Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
the last part and the epi ware a bit too fast phased i felt
jyse koi train chootrahi hošphir se shadi and she's already pregš²BABAJI!!š²matlab sab kuch pehle hiāŗļøgadha kahi ka iss se na iss zada ummed bhi kya karsakte haiš”i was expecting kuch aur from this storyi remember reading a comment from someone when u were writing this one... and even the title i thought this was some rom-com kind of thingšbut chado it was nice to see a glimpse of jhalli geet gfter such a long timeDo keep writing!
RomCom was Chura Liya which is playing in a thread near you right now š
I thought you wanted to read that
but you chose to read the end of this.
BTW, She was not pregnant then, just nauseous with the smell of mushrooms and eggs; even I get that way with the smell of eggs...
Chalo at least you finished one of my stories
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