Heartfelt [Updated! part 1# pg.6 10/10]

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#51

Lovely update! superbly written

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nadia khan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#52

Cute update I am so loving this story so masn mom knowing more about geet as per advice from her sister geet is from hoshyarpur poor girl lost her mom and dad it seems maan mom has some connections with geet mom maan being sarcastic self as usual

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spoorthi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

nahhhi..usko Geet ka bachpan ka saathi hi rehno do..

Geet ko toh achchhe log mil gaye who will help her, but uska kya..kahan hoga woh shehar ki bheed bhaad mein. He was the one who helped Geet to run away from her Uncle's place..who does such things. 🤔 bas woh safe rahen.

no comments!😆

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spoorthi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Lovely update! superbly written

glad u liked it😊

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spoorthi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: nakh5683
Cute update I am so loving this story so masn mom knowing more about geet as per advice from her sister geet is from hoshyarpur poor girl lost her mom and dad it seems maan mom has some connections with geet mom maan being sarcastic self as usual

maan ki maa jhot bolrahi thi😆

glad u liked it so far

thanks for reading!😊

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priyasree

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Posted: 6 years ago

#56

Awesome, lovely n wonderful update

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spoorthi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: priyasree

Awesome, lovely n wonderful update

glad u liked it

thanks for reading!😊

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 6 years ago

#58

lovely update

continue soon

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sanum23

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Posted: 6 years ago

#59

Geet is too naive Maan's mother very easily tricked hr fr getting hr info

She even told what anirudh said to hr

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Sahiba

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Posted: 6 years ago

#60

I liked how you described the whole neighborhood and houses...

It feels nice to imagine all the surroundings along with the characters...

Maan's mom is a sweet heart...I love her kindness...

liked her thoughts on having Geet at her house...though she is kind and cares for Geet but she is kinda worried about her and their safety...nice that she decided to take her sister's advice to deal with the situation at hand

Geet is so naive...and innocent...she though tries to follow the rules of not trusting or revealing anything to strangers but she is so innocent that she cannot hide her real self for longer...

I look so good was so awww...

Geet is such a cutie...told her the real name yet with warnings hehe

and Maan's sarcastic thoughts were too funny

So Maan's mother kinda lied to know her background...but I guess that can be counted under white lies and is worth of forgiveness...

Oh Geet shared everything

Maan...liking her name and everything...

This is one is interesting

kinda curious about her uncle and Anirudh too...

Thanks for the update

continue soon pls