Beauty And A Dusht Danav MG - repost - Epilogue pg 127 - Page 96

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Posted: 7 years ago
dadi was fantastic .Everything dadi did to bring them close an no invitation for dadi bad very bad.Maan an Geet are happy for Dev and Meera. Cant believe its going to end .When is the new one.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: morlen

Very interesting pls add me on ur pm list I jst read the concept


sorry
story is done
i dont add readers at the end
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Posted: 7 years ago
Epilogue...
Seeing Maan scared of Dadima is always an amusing sight...LOL
Am sure Dadima would be shocked as hell to see them all lovey-dovey...
loved all the complaints Dadima had of them...she was not invited to her only grandson's marriage...:P
She is right...had she not forced Maan to visit the foundation and had she not given him the punishment then Maaneet would not have happened...she deserves the credit...:P

Uff Lover boy Maan...now that Maan has had a taste of his Mishti Geet, he does not want to waste any moment...Sher Ke Mooh Ko Khoon Lag Gaya...hahaha
Geet was being all cute when nervous about Dadima...but Maan had only one thing on his mind...and then his naughty suggestions...hahaha...Biwiji was so cute...

Hahaha...Mushroom Omelette...really it did help vanish Dadima's oh so forward mind...she is dreaming about her great-grandson...heheh...Maan not being able to meet his Sherni was sure a punishment bit aisa kaise ho skta...loved his elaborate plans to meet her...lovely

Awwie...that DD was too cute...darling Dad...
Could imagine Maan fulfilling all his daughter's wishes and pampering her to hell...:P

Jealous Geet is a treat to watch...and how she cribs about Maan now being all polite with girls was too cute...:P
Loved the entire scene with Tara...she is too sweet...boosting his ego...and that NRI chick and village hunk does not seem to be a bad idea at all...:P

Oh I absolutely loved the way Maan manaofied Geet...:P

Oh How much I am going to miss the beauty and her dusht danav...
Lovely Story Avi..:)


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Epilogue...

Seeing Maan scared of Dadima is always an amusing sight...LOL
Am sure Dadima would be shocked as hell to see them all lovey-dovey...
loved all the complaints Dadima had of them...she was not invited to her only grandson's marriage...:P
She is right...had she not forced Maan to visit the foundation and had she not given him the punishment then Maaneet would not have happened...she deserves the credit...:P

Uff Lover boy Maan...now that Maan has had a taste of his Mishti Geet, he does not want to waste any moment...Sher Ke MoohKo Khoon Lag Gaya...hahaha
Geet was being all cute when nervous about Dadima...but Maan had only one thing on his mind...and then his naughty suggestions...hahaha...Biwiji was so cute...

Hahaha...Mushroom Omelette...really it did help vanish Dadima's oh so forward mind...she is dreaming about her great-grandson...heheh...Maan not being able to meet his Sherni was sure a punishment bit aisa kaise ho skta...loved his elaborate plans to meet her...lovely

Awwie...that DD was too cute...darling Dad...
Could imagine Maan fulfilling all his daughter's wishes and pampering her to hell...:P

Jealous Geet is a treat to watch...and how she cribs about Maan now being all polite with girls was too cute...:P
Loved the entire scene with Tara...she is too sweet...boosting his ego...and that NRI chick and village hunk does not seem to be a bad idea at all...:P

Oh I absolutely loved the way Maan manaofied Geet...:P

Oh How much I am going to miss the beauty and her dushtdanav...
Lovely Story Avi..:)




Thanks Sahiba 😃
Glad that u enjoyed it
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 23:
Super hot and passionate =P
Btw did they create a little Geet or Maan ;-D
Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anmirza

Chapter 23:
Super hot and passionate =P
Btw did they create a little Geet or Maan ;-D
Can't wait to read more!


story ended weeks ago
ab finish bhi karo
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 24:
Glad that all the villains finally got what they deserved!!!
So apparently Geet's cousins weren't even her cousins!!!! Wow!!! Such devious people!!! Good riddance!
Finally Maaneet will have a happy ever after!!!!
Sorry lol been quite busy! Didn't even get the time to read until now! Epilogue ka password dedo ab please 😆
Edited by anmirza - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
full bollywood istyle climax tha yaar!
fights, dishoom dishoom and hero getting the the award of superhero!😆

aaj kal tho movies me bhi the end tak sab boring hojata hai
we don't get to see the last minute cops scene anymore🤣

oh did i forget mentioning the khoon bhari maang wala scene

writerji sach batao kya wo zaruri tha😛

and gadha tho har story me ready rehta hai chance pe dance marne k liye

anyway good to know k by the end of the tale heroine isn't an abla nari anymore... which i highly doubt she was at the beginning!

fast-farword kar k padliya😆
wo kya hai na comment long pending hogaya tha


do keep writing!
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

full bollywood istyle climax tha yaar!

fights, dishoom dishoom and hero getting the the award of superhero!😆

aaj kal tho movies me bhi the end tak sab boring hojata hai
we don't get to see the last minute cops scene anymore🤣

oh did i forget mentioning the khoon bhari maang wala scene

writerji sach batao kya wo zaruri tha😛

and gadha tho har story me ready rehta hai chance pe dance marne k liye

anyway good to know k by the end of the tale heroine isn't an abla nari anymore... which i highly doubt she was at the beginning!

fastfarfast-kar k padliya😆
wo kya hai na comment long pending hogaya tha


do keep writing!


sab kuch pehle kar chukke hai toh zaroori tha 😆
bollywood ending tha par heroine super hero hui thi 😃
thanks for reading the ending
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Posted: 7 years ago
the last part and the epi ware a bit too fast phased i felt
jyse koi train chootrahi ho😆

phir se shadi and she's already preg😲
BABAJI!!😲
matlab sab kuch pehle hi☺️
gadha kahi ka iss se na iss zada ummed bhi kya karsakte hai😡

i was expecting kuch aur from this story
i remember reading a comment from someone when u were writing this one... and even the title i thought this was some rom-com kind of thing😕

but chado it was nice to see a glimpse of jhalli geet gfter such a long time

Do keep writing!

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