SS:KAISAI MUJHAY TUM MILL GAYE. (Maaneet) DISCONTINUED

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Thank you GURMEET CHOUDHARY for being my inspiration.My all work is specially dedicated to you dear.

Hey guyz i wrote this short SS sometime back but never posted here, only few parts left this SS is almost towards the end, iam posting this SS Character Sketch hope you guyz will like it. Will post part 1 soon. May be some have read it on my blog or on my notes. Since few requested me to post on IF so iam sharing here also.

MAJOR MAAN SINGH KHURANA: 25 years old angry young man, full of discipline, Maan ko unlogon sai sakht nafrat hai jo discipline follow nahi kartay, waqt pai apni duties pai report nahi kartay, Maan kai dad ka sapna tha keh Maan Army join karay kyun keh who khud Army mai thai, aur apni jaan apnai mulk ki hifazat mai qurbaan kardi, Maan apnai teens mai hi tha jab uskai parents ki death hogai, parents kai death kai baad Maan ki dadi nai usai aur uskai chotai bhai ko sambhala, Maan hamesha sai larkiyon sai dur rehta tha, khamosh khamosh rehta tha, dadi ma Maan ki jaan hain, Maan ka sab kuch hain, aik din apni duty daitai hue kuch aisa hua jis nai Maan ko badal dia.

SAVIRTI SINGH KHURANA: Maan ki dadi ma aur Khurana Khandan ki head, apnai husband aur betay bahu ki death kai baad inka aik hi maqsad hai Maan aur Vikram ko har khushi daina, Maan ko uska aur uskai dad ka sapna pura karnai mai madat karna aur Vikram ko Khurana Industries sambhalnai mai help karna, Maan aur Vikram dadi ki puri zindagi hain aur unkai jeenai ki wajha.

VIKRAM SINGH KHURANA: 23 years old, sweet and fun loving boy, but well disciplined, Vikram dadi kai saath family business handle karta hai, aur har qadam pai usai apnai bhai ki fikar hoti hai, kyun keh usnai apnai dad ko bhi Army mai honai ki wajha sai khoya hai aur ab woh apnai bhai ko nahi khona chahta.

DR.GEET SINGHANIA: 24 years old, doctor at Sanjeevni Hospital, she is true bubbly girl, hassi mazak, masti karna, pranks karna Geet ki adat hai, but jab kisi patient ko attend karti hai to apnai kam mai usai zyada serious koi or nahi hosakta, one day she met a boy aur Geet ki zindagi usi ki hogai.


MORE CHARACTER WILL INTROUDUCED LATER IF REQUIRED.



PS: pms i can't promise please bookmark it if you want to read further



INDEX

Character Sketch page 1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued

Part 1 page 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued?pn=2

PART 2 page 4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued?pn=4

Note page 6 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued?pn=6

Part 3 page 7 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued?pn=7

Part 4 page 9 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued?pn=9

Part 5 Page 13 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued?pn=13

Part 6 Page 16 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued?pn=16

Teaser page 19 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued?pn=19

Part 7 Page 20 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued?pn=20

Teaser Page 22 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued?pn=22

Part 8 Page 22 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued?pn=22

Teaser page 24 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued

Part 9 Page 25 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued

Teaser page 27 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued

Part 10 Page 28 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued

Teaser page 29 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued

Part 11 Page 31 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued

Teaser page 33 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued

Part 12 Page 34 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4976529/ss-kaisai-mujhay-tum-mill-gaye-maaneet-discontinued


Complete Index of my work https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4981112/me-and-my-small-world-gurukideewai-fiction-index-discontinued

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Are you Misbah tanveer ?
Sorry to say I don't want to hurt you but character matches with her story and name too
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Originally posted by: hira2010

Are you Misbah tanveer ?
Sorry to say I don't want to hurt you but character matches with her story and name too


Yes it's me
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Many many congrats
I jusr hope you would continue it
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Many many congrats
I jusr hope you would continue it


Yes I will
15 parts already written will post then.
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Nice cs nd story line...Please do continue...Hoping to read it soon
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Congratulations on your story
Character Sketch is very Interesting
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Congrats on the SS!

lovely cs!

do update soon
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Originally posted by: -gurukideewani-



Yes I will
15 parts already written will post then.


wow that's great
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PART 1

KHURANA MANSION:

Early morning, Vikram aka Vicky woke up hearing a melodious voice of his dadi who was offering prayers in Mandir, he quickly came out of bed had his quick bath he went to his bhai's room to check him and then joined his dadi at puja, dadi saw him and smiled, she looked around when Vicky nodded his head in negative, dadi patted his face and continue her puja. After puja dadi turned towards Vicky and give him Arti and Prasad, after taking both the things he joined hands in front of murti then bend down to take dadi's blessing, dadi blessed him and both moved towards lounge.

