The Written Apology*Maaneet SS*UPDATED CH6,7@Pg66*COMPLETED*28th Mar

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#561

Chap 7

splendid gif

tremendous update! wonderfully written!

admire Maan's love for Geet! at least that cleared the issue abt Ranveer! can understand why he was upset!

Geet is such a nuatnaki! now she demands a written apology!

amusing written apology cum proposal! Geet was defn not impressed!

Geet loves to tease Maan!

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#562

Epilogue!

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magnificent epilogue! brilliantly written!

Maaneet married! loved this bold Geet! Maan peeved as she published their story! hmm the male protagonist his portrayed in a negative light!

her readers are bashing him! Maan is so dramatic lol!

liked this possessive Maan!

perfect end!

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#563

Congrats on completing ur first SS!👏⭐️

thanks for this beautiful SS! 😃

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

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Posted: 7 years ago

#564

A very beautiful and hilarious ending! I loved how you included your readers in your epilogue. They are in a story!! So cool!!!

I had a great time reading it!! Love the funny comebacks.

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Tris

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Posted: 7 years ago

#565

❤️ this is always going 2 b in my bookmark

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 7 years ago

#566

Hi ipti. .

Wonderful story .it's amazing .I loved reading it .this maneet is so special together they r fighting with each other for each other.their taunting and appreciating each other .

Thanks for the beautiful story

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Reshu

@mayapari

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Posted: 7 years ago

#567

Superb update!!!
Maan already knows about geet
Nice
They both love each other so much !!!
Haha written proposal
Oh not so Cliche epilogue!!!
Nice one

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 7 years ago

#568

Awesome updates baby

As always very well written 👏

Finally geet revealed her reason to him after contemplating a lot

Wakai me maan ne writers ki bajadi 😆

And maan he knew everything about her spying and all right from the beginning

Really admire his patience and love

This geet is really something yaar

Quite different and antique piece she is 😉

From no where she keep getting ideas and plots

Epilogue was fab and hilarious

Read this 3 parts over and over again

Can't get enough of them

It's quite funny how she incorporates every scene in her fictions

Poor maan kuch Kare toh dhamki 😆

Really loved how it ended

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: Roopa_1
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Woah .. Awesome baby ...maan as managing director of newspaper and geet is journalist and writer as well.. Liked them in their new profession... Lekin kisi bhi profession mein ho maan is msk only full of attitude and ego.. Yaha bhi geet ko tang kar raha hain.. He wanted to tranfer geet but why?? He is being extremely sarcastic... They kissed each other??😲 So do they love each other? ?? Hmmm unki bathon se patha chal raha ki dono ke beech kuch hain aur kuch huya hain... 😉Maan wantedly saying that he is going for a date with amyrah only to hurt geet... he thought he would enjoy after seeing geets reaction but her hurtful eyes didnt pleased him ... He also agreed to get engaged with amyrah by breaking geets heart... I guess he is faking... His remark about bold women is a direct taunt to geet i guess... Hmm lets see what happens next.. Waiting baby

Thank you so much baby!! I guess all your questions are answered by now!! 😆

And your comment indeed pissed Maan as well!! 😉

Originally posted by: naanii.1389
Very nice

Thanks dearie! 😳

Originally posted by: aparna3011
fabulous

Thanks a lot aparna!! 😃

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#570

Originally posted by: AYAZU12
awesome start dear the story seems really interesting...maan is geet's boss and now he is transferring her to another branch making her angry but seems like they like or love each h other but have some problems or still haven't realised it and they had kissed too and maan is going on a date with another woman and is ready to get engaged to her and taunted geet that he likes bold women unlike her...interesting start dear looking forward to the story...Happy women's day to you too dear...

I am glad that you find this story interesting with the first update itself!! Lovely comment by you!!

Thank you so very much for your super awesome feedback!! 😳

Originally posted by: nakh5683
Awesome update Congo on new story so maan and geet work in a newspaper maan is an editor and geet a writer but now he is transferring her to another department geet confront masn who is answering in his own sarcastic way seems both love each other and maan being a jerk and idiot want to make her jealous so she accept her feeling I guess so poor geet all shattered while maan shamelessly telling about his adventures with the girl he will have whom he is gonna marry

Lovely analysis by your Nakh...
Hahahaha Is he being a jerk?? 😉
Thanks a lot for your lovely comment!!

Originally posted by: curtus
Cs is different n intersting

Thanks baby!! 😳

Originally posted by: taahir004
Fantastic Start

Maan is a Managing Editor while Geet is a Photo journalist
he transfers her because he is in love with her and cannot accept that fact
but why ,
it seems like he is hurt by her but the taunts by him towards Geet just indicates that he is covering up his hurt
he tells her that he is going on a date
with Aamyrah and that he is also going to get engaged with her as he likes her because she is bold
maybe Geet shyed away from intimacy and this had hurt Maan

Wow!! I am very happy that you called the starting as fantastic!!
Hahaha did she shy away from intimacy?? 😉 I guess now you know the answer!! 😆

Thank you very very much for your wonderful comment Taahir!! 😳