SS:KAISAI MUJHAY TUM MILL GAYE. (Maaneet) DISCONTINUED - Page 16

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

oh ho ho...toh geet humesha k liye maan k honewali hai...

lovely update...

loved it very much...


Yup 😊
Currently iam writing part 16 which is engagement update so yeah soon and with that this ss will also end 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks 😊
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Teaser:

Geet smiled and hugged Maan, Maan smiled and hugged her back. After some time both mutually break the hug.

Maan: Geet dair horahi hai chalo tumhay ghar chor daita hoon.

Geet stood and grabbed Maan's arms both walked gracefully towards car, he held door for her after setlling her in her seat Maan moved towards his side and drove off towards Geet's house.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

Beautiful teaser
Update soon

I will 😊
But slowly as I don't have much backup updates left now and I usually update once or twice a month depends on my routine 😆
Edited by -gurukideewani- - 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

awesome teaser!


will be waiting!!


Will post soon 😊
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Maan smiled and sat beside dadi ma keeping his head on her shoulder and stealing glances of Geet who was looking down trying to hide her blush.

Part 9:

Maan smiled and sat beside dadi ma keeping his head on her shoulder and stealing glances of Geet who was looking down trying to hide her blush.

Dadi ma: Geet betay aap dinner hamaray saath karea ga phir Maan betay aap ko ghar chor dain gai.

Geet: Dadi ma mai yahan kaisia ruk sakti hun.

Vicky: Kyun nahi ruk sakti aap yahan haq hai apka yahan ruknai ka please ruk jao na.

Geet: Woh toh theekh hai Vicky, lakin mom dad. Dadi ma unhay kya bolon.

Dadi ma: Agar hum apsai kahain keh hum already apkai parents sai baat kar chukai hain aur aap hamaray saath dinner pai ruk sakti hain tab toh rukain gi na.

Maan who was sitting on floor hiding his lap in dadi's lap looked towards her with wide smile.

Maan: Sach dadi ma apnai Geet kai parents sai baat karli woh yahan ruk sakti hai.

Dadi ruffled Maan's hairs then held his hairs.

Dadi ma: No badmashi Maan beta, han apki Geet yahan ruk sakti hain but dinner kai baad usai jaldi drop kardaina zyada dair nahi karna.

Maan: Ji dadi ma mai jaldi drop kardun ga and no badmashi pakka, ab toh meray kaan chorain na dard horaha hai.

Maan said while making baby face.

Vicky: dadi ma nahi chorna, bhai itna golden chance wapas nahi millai ga, Major Maan Singh Khurana sitting on floor while his ears being held by dadi ma. Yeh toh capture karun ga mai.

Maan: shut up Vicky, dare not do like that. Dadi ma chorain na.

Vicky quickly captured the capture while dadi giggled & Geet looking towards Khurana brothers in disbelief.

Maan: dadi ma chorain na please.

Dadi finally felt mercy on her beloved grand son and left his ears. As he got freehe stood up to catch Vicky who already ran from there to safe himself after sensing Maan's move. Maan finally caught Vicky and hold his hand in which he is holding cell.

Maan: chotay cell do mujhay ya pic delete karo khud.

Vicky: acha haath toh choro karta hun delete

Maan: pehlay delete karo

Vicky: bhai ap haath choro gai toh delete karun ga na, choro na plz.

Maan left Vicky hand, as he got his hand free he ran from there screaming

Vicky: mai nahi delete kar raha.

Maan: Vicky ruko.

Dadi & Geet burst in laughter seeing Maan's face

Maan: ap dono ko buhat hassi arahi hai han (Maan said while glaring at them) dadi ma dehkain na usai.

Dadi ma: yahan aain humaray pass

Maan went & sit near dadi keeping his head on her shoulder. Dadi softly moved her fingers in his hairs.

Maan: dehkain na dadi ma kitna pareshan karta hai, ab pic ko laikai tease karai ga.

Dadi ma: nahi karay ga mai mana kardun gi.

Maan smiled and kissed her forhead, Geet smiled seeing the bonding of Khurana's. Dadi asked Nakul to call Vicky as its dinner time, while Geet help other servants in setting table. Vicky came and teased Maan in return got angry glares from him. They had dinner in light atmosphere while teasing & pulling love birds leg. After dinner dadi asked Maan to show Geet their garden and backyard so that they can spend some time together and stopped Vicky from doing further mischief. Maan placed his hand in front of Geet she softly held it seeing this sweet gesture Vicky whistled Maan softly slapped his head and walked with Geet towards garden holding hands

Khurana Mansion Garden:

Maan made Geet sit on swing and gracefully sat on floor keeping his head on her lap and closing his eyes while Geet softly ruffling his hairs.