Vicky: Good morning dadi ma, sorry thora late hogaya puja kai liye aankh nahi khuli thi.

Dadi ma: koi baat nahi betay itnai bhi late nahi hue aap, waisai Maan kahan hain.

Vicky: dadi ma mai anai sai pehlay bhai ko dekhta wa aya tha, woh itnai sukoon sai soo rahay thai mera mann nahi kia unhain uthanai ka, sarhad pai to pata nahi woh kaisai sotay aur rehtai hoon gai, ab yahan main office mai unki posting hai to mai nai socha unhain sonai doon, thora dantain gai hi na puja kai liye na uthanai kai liye koi baat nai magar meray liye unsai zyada kuch eham nahi hai dadi ma.

Dadi smiled and cupped his face between her palms and kissed his forehead.

Dadi ma: Maan betay bohat khush qismat hain keh aap unkai bhai ho, Vicky ham rahain ya na rahain aap apnai bhai ka aisa hi khayal karna, aap jantai hain unhay woh kabhi bhi kisi sai kuch nahi kehtai sab andar hi andar sehtay rehtay hain, bas isi tarhan unka saath daitai rehna aur unka khayal rakhna beta.

Vicky: dadi ma pehli baat aap hamsai dur kahen nahi jao gai, mai aur bhai aap kai bina apni zindagi soch bhi nahi saktay, aur dadi ma mai wada karta hun mai bhai ka saath kabhi nahi choroon ga, unka hamesha khayal rakhoon ga, aap kai aur bhai kai elawa mera hai hi kon dadi ma.

Dadi ma: chalo chal kai hamaray rajkumar ko utha tai hain, phir breakfast karain gai.

Vicky smile and nodded, both stood and walked towards Maan's room, Vicky open the door and both walked inside, Maan was sleeping peacefully burying his half face in pillow, dadi smile and sat beside Maan, she slowly run her fingers in his hairs, Maan smiled in his sleep and placed his head on dadi's lap. Vicky giggled looking this, dadi put her finger on her lips and signaled Vicky to be quiet, she slowly caressed Maan's cheeks and kissed his forehead.

Dadi ma: Maan betay, uthain aap ko bhook lagi hogi na, raat ko khana bhi nahi khaya tha.

Maan smiled and buried his face in dadi's lap.

Maan: dadi ma please na thori dair or sonai dain, itnai dino baad to itni achi aur sukoon ki neend aai hai.

Vicky: ji bhai ham jantai hain, is liye aap ko pehlay nahi uthaya, puja kai liye bhi nahi, magar aap ko nashta to karna hi paray ga na warna aap bimar hojao gai, utho na dopahar mai rest karlaina.

Maan: acha uth raha hun, aap log jao mai 15 mins mai aya.

Dadi ma: theekh hai beta jaldi ana, aur wapas mat sona.

Dadi patted his face and left Vicky left after her closing the door behind.

Maan slowly open his dreamy eyes, removed the quilt, lifted himself little and rested his back against back support, he lift his hands and stretch himself, he looked at the clock it's almost 9, he got up and moved towards his wardrobe, he pulled out his favourite white shirt and blue jeans, he kept the shirt on bed, picked up the towel and walked towards bathroom to have his bath, after some time he came out wearing jeans and towel round his neck and drying his hairs with the end of towel, he walked towards bed kept the towel and wore his shirt leaving first three button open. He walked towards dresser and set his hairs, he then wore his watch and put his favourite Armani cologne, after getting ready he walked down to join dadi and Vicky.

Maan: Good morning dadi ma, Good morning Vicky, I hope mai zyada late nahi hua hun.

Vicky: Good morning bhai, late or woh bhi MAJOR MAAN SINGH KHURANA, impossible bhai.

Maan smiled at his little bro's sweet comment.

Dadi ma: Good morning betay nahi Maan aap late nai hue ho, chalo nashta karo phir mai aap ko arti aur Prasad daiti hun.

Maan: sorry dadi, kal sai pakka subha puja mai saath hoon ga.

Dadi ma: koi baat nahi Maan betay aab to aap yaheen hamaray pass hi hona, chalo ab jaldi nashta karlo bhook lagi haina.

Maan: ji dadi ma bohat.

