Beauty And A Dusht Danav MG - repost - Epilogue pg 127

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Posted: 7 years ago

#961

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
the last part and the epi ware a bit too fast phased i felt
jyse koi train chootrahi ho😆

phir se shadi and she's already preg😲
BABAJI!!😲
matlab sab kuch pehle hi☺️
gadha kahi ka iss se na iss zada ummed bhi kya karsakte hai😡

i was expecting kuch aur from this story
i remember reading a comment from someone when u were writing this one... and even the title i thought this was some rom-com kind of thing😕

but chado it was nice to see a glimpse of jhalli geet gfter such a long time

Do keep writing!

RomCom was Chura Liya which is playing in a thread near you right now 😆
I thought you wanted to read that
but you chose to read the end of this.
BTW, She was not pregnant then, just nauseous with the smell of mushrooms and eggs; even I get that way with the smell of eggs...
Chalo at least you finished one of my stories

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Posted: 7 years ago

#962

Originally posted by: dqno1

RomCom was Chura Liya which is playing in a thread near you right now 😆
I thought you wanted to read that
but you chose to read the end of this.
BTW, She was not pregnant then, just nauseous with the smell of mushrooms and eggs; even I get that way with the smell of eggs...
Chalo at least you finished one of my stories

i completed colourful ishq also

I'm getting to the other one too zara held up in ghar ghar gi kahani😆