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Maan got annoyed and left from there. Geet was feeling bad but then she is used of all these things. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Maan angry witth Geet amd left from their
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Posted: 7 years ago
Itna chotu part :( I finish reading in 2 mins. So Maan and Geet are gettin so close unknowingly. This whole food makes episode was very sweet to see. Waiting eagerly for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Caught up with the story. You paint Geet's character and dialogues in a very endearing way. There is a simplicity about Geet which tugs at the heartstrings even though she appears foolish at times. This appealed to me in the Jaded Prince.

Hope Geet wakes up to reality soon about Akhil.
Maan is fighting a battle with himself about Geet...hope Geet reciprocates. I would like Maan to ask Geet, "What will you do if Akhil gets married? He won't need you around anymore."
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Posted: 7 years ago
great update! well written! Maan upset and leaves! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Geet is just as complicated like is she doing whatever she is doing as a friend or does she feels something for Maan now that she wants to ignore him. maan definitely has a soft spot.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: raibdrop2

Caught up with the story. You paint Geet's character and dialogues in a very endearing way. There is a simplicity about Geet which tugs at the heartstrings even though she appears foolish at times. This appealed to me in the Jaded Prince.

Hope Geet wakes up to reality soon about Akhil.
Maan is fighting a battle with himself about Geet...hope Geet reciprocates. I would like Maan to ask Geet, "What will you do if Akhil gets married? He won't need you around anymore."


Thank you for the wonderful comment...hope you keep reading and enjoying this fic just like JADED PRINCE
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 14

Now see what she did...made an utter fool

Now again more stories of her stupidity will entertain the staff

Cool!..Bravo Geet...hats off!!!

She thinks

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Wahan Maan ko lag rah hai how stupid to fall for her ouch-ouch

He is wondering if she is really hurt

He is thinking...pondering about today's incident...he threw a childish fit and actually felt bad at the small issue of eating with Geet...what's happening to him?

He wants to go see her and ask how she is but stops himself firmly ki bohot ho gaya!

Stop concentrating on Geet!

She is no one and will never be anyone!

Instead of planning to ruin Akhil; what is he doing thinking about Geet?

He thought...really thought ki what was my motive?

M-My motive was Akhil...Akhil and his girlfiriend. Ye Geet beech mein kahan se aa gai...why are her thoughts exercising half of my brain cells...wooo...Maan stop... cut her out

He resolves not to get distracted away from his motives from now on, no matter what

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Geet comes limping and finds her way to her seat...doing her job

Antara calls Maan

Maan ignores her call

He'll call her late

He can't talk to her in the office

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Shaam ko he strolls outside and calls her

He chats with Antara casually over the call

M-Hi what's up? Kya kar rahi ho?

Antara- Nothing much getting ready, aaj valentine's hai naa. Akhil has asked me out

M-Uss loser ke saath?

Antara- Where are you? Why are you working on a valentine's day instead we could have been together

M- I was thinking of coming early, infact today...but as you already have plans then...nevermind..mind...Bye...see you later

Antara- Nahi ruko

But Maan had already hung up

While coming back to his seat he sees Geet slightly limping while coming out of Akhil's cabin

M- Geet

She over her shoulders

M- You should put a cold compress on your knee

He says and goes back to his seat

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Geet goes to her seat

She is thinking about Maan

She was starting to befriend Maan

She started being comfortable with him as he gave her importance

She felt needed

She feels cared with Maan

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Kuch der baad

Geet aai desk pe Maan ke, kuch file rakhi

G-Take a look

M-What is it?

G-Akhil asked me to give it to you

Geet jaane lagti hai; but turns mid-way

G-emm...

Maan file khol raha tha

He looks up at her

M-Hm?

G-Happy Valentine 's Day

Maan smiles at her

M-Happy valentine's day to you too... I hope you find your love today

G-..emm...I incidentally have...tickets for a movie


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**Quick Question Readers; Who all uses kindle here?

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Great part. Maan is thinking about Geet and he just wants to concentrate on antara to go on with his revenge. Antara told Maan about her plan of Valentine. She is going with akhil. Maan played his card hey saying he was planning something. I am sure It would affect antara. OMG Geet has two movie ticket. Is she asking Maan to accompany her. Waiting for next dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh I really hope that they go for a movie now ❤️
And that their relationship blossoms to something more 😳

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