Dadi smiled and served both her grandson's. After having their breakfast , Maan went upstairs to wash his hand, he came down and walked towards Madir where dadi was waiting for him, dadi give him arti and Prasad, Maan took it and bowed in front of murti and prayed silently, he then bend down to take dadi's blessings. Maan and dadi walked towards lounge when Maan's phone rang, he excused himself and received the call.

Maan: Hello, Major Maan Singh Khurana speaking.

Other side: Maan it's me, you have to report duty as soon as possible there is a terrorist attack at XYZ School and Army needs to handle it, so come as soon as possible.

Maan: Yes sir, I'll be there as soon as possible.

Other side: Okay.

Maan put his cell and rushed upstairs, he walked towards his wardrobe and pulled out his uniform, he changed his clothes, and came towards dresser he adorn himself with all his medals and wore his cap, after getting dressed up he rushed downstairs where Vicky and dadi was waiting for him.

Vicky: bhai kya hua achanak.

Maan: Vicky kisi school pai terrorist attack hua hai aur mujhay wahan jana hai.

Vicky looked horrified and hold his hand.

Vicky: nahi bhai please mat jao, papa ko bhi mai nai aisai hi kisi terrorist attack mai khoya hai aap ko nahi kho sakta, please bhai mat jao, please.

Maan hold Vicky's shoulder.

Maan: chotay unhai meri zaroorat hai, us school mai chotay chotay masoom bachay hain, unki jaan ko khatra hai, un masoom bachoon ka kya qasoor hai Vicky, mujhay kuch nahi hoga, janai do please.

Vicky: bhai.

Maan pulled him in a hug, he hugged him tightly.

Maan: mujhay kuch nahi hoga, daro nahi Vicky. Un bachoon ko zaroorat hai meri.

Dadi ma: Vicky janai do apnai bhai ko, Maan sahi keh rahay hain.

Maan came out of hug and wipe Vicky tears.

Maan: chalo ab rona band karo kuch nahi hoga mujhay.

Vicky smiled and hugged him, after hugged Maan bend down and took dadi's blessings, dadi blessed him and both hugged each other, Maan left after looking behind at his both lives.

SINGHANIA MANSION:

Singhania Mansion environment is totally different from Khurana Mansion. Singhania is a big family, darji head of family, his only son "BRIJAISH and daughter-in-law "RADHIKA and 1 grand daughter "GEET and 1 grand son "ADITYA, usually Singhania mansion is filled with noises only because of Geet and her small brother Aditya.

Early morning Aditya was playing with his remote car when he collided with his mom, he looked up and said sorry before running from there.

Radhika: hey babaji yeh larka subha subha shuru hogaya, aur who Geet abhi tak so rahai hai phir bolay gi hospital kai liye late hogaya.

Darji: kya hua bahu itni pareshaan kyun ho.

Radhika: kuch nahi bauji subha subha in dono bachoon ka hamgama shuru hojata hai, aik so rahi hai dosray nai ghar sar par uthaya wa hai.

Darji: koi baat nahi bahu bachay to hain. Geet uthi.

Radhika: nahi bauji, abhi jakai utha ti hun.

Radhika went to Geet's room to wake her up, she slowly patted her face.

Radhika: Geet uth ja beta 9 baj rahay hain, hospital nai jana kya.

Geet: kya maa sonai do na

Radhika: Geet 9 baj rahay hain 9:30 tera reporting time hai, Dr.Shahshank bohat gussa hoon gai.

Geet woke up with a jerk.

Geet: kya 9 baj gai maa aap nai pehlay kyun nahi uthaya.

Geet quickly picked her clothes and rushed to have a bath, after having bath bath she quickly dressed up and rushed downstairs.

Aditya: hey didi Good Morning.

Geet: Good morning champ.

Brijaish: Geet beth nashta kar.

Geet: nahi dad bohat dair hogai hai mai jarahi hun warna shamat aai gi.

Mean while Geet's phone rang, she looked at the caller it's Armaan she quickly picked the call.

Armaan: oye Geet kahan ho, tum ham sab ki subha subha class lagwao gi Dr.Shahshank kai haathon.

Geet: sorry yar bas nikal rahi hun.

Armaan: jaldi aa mai or Ridhima tera parking lot mai wait kar rahay hain, saath jain gai andar.

Geet: han aarahi hun, ab rakho phone.

Geet grabbed one toast and started to ran from there when Radhika spoke.

Radhika: aray Geet sahi sai nashta to kar

Geet: nahi maa bohat late hogaya bye.

Geet rushed outside and proceed towards hospital.

PRECAP: MAAN IN HOSPITAL , IN SERIOUS CONDITION.

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