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jasika

@jasika08

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Posted: 7 years ago

#561

Lovely epilogue

Love it

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

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Posted: 7 years ago

#562

Rashmi update nikal math
I am yet to read plz

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

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Posted: 7 years ago

#563

Beautiful epilogue part B...
loved it...
Baby Mukti born in their Marriage Anivarsary...
Daadi death is shock to me...
can't stop my tears...
loved jealous Maan
woh bhi his 2year old baby boy...
Loved Maaneet lovely moments in end tooo...
Thanks for the Outstanding story...
totally enjoyed it...

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maanshi

@maanshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#564

Ohhh final update ... No more MI update ... Sad

Awesome epilogue

Full with so many emotions

Riya part ... I like her father stand

N the way u wrote... perfect... just the why any man in his position would behave

Riya finally realized her mistake n also know her father is right

She is thankfully to maan as he never say her name in front of all

Maan got two naughty Ladies in his life ... Hehehe

Poor man had to agree with them any how ...haha ha

Party part was Lovely very nicely written Love it

Wow maaneet baby come on their anniversary ... so sweet

Love the way u wrote maan eagerness to see mithu N not caring anything else ... Not even baby

Maaneet n family meeting with baby was superb ... Heart touching

Like dadi teasing priya on baby n maaneet join in

Ohhh so sad dadi passed away ... U wrote it very emotinally ... It's true that everyone will go one day still it's painful to accept

Feel like craying with maaneet

Mukti name by dadi n behind that her logic was emotional

Like that

Maaaneet made km as old age home ... So different thinking

Like that

Maaneet life with children n parents ... Lovely

Perfect family

So love to see little maan in manann N their fight

In family mukti is sensible One... Hehe poor child help herself n her bro as their parents busy in argument ... Hahaha

Love ram priya part

Maan had to manofy His angery Wife n he did after so many effort as he is so helpless in front of his wife ...

Love maaneet evergreen romance

Loved it very much

Thank you for wonderful story n keep writing like this

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#565

thanks for a Fabulous Beautiful FF!! terrifically written!

really sad it has ended!

enjoyed reading this FF!!👏

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#566

Stupendous update! terrifically written!

Ria deserved what she got! feeling for her dad! she realised too late what she did and that Maaneet were meant to be!

glad that dadi wanted to have a party for Maaneet's anniversary but Maan's worry justified! but liked that he can do anything for his Mitthu! he is a wonderful hubby!

adore Maan teasing his dadi!

it was an amazing party! Maaneet look gorgeous! they are truly blessed~ ! everyone awed seeing Maan as a caring and loving hubby! at least Maan gave in and danced with Geet!

Oh no Geet in labour! Thank God they made it in time! Maaneet blessed with an adorable baby girl! Loved that Maan was more concerned about Geet and only got to know that they had a daughter when Geet was fine! really happy for Maaneet!

can understand the sentiments behind the baby's name! dadi so emotional! Maaneet are parents but behave like kids!

really sad that dadi died but it was meant to be! at least she saw her great grandchild! dadi did not want them to cry! respect Maan and his decision to start an old age home in dadi's name!

Aww junior MSK is so cute! he is indeed Maan's replica! Gosh Maan is so possessive! how can he fight with his son for just that? but its MSK!! Maanas is stubborn like Maan!

Maan is upset as Geet let Maanas call her Mitthu! Maan can be a kid lol! Tit for tat! he now wants Mukti to call him Angel!! now Geet angry!

Poor Sasha!! she does not know who to listen to! finally Maan pacified his wife!

Perfect end! ⭐️

shall miss updates of MI! 😔

it was a splendid journey! 👏

thank you! 🤗

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#567

I want to read MI again so do let me know when you decide to repost!

I hope you will write a new Maaneet story soon! already waiting!! 😉 please do add me to ur pm list! 😃

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fict

@fict

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Posted: 7 years ago

#568

Loved the epilogue B. Mithu and Angels story is unique. For Maan, Geet comes first, everyone else after that. He was so worried for Geet he didn't even pay attention to doctor telling about their daughter. That's the depth of their love. Loved Maanas scene too much. Maan getting jealous of his own son was so cute. Looking forward to reading next story of yours.