REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 23

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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice part. So finally maneet started to enjoy each othet's company. Maan is doing everything to make antara believe how wealthy he is. She is completely in awe hearing about Maan's status. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: mehrunnesa

Akhil doesn't love geet but she loves him

I want Advil realize her love when she will be snatched


That's intresting ..you are my first reader who wants Akhil to realize Geet's love for him
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Posted: 7 years ago
terrific update! sorry 4 late comments! great seeing Maaneet enjoying!

Maan took Antara to the party!

shall wait 4 next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Thank you for pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for pm
Nice part
Maan and Geet were happy in thier world
Antara points out them to Akhil
Geet was late and maan Geet came along
Maan impressed Antara a lot
Will b waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice Maan impressing both girls one fr his feelings r fake and whom he like she's not going to impress so easily
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Posted: 7 years ago
Maan and Geet are so cute. And yet again Antara is mad and wonder if Maan is really going away for 15 days,
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 12

Antara- Come in lets have some coffee

Maan ne politely kaha ki

M-Sorry I can't come. Kal mujhe jaldi 4 am ki flight se...Philippines jaana hai so I have to get my sleep...maybe next time?

Antara bhi kya kahe she is still a bit awed

She nods thoda pout sa karke

Maan smiles dazzlingly and says ki

M-Leaving right now would be so much easier if only you wouldn't looking so cute right now

Antara is flustered

Maan thoda jhuka, gave her a very light barely there kiss on the lips; which wants you to pull the man down for a better taste

But he straightened and stepped back

M- See you around neighbor

He winks and then goes

Antara kafi aag ko lag rai thi sabko bata de ki she is with this multi billionaire guy par bola nahi about Rajeev kyunki usne kaha tha ki uska father thoda sanki types ka hai aur abhi tak to kuch hua bhi nahi hai to bataye kya

Next day office mein

It was a usual normal day

Akhil being a demanding pig and all sort of monotonous stuff happening

Chat pe Geet ne Maan ko ek bored and hungry emoji bheja

Maan was working on accounts trying to find some link and foul play in records side by side

Geet ka ping aaya naa achanak se Maan ki window pe

G-Hungry

Maan bheja ki

M-Take a leave for 1/2 hour I'll feed u

G-????

G-Bread roll?

M-Surprise

G-What?

M-Go out with me for 1 hr if you are hungry

Maan ne likh ke bheja

Geet ka status ho gaya away from the computer

Maan ke peeche se

G- Chalo

Maan ne dekha mudke and smiles

He get up and closes down everything

Phir Geet ka haath pakad kar jaldi chalo jaldi jaldi karta hua le gaya

G-Arre ek minute ruko purse lene do

M- No need

G- Why? Paise nahi dene kya?

M- Nahi dene. Chalo

Geet ne phone I-card sab haath mein le liya

G- Ye phone apne pocket mein rakh loge?

Maan ne phone rakh liya phir kaha ki

M-Agar beech mein phone aaya to tumko wapas nahi milega

She chuckles

G-Thik hai...waise bhi mujhe koi phone nahi karta

Lift se utre aur Geet chalne lagi dusri paas ki company ke cafeteria ki taraf jo campus mein tha

Maan ne Geet ka haath pakda

Shakes his head

M- Wrong direction

He takes her to where his bike is parked

Geet ko helmet diya ki pehno

G-Arre bread rohl wahan milta h! Bike pe kahan jaana h?

M-Maine kab kaha ki tumhe bread roll khila rah hoon

G-Arre bass 5 min bread roll khake aa jaate. Quick snack. Time waste kyun kar rahe ho? Kaam hai!

M-Maine kah tha ki 1 ghante ka break lekar aana, toh hum 5 min mein wapas kyun jayenge?

Chalo baitho

He urges her to sit and starts the bike

Geet soch mein undecisive si khadi h

G-Thik hai, half an hour mein wapas. Time dekh lo

M-Dekh liya

Maan vrooms away once she is settled

M-Kya khane ka mann hai tumhe?

G-Bread roll, hamari saath wali company ki cafeteria wala

Maan stops the bike and turns to look at her

M-Tumhe wohi khana hai?

G-Haan toh?

She says matter of factly

M- Fine

G-Tumne nahi khaya? Bohot acha hota h

He turns the bike around and takes her back to the cafeteria

M-I am sure it is

G-See maine kaha tha naa, ki kyun nikal rahe ho bike

Maan feels he is a stupid man who does stupid things around Geet

He is getting distracted from his plan of revenge and thinking too much about Geet


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**Dont forgot to suggest song appropriate for the situation

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Posted: 7 years ago
Maan is moving fast to trap antara. But somewhere Geet started to affect him. Geet is too innocent to understand all such things. Maan was taking her somewhere special but Geet wanted to have bread roll from the nearby cafe. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update Di😃
And the title "Demanding Pig" for Akhil is very apt😆😉
Maan has casted his charm on Antara very well...
I am totally in love with this cunning(around A & A)yet cute and caring(around Geet) Maan😳
And always Maan is waiting for the time to spent with Geet😃
Surely he is very much distracted..but only around Geet😉
Loved the update very much😃

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