The Written Apology*Maaneet SS*UPDATED CH6,7@Pg66*COMPLETED*28th Mar - Page 56

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Posted: 7 years ago
Epilogue@

There is no doubt that this is one of the best epilogues i have read so far. Nd i have read a lot of stories btw.
Maan nd geet god they r impossible nd too much cute in this ss
They totally enjoy each other nd share a deep bond.
Even within this stort ss i can see a hyped super awesome chemistry.
Their passion speaks through the whole story nd unlike maan i loved the title of the epilogue
However its cliche nd cheesy but this story was not that at all rather a total enjoyable awesome unique plot.
Geet is really crazy nd maan's fuming was one of the most adorable one
Btw maan 😡 i am still pissed that u called me with funny names huh so much 4 supporting u haa? Geet ne bohot acha kia 😡
Taahir khwaish nd roopa 😆 he he where is roopa's outstanding comment btw? 😉
Loved this how u included readers comment and mingled that with the plot. 👏
Oh i am just in love with their dialogues. It was 2 much fun when geet said ab iske liye bhi written apology mangoge? 🤣 i can imagine how that teased maan
That old gold digging hag comment was hilarious
Nd yes maaneet do belong 2 each other only. Loved maans possessiveness geets quirkyness
Nd their crazy banter filled passionate love.
Oh yea i wanted to write u down the erotic one but koi nehi. Kisi aur me de do 😆
Overall i have enjoyed this thoroughly baby 🤗 thank u so much for writing such a beautiful cute humorous ss
Edited by curtus - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Epilogue

Now this has to be the first time ever I'm reading an Epilogue that has such freshness and so spicy
Maan and Geet are married and they little arguements are all about the colums the stories that Geet writes but yes even Geet's readers were a bit harsh they only pointed fingers at Avimaan thats so unfair 😆
I just adore when Maan actually carries on so naive and childlike , it seems he himself adores these little tantrums thrown at his wife it probably just adds more fun and laughter into their lives
but yes he too is very serious about the stories that his wife writes and now concerned if she will also write about their moments but hey he need not fear as no one knows Geet is writing about her very own life
their readers like Avimaan and Geeta so wharever story Geet writes her readers will swoon in to read
wow I just love when Geet says she make the female character fall in love with someone else and possessive Maan cannot hear this he wants her to take back those words he is so cute when he is with her . but his possessiveness is clear she only belongs to him
it seems their love just grows all the time
both happy in their lives and deeply in love with each other

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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you for such a Beautiful story
I totally enjoyed it
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ok now i feel free as well
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But i have so much more to say
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Posted: 7 years ago
That was fabulous
2 parts and one epilogue all together, I am super happy
Loved it thoroughly
Geet was actually an appointed spy for Maan's company. Maan knowing that wanted to see what she does more or does she harm him. But instead found her giving her best at work and his feelings for her grew more
Written proposal was funny. It had too much to say not only for their marriage but also kids, specifically mentioned baby girl

The epilogue was awesome. Geet the writer had been biased towards her husband giving wrong details about him in her story.

Loved this story all written in "A Written Apology"

Keep writing such awesome stories :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome updates..
Thank you for pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb outstanding and mind blowing story:):):) Kudos to you my dear for such a wonderfully written story...From conceptualising it...to your characters, putting your sweet simple plot so beautifully across...I am completely bowled over...By your writing and the unique story:):):) I loved each and every single sentence of it...Saying it from the bottom of my heart...I relish reading this story so so much...I loved each and every nuance of emotion from both Maan and Geet...their cute antics with one another...and their possessiveness...the cute antics, cribbing, yearning for confession of love...cuddling into one another showering love...loved them both so much...so so much:):):) Such outstanding writing dearie:):):) I truly truly loved this one so so much:):):)


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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome story
Loved reading it all in one go full of
Maaneet and funny romance
A new concept with editor and journalist
Geet she has a lot of shades in her
Innocent, sweet, jealous, possessive,
And filled with lots of love which is hard
To express for her love
Maan his confession is so straight forward
And he is not even ready to take no as
An answer
Even if it is not said in a romantic way
His feelings and the depth of his love
For geet is beyond everything
The way you had written the story is
So perfect
Simple misunderstanding , jealous
And possessive in love for each other
Overall the written apology had became
A marriage proposal

Edited by vasavi_sri - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
fab banner... love it👏⭐️




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Posted: 7 years ago
Chap 6

amazing gif...

wonderful update! excellently written!

can understand her hesitation! she is so nervous! but glad she revealed the truth! she was sent there to get info! she was helpless!

but slowly and steadily she started admiring him and falling in love with him! she reveals the reason why she did not confess!

wow Maan knew this! Geet flabbergasted! but he knows the real her! she is helped an orphan!

great that her past does not matter! he loves her nevertheless!

Maan is indeed one in a million!


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