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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
Very nice concept and so fresh seeing Maaneet in such different characters playing lower middle class kids. I'm so glad seeing people still writing interesting stories on Maan and Geet. Lookin forward to the next chapters
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sanum23

Geet is too naive Maan's mother very easily tricked hr fr getting hr info

She even told what anirudh said to hr

thanks for reading!😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: aparna3011

lovely update

continue soon

thanks for reading Aparna😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

I liked how you described the whole neighborhood and houses...
It feels nice to imagine all the surroundings along with the characters...
Maan's mom is a sweet heart...I love her kindness...
liked her thoughts on having Geet at her house...though she is kind and cares for Geet but she is kinda worried about her and their safety...nice that she decided to take her sister's advice to deal with the situation at hand
Geet is so naive...and innocent...she though tries to follow the rules of not trusting or revealing anything to strangers but she is so innocent that she cannot hide her real self for longer...
I look so good was so awww...
Geet is such a cutie...told her the real name yet with warnings hehe
and Maan's sarcastic thoughts were too funny
So Maan's mother kinda lied to know her background...but I guess that can be counted under white lies and is worth of forgiveness...
Oh Geet shared everything
Maan...liking her name and everything...
This is one is interesting
kinda curious about her uncle and Anirudh too...
Thanks for the update
continue soon pls

glad u liked it
Thank you so much for reading!😃
wo kya hai na.. gf me readers ka akaal aagaya hai😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: babelicious

Very nice concept and so fresh seeing Maaneet in such different characters playing lower middle class kids. I'm so glad seeing people still writing interesting stories on Maan and Geet. Lookin forward to the next chapters

Hum GF k liye kuch bhi karenge😉
even trying to pick up fights(which unfortunately didn't work)

glad u liked the story so far
Thanks for reading!😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
ghar pe
saas bahu sajish khel rahi hu😆

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Posted: 7 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

ghar pe
saas bahu sajish khel rahi hu😆



woww...congrats !! (Hope I am getting the meaning correctly) 😃

🥳🥳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

ghar pe
saas bahu sajish khel rahi hu😆



I am sure yahan pe bahu hi sajish kar rahi hogi !!!🤣

sajish aur khel se waqt nikalke thodasa story ko bhi wakt do..😆

pata nahi Aniruddh ka kya haal hua hoga..Aniruddh kahan hai..😭
Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest



I am sure yahan pe bahu hi sajish kar rahi hogi !!!🤣

sajish aur khel se waqt nikalke thodasa story ko bhi wakt do..😆

pata nahi Aniruddh ka kya haal hua hoga..Aniruddh kahan hai..😭

will update after Diwali😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
update Heartfelt please!

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