The Written Apology*Maaneet SS*UPDATED CH6,7@Pg66*COMPLETED*28th Mar

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

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Posted: 7 years ago

#541

Awesome ending
Oo Geet join Maan's office because of spying him
But baad mai Maan ki be intelligence and caring nature ki wajah se Geet is feeling guilty for her deeds
She is attracted towards his smartness and well being and finely she fell in love with him
Epilogue is awesome
Beautifully written
Loved it 👏

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#542

Congratulations on finishing your first story on GF

Well Done !!!

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@astrisa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#543

So tell me miss iptida you have already teased almost all plot twist in part 6 so what plot twist do you have for your other stories?
Kinda making my hope getting raised for your excellent ffs.
But i should have known by the intricate plot of predestined.
Waiting eagerly for mp dte updates

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#544

Chapter 6

Maan knew Geet had some fear within her about the marriage he could see she was beating around the bush been playful but when the moment came for her to reveal her truth she filled with both fear and nervousness and she tells Maan that she was hired to leak information

to cause hassles in his newspaper but he surprises her and tells her he did do a background check on her and he also found out the reasons but her eagerness to work and make sure his paper runs smoothly is also something he could not ignore

the fact that she took her six months salary and had given away in charity confirmed the woman he was falling for was indeed kind .

Maan tells her he loves her and he knew everything and even if she had not told him anything now his love for her would never change

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@astrisa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: Iptida

<font color="#009999">Btw your stalking skills are scintillating!!😆

Now i hope to get 3 generous honest res from you!!😊</font>

I guess that credit goes 2 u
Bcz u kept us waiting
Wher is ur written apology? 😆

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@astrisa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: Iptida
<font color="#009999">After almost 10 Months I have finally completed a story!!🤣
Ye shakal kidhar chupau!!🤣</font>

Mp me chupa le aur ud dena shuru kar

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aachal20

@aachal20

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Posted: 7 years ago

#547

really nice story.and the end.maaneet are sweet and mad.

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#548

Chapter 7

Beautiful Chapter

Maan is so deeply in love with Geet and the manner in which he adores her its so lovely

I really like how he wants her to say she loves him and only him and will love him until the end of time

its like he wants her promise though he knows she loves him yet he wants to hear her love is only for him its almost as if he is a teen wanting his partner to confess all the time

but then thats the depth of his love not wanting reassurance but wanting to hear his lovers voice say those words just for him

Ranveer's issue was sorted quickly which now makes me think how quickly misunderstandings can occur in a relationship Maan was totally shattered hearing Geet and Ranveer's conversation and now it was about her cousins not even her

Maan knew he made some harsh comments to Geet but its great that even he cleared he nor Geet are sexually active which is good because his statement about Aamyrah made me think differently about him but now its confirmed he is not active in that way

both Maan and Geet are so involved with every plot of her story and yes he remembers all her stories though he tells her its boring I think he enjoys irrirating her just to see her reactions while she too also does the same with him

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@astrisa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#549

Chapter 7@
😃 this just brought a huge smile on my face.
Geet is really an antique nd Maan is definitely a dramaking.
After geet's confession maan asked about ranveer nd it was as simple as geet explained.
However i do not think maan was taking geet wrong. He was mad at her because she was delaying her confession nd the ranveer issue might have snapped him. Because in chapter 3 he was processing all the possibilities. Nd there its clear that he was not taking her wrong but his patience ran out nd maybe he was jealous because he wants 2 know everything about geet nd wants a recognition as her lover.
Thats why i was d one who didn't think wrong about him. Because by bold he meant confession nd probably wanted 2 make geet j by that whole intimacy comment.
But geet ne acha sabak sikhaya maan ko. 🤣
Ab do written apology maan babu 😆 lol
He seriously wrote all those? He he he he. I can't stop laughing. Ab samjh me agya pura ka pura story ka name written apology kyu hai aur uska asli meaning.
It started with an apology but ended with the most cute nd funny marriage proposal ever.
Loved how he said sorry nd the parmeshawar wala line rofl
Also that gorgeous neck wala comment.
👏 just awesome. I so much laughed nd enjoyed reading this.
Nd the last line by geet of answring maan was totally mindblowing
I am sure maan is more 2 b happy 2 find his horny wife