SS:KAISAI MUJHAY TUM MILL GAYE. (Maaneet) DISCONTINUED - Page 15

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Posted: 7 years ago

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awesome teaser! shall wait


Will post soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice teaser

update soon


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Part 8:

Dadi ma: Vicky Maan bahu ko khara hi rakhna hai ya bithana bhi hai.

Maan smiled and all settled in lounge. Dadi made Geet sit with her Maan sat in front of Geet and Vicky with Dadi and Geet.

Vicky: sab itnai chup kyun ho, bhai aap to kuch bol hi nahi chalo mai hi poch laita hoon, poochon.

Maan: kya poochna hai.

Vicky looked towards Maan and smirked.

Maan: What

Vicky: yehi keh bhabhi kahan milli aap ko bataya nahi aap nai.

Dadi ma: haan betay batain na kahan milli aap ko hamari ghar ki bahu.

Maan took a deep sigh and tell them everything that happened in Goa.

Dadi blessed Geet by putting her hand on her head.

Dadi ma: Maan ham nai aap sai kaha tha na jo cheez aap ki qismat hoti hai usai aapsai koi nahi cheen sakta aik na aik din who aap ko mill hi jati hai. Milwadia na aap ki qismat nai aap ko aapki zindagi sai wapas.

Maan walked towards dadi and sat in front of her by keeping his head on her lap, dadi caressed his head Geet looked towards Maan and kept her head on dadi's shoulder dadi caressed her cheeks by her another hand.

Dadi: Geet betay ab yeh nahi karna wapas apni qismat sai mat khelna bar bar qismat itna acha moqa nahi daiti ab apnai Maan ko apnai sai dur mat karna woh jee nahi pai ga tumharay bina.

Geet looked towards Maan with tears in her eyes.

Geet: kabhi nahi karoon gi aisa dadi ma, mai bhi Maan kai bina nahi reh sakti.

Maan looked towards Geet with a smile on his face, dadi pulled him up and hugged both together.

Dadi ma: Geet betay hamain aap kai ghar ka phone number dain ab ham or dair nahi karna chahtay, jab tak ham bahu kai ghar baat kartay hain Maan aap hamari bahu rani ko unka ghar dikha dain.

Vicky: wow dadi kya idea hai chalain bhabhi aapko aapka ghar dikhatay hain.

Maan glared at Vicky while Dadi twisted his ears.

Dadi ma: No badmashi aap kaheen nahi jarahay hain yaheen behto hamaray pass, Maan betay dikhain gai bahu ko unka ghar samjhay aap.

Vicky looked towards Maan with funny angry face while Maan smirked looking at his brother. Maan forward his hand Geet hold his hand and both moved from there.

Maan: chalo Geet tumhay hamara yeh ashiyana dikhata hoon.

Geet quickly gave dadi her landline number and left with Maan. Maan showed Geet every corner of their mansion except one room.

Maan: Geet tum nai hamara pora ashiyana to dekh lia, magar ab jo jagha mai tumhay dikhaon ga woh is ghar ki sab sai khobsoorat jagha hogi ab sai.

Geet: ab sai kya matlab, pehlay nahi thi kya Maan.

Maan: pehlay bhi thi magar ab usmai meri pari rahay gi to or khobsoorat hogi na woh jagha.

Geet: Maan aap kya keh rahay ho mujhay kuch samhaj nahi araha or kon si jagha ki baat kar rahay ho aap. {Geet said while making baby confused face}.

Maan giggled and pulled Geet cheeks.

Maan: Mishti tumhay pata hai tum kitni cute lag rahi ho. Tum nai pura ghar to dekh lia lakin sab sai eham jagha to dehki hi nahi, woh jagha jahan meri pari rahay gi, hamara karma Shona.

Geet blushed and looked down to avoid eye contact Maan smiled and picked her in his arms Geet looked towards him shocked at his action but soon started blushing seeing his intense gaze on her, Geet looked down while blushing, Maan started walking keeping his eyes on his Shona.

LOUNGE:

Vicky: Kya hua dadi ma kya kaha bhabhi kai ghar walon nai. Hum kab jarahay hain unkay yahan shagun laikai.

Dadima: Betay ham kal sham mai jain gai shagun laikai, woh log bohat khush hain, Geet ki ma keh rahi thi ab samhaj mai aya unhay Geet ki khamoshi ki wajha.

Vicky: matlab ham kal bhabhi kai yahan jain gai, yani woh bohat jald hamaray yahan aain gi hamesha kai liye.

Dadi ma: Haan betay

Vicky smiled and hugged Dadi ma.

Dadi ma: ab chalo badmashi bilkul nahi karna kal ki taiyarai kartay hain.

Vicky nodded his head and left with dadi.

MAAN'S ROOM:

Maan carefully placed Geet on his bed and moved towards his cupboard, he came back carring a small box in his hand. Geet looked towards Maan, he kneeled in front of her and opened the box.

