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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

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Posted: 7 years ago

#541

Amazing epilogue in one update you cover everything ria deserve this

ohhh Dadi is no more

i loved mithu angel fight as a parent oops poor child better to think go with dadu

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Jeevana

@Jeevana

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Posted: 7 years ago

#542

Epilogue B

Ria ka chapter close hogaya tha ... But oh kise yaad tha...

Isliye may be everyone were asking you what happened to her...

Challo she accepted the destiny decided by RA

Maaneet anniversary...well soft dance is always allowed...even I felt like dancing at those times ...but was very careful

Mittu ki mukti agayi aur dadi Ko mukti milgayi

Felt a little emotional on that adieu ... Had you written a little more definitely tears would have been shed...

Well that was a surprise in epilogue as everyone writes about happiness only...

So mukti ke Baad manan .. kids are always naughty n know right ways to irritate their dad...

I was so imaging how nishchal pushes his dad away...

Happy to be a part of MI...n thank you for this beautiful story...

Waiting for more exciting concepts from your end...

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#543

awsem ria is getting what she dearves dadi no more maneet leading happy life maanas so cute

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

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Posted: 7 years ago

#544

OMG!!! such a sweet part!! I am I love with this maaneet, can't imagine this story is ending..

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suni_104

@suni_104

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#545

awesome update
dadi geet gang is super and dadi is oldie part
Maan so caring loved the way he made her dance for her happiness
cried reading dadi is one more geet is scattered
manas is cute naughtiness poor Maan have to see geet angry
manofying geet is big tasks for Maan
Sasha is scared for geet
loved whole story

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#546

Lived it. Sorry to see it end. But what to do .just like dCu had to go too...she would have loved to see maanas too

Mithu and angel cannot stop fighting though ..

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#547

Congratulations on completing another Phenomenal story

the title to this story indeed was highlighted with Mithu's Masoom Ishq and I believe

that Maan himself carried innocence especially when it came to matters of heart

and all its physical aspects together with the experiences

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#548

Epilogue B

You have portrayed every aspect of Maaneet's life so Beautifully

Daadi wishing to have a grand party for Maan and Geet's wedding anniversary

while Maan was just concerned about Geet's condition but had to agree as always his

Mithu melts him with her words

the very night of their anniversary Geet gives birth to a baby girl , Maan was worried about

his Mithu and not even taking heath to the fact that he is a father of a baby girl

this once again shows his love that he always possessed for her .

true it has to be scary hearing his Mithu screaming and crying , giving birth and with holding that severe pains only a woman can do ,

Six months later Dadi passed away and its not easy to lose a loved one

It was good to see both Adi and Romeo with Maan in his time of grief

Maan deciding to turn KM into an Old Aged Home , I totally loved that

and the fact that he and Geet together with their daughter Mukti visited and spend time

with the elders , that for me is soulful and wholesome doing for one's community and seeing to the

old only makes a person raise in love and respect

Wow Maan and Geet has two kids that's is awesome

the little cute and sweet fights that Maan and Geet has still shows all the innocence and love

they carry for each other

but yes Geet is indeed a Tiger at the office , while Maan still cannot work if his Mithu is angry with him , her smile still brings happiness and peace to him .

Ria has gotten what she deserved

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poojagupta123

@poojagupta123

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#549

awesome ending
no words to describe such a beautiful story
it was really a maasom ishq of mittu and his angel
waiting to read your new story on maan geet
I will miss this story a lot