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Nice update..
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Posted: 6 years ago
geet bewukulf hai kya?...

lovely update...

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eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Maan is really being distracted by Geet, but I am glad she is being distracted by Maan. akhil doesnt need her attention.
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Maan trapped antra fully in his jaal but with Geet some time he do things without thinking
He's falling fr hr
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Posted: 6 years ago
Part 12

terrific update! nicely written!

wow Maan has managed to impress Antara!

Maan is distracted by Geet! he is falling for Geet!

update soon, thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
antra is getting trap fast with the plan of maan
maan thinks that geet is distracting him from revenge
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Maan has not done anything constructive towards his plan
H likes to be with geet
but how long can she be a distraction
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhu_31

Nice update Di😃
And the title "Demanding Pig" for Akhil is very apt😆😉
Maan has casted his charm on Antara very well...
I am totally in love with this cunning(around A & A)yet cute and caring(around Geet) Maan😳
And always Maan is waiting for the time to spent with Geet😃
Surely he is very much distracted..but only around Geet😉
Loved the update very much😃


Can i say i loved your comment...totally brought a smile on my face...lets see what this triple C (Cuuning, Cute, Caring) Maan does next😉
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: angeldream14

Maan has not done anything constructive towards his plan

H likes to be with geet
but how long can she be a distraction


Hehehe...loved your comment...I guess you are the only reader who is more interested in Maan's Revenge plan than Maan and Geet's love story and you are delightfully concerned about his distraction from the plan...you are so my kind of lovely😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 13

He turns the bike around and takes her back to the cafeteria

G-See maine kaha tha naa, ki kyun nikal rahe ho bike

Maan feels he is a stupid man who does stupid things around Geet

He is getting distracted from his plan of revenge and thinking too much about Geet

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Maan ne bike wapas lagai, Geet ko cafeteria le gaya

G-Ek hi order dena , wo do dete hain. Do plate zyada ho jayega

He nods ki ok

Ek hi plate order deta hai aur aakar chup chap baith jaata hai

He takes out Geet's mobile and places it on the table

Also takes out his own mobile and puts it on general profile

Geet khane lagti hai

G-Kya hua? Khao. Acha nahi hai?

Maan baitha hai lounging in his chair

M-Nahi mera vrat hai aaj

G-Huh?

She looks at him

G-Oh! Bura mann gaye ki main nahi gai

He gives her square look back

G-Parr ye acha hai na

She smiles

G-Acha sa shaant-shaant saaf-saaf. Khao naa

M-Vrat mein?

G-Liar Liar Liar Liar Liar Liar! Maine kahin aur jaane se mana kar diya isliye naa

M-Believe whatever you want to

She pouts

G-Mood off mat karo naa...Kya bachhcon ki tarah laga rakha h...chalo who's for a hot chocolate fudge?

She raises her hand

He looks at his watch getting up

M- I have to go. I forgot I had a meeting with the client... he'll be angry if I am late. You enjoy your chocolate fudge

Geet gets up but in process bumps her kneew on the table

G-Aau Aa Aau!

He looks at her

M- Are you ok?


He says holding her elbow making her sit again

G-Eh..aa...do I look ok?

She sits massaging her knee

He sits next to her and presses her knee hard

M- Let me do that, it won't swell that way

But her other hand crept to the bread roll, took a piece...boom...its front of Maan's lips...

G-Have

He spits out the half piece she managed to get in his mouth in the dustbin

He frowns

M-Drama queen

She pouts

M-I am going. Bye

He says firmly and leaves

Geet chup baith gai...she thinks what happened to her...why did she act so unlike her usual self?

Is she getting too comfortable in his presence?

Why does it all matter?

She shouldn't have asked him...she shouldn't take favors.

Now see what she did...made an utter fool

Now again more stories of her stupidity will entertain the staff

Cool!..Bravo Geet...hats off!!!

She thinks

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 6 years ago

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