Geet: kya hua Maan.

Maan: kuch nahi Geet pareshan nahi ho bas soch raha hun upar walai ka kaisai shukar ada karun keh usnai mujhay meri zindagi sai milwa dia wapas.

Geet: iam sorry Maan.

Maan looked towards Geet balanced himself on his knees & softly cupped her face.

Maan: sorry kyun mishti

Geet: meri stupidity ki wajha sai ap kitna pareshan hue ho Maan. Ap kitna injure thai mai nai yeh bhi nahi Socha bas apnai mann ki ki yeh bhi nahi socha apko physical pain kai saath emotionally hurt kar rahi hun bas sab kuch qismat pai chornai ka faisla kardia jab apko meri zaroorat thi apko pal pal tarap nai kai liye chor dia. Iam really sorry Maan ab mujhay realize horaha hai mai kitni ghalat thi.

Maan: Geet yeh tum kaisi baatein kar rahi ho. Tumhari koi ghalti nahi hai.

Geet: nahi Maan meri hi ghalti thi ap nai toh usi waqt dadi ma sai baat karnai walai thai mai nai apko mana kia tha aur sab qismat pai chora tha.

Maan: Mai nai kaha na tumhari koi ghalti nahi hai. Maana mai tarpa hoon tumharay bina har pal tumhari yaad ati thi lakin tum bhi toh tarpi ho na tum nai bhi to mujhay miss kia hai.

Geet: Nahi Maan aisa hi hai mai keh rahi hun na mujhay us waqt andaza nahi tha mai kya karnai ja rahi hun...

before Geet could complete her sentence Maan put his finger on his her lips to stop her from saying further.

Maan: Chup bilkul chup, tum nai suna nahi mai nai kya kaha, tumhari koi ghalti nahi hai kab sai khud ko blame kiye jarahi ho ab agar aik aur shabd bola na mujh sai bura koi nahi hoga bhoolo mat mai Major Maan Singh Khurana hun mujhay gussa nahi dilana.

Geet looked at Maan in disbelief.

Geet: hawww Maan ap mujhay indirectly dhamki dai rahay ho.

Maan: meri itni jurat kahan mishti keh mai tumhay dhamki dun na baba sari zindagi tumharay saath rehna hai ab sherni kai saath rehna hai toh usai panga thori lai saktai hain.

Geet: Maan ap na.

Maan: Mai na kya Geet.

Geet: Maan

Maan: Haan ji

Geet smiled and hugged Maan, Maan smiled and hugged her back. After some time both mutually break the hug.

Maan: Geet dair horahi hai chalo tumhay ghar chor daita hoon.

Geet stood and grabbed Maan's arms both walked gracefully towards car, he held door for her after setlling her in her seat Maan moved towards his side and drove off towards Geet's house.

Outside Geet House:

Geet: Maan ap chalo na andar.

Maan: Nahi Geet abhi dair hogai hai tum jao mai kal dadi aur Vicky kai saath aaon ga na is waqt acha nahi lagai ga mai pehlay kabhi nahi mila hoon tumhari family sai yeh sahi time nahi hai.

Geet: Jaisa apko theekh lagai Maan.

Maan smiled and kissed her forehead.

Maan: Good Night Geet.

Geet: Good night Maan.

Both smiled unexpectedly Geet surprised Maan by planting soft kiss on his cheeks he smiled looking at her shy face. Geet opened door and slide outside before closing door she looked at Maan.

Geet: Maan

Maan: Han Geet

Geet: Jaldi ana mai inteezar karun gi.

Maan: tum kaho toh mai jata hi nahi. { winked at her }

Geet: uff Maan ap bhi na har waqt masti kai mood mai hotai ho.

Maan: Acha baba jaldi aaon ga pakka ab khush.

Geet smiled and waved Maan return her wave and drove off towards Khurana Mansion.

PRECAP: KHURANA'S MET SINGHANIA'S and SHAGUN.

Edited by -gurukideewani- - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Got about 2 hours free time today
will try my best to catch up on whatever chapters I can
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Got about 2 hours free time today
will try my best to catch up on whatever chapters I can


No issues dear take your time 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful Chapter

Daadima , Vicky and Maan are so happy with Geet
wow I totally loved the moment when Maan gave his mom's kangan to Geet
the honor the respect the love and the warmth in that moment was just beautiful
Geet's family is also happy about the relation and her mother now understands why Geet
was so silent all the time

precap is interesting

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