24

A really nice update. He is such an obedient child that he went through with his parents wishes. Looking forward to what is in store next.