Maan: Geet yeh meri maa kai kangan hain mai chota hi tha jab maa mujhay chor kai chali gai, mujhay abhi bhi yaad hai maa nai mujhay yeh kangan diye thai or kaha tha kai yeh mai us larki ko dun jo meri zindagi mai meri khushi ban kai aai gi, jo hamesha meray saath rahay gi har qadam pai mera saath dai gi, jo meri mohabbat hogi. Geet sai yeh kangan tumharay hain jo itnai salon sai meray pass tumhari amanat thai, ab in pai tumhara haq hai, Mishti mai tumhay yeh kangan pehna dun.

Maan looked towards Geet with loved filled eyes having tears in it, she slowly wiped his tears and forward her hands, Maan slowly hold her hand and slide the kangan in her hand, Maan kissed her both hands and pull her in a hug Geet hugged him back, both came out of hug after sometime. Geet cupped Maan's face.

Geet: Maan aap maa sai bohat pyar kartay ho na mai wada karti hun aap sai mai in kangan ko kabhi apni kalai sai nahi utaroon gi, hamesha aap ko khush rakhon gi aansu ki aik bund aap ki aankhon mai nahi anai dun gi, aap kai saath hamesha rahon gi jaisa maa nai kaha tha har qadam pai aap ka saath dun gi aap ka haath kabhi apnai haathon sai chotnai nahi dun gi, mai aap sai bohat pyar karti hun Maan, aap meri mohabbat ho Maan meray jeenai ki wajha ab mai kabhi aap ko apnai aap sai dur nai karon gi meri dharkan tham jai gi.

Maan covered Geet's mouth with his hand.

Maan: phir kabhi aisa mat kehna mishti, pal pal mara hun mai tum sai juda hokai, tumharay bina mai aapni zindagi soch bhi nahi sakta yeh Maan kuch nahi hai tumharay bina, tum meray jinay ki wajha ho shona, meri dharkan ho, agar tumhay kuch hogaya to tumhara yeh Maan bhi nahi ji pai ga, tumhay meri qasam hai phir kabhi aisa mat kehna.

Geet nodded her head. She looked around the room and smiled.

Maan: kaisa laga meri pari ko uska yeh chota sa paristan.

Geet: Maan aap ka room bohat pyara hai.

Maan: aap ka nahi Mishti yeh hamara room hai. Agar kuch changes chahea to batao mai tumharay anai sai pehlay renuwate karwadun ga.

Geet: Maan kuch changes nahi chahea perfect hai aap ka meray matlab hai hamara room.

Maan smiled, they chatted for a while then joined dadi and Vicky.

LOUNGE:

Maan: dadi baat hue Geet kai ghar walon sai kya kaha unhon nai, koi problem to nahi hai na, who Maan gai na, aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahi.

Vicky: woho Bhai aap chup hoon gai to ham bolain gai na, itnai saray sawal aik saath, saans to lain aap.

Maan glared at Vicky.

Geet: Aisa kya dekh rahay hain Maan aap us becharay ko sahi to keh raha hai woh itnai saray sawal aik saath poch rahay hain dadi ko bolnai ka moqa to dain aap.

Maan looked towards dadi making baby face dadi giggled.

Dadi ma: bas or mat satao meray betay ko, han betay baat hogai hai ham kal jain gai apni bahu ka shagun laikai phir waheen engagement date decide kar lain gai. Ab khush.

Maan smiled and walked towards dadi.

Maan: bohat khush dadi ma, thank you, I love you dadi ma.

Dadi ma: love you to beta aur thanks ki koi zaroorat nahi hai bas aap khush raho hamain or kuch nahi chahea.

Maan smiled and sat beside dadi ma keeping his head on her shoulder and stealing glances of Geet who was looking down trying to hide her blush.

PRECAP: KHURANA'S MET SINGHANIA'S and SHAGUN.

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Posted: 7 years ago
lovely update
dadima so happy seeing Geet
she likes her
Maan gave her kangan that's touching
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Posted: 7 years ago
beautiful update
daadi n vicky happy to see geet
daadi talk to geet's parents n going to meet next evening for further things regarding marriage
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

lovely update
dadima so happy seeing Geet
she likes her
Maan gave her kangan that's touching


😊
Was not willing to update seeing response on last one specially on TNZMAZBD glad you like it 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

beautiful update

daadi n vicky happy to see geet
daadi talk to geet's parents n going to meet next evening for further things regarding marriage


😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 8

excellent update!

Dadi likes Geet! Maan gives Geet kangans!

lovely moments!

nice precap!

update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Part 8


excellent update!

Dadi likes Geet! Maan gives Geet kangans!

lovely moments!

nice precap!

update soon


Thanks 😊
Will try best to update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
oh ho ho...toh geet humesha k liye maan k honewali hai...
lovely update...

loved it very much...

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