Tormented MG OS updated Final Part on Page 28 / 19-3-2018 - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
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you removed it
not able to read
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Posted: 7 years ago
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confusion geet is mysterious personalty
wt she feared n who is tht girls that screaming is it geet
n maan have gf hope maan nt serious with her
seemd to know geet past is it rralted to maan
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Posted: 7 years ago
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How can I read the update??? 😭 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb update

I was crying while reading this part, poor brij and Geet had to gone so much in their childhood

Little bit of their past is reviled
So there is someone who use to beat brij and Geet, who was that person, their father or some relative
Is Geet sacred becoz of that person, did he try to do something

Is that person dead or alive becoz if he is alive I am going to kill that monster

So that night Maan and Geet intimate but that was a weak moment for both
I won't blame Maan for that as at that time they were young and now he had move on
But I really like the part where Maan is still concern for Geet and he is blaming himself that he should have not left her

Maan really care for Geet that's why he is guilty and now he should take out Geet from this trauma
Brij should help Maan to make his sister normal

Update was really superb

Continue soon as I want to know who is that person and now what will Maan do
Edited by lovemaaneet90 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So they consummate 8 years before.. but he left her as it is.. and afterwards something terrible happened nd he came to know about it nd feeling guilty.. nd he wanted to killed again who was the man
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Both sibling have been went through so much in the past.. nd her past still taut her
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update...
u just give little glimpse of their past... both brother and sister gone through such a bad phase till now...
want to know who beat them???? and what happened when he left her...
its one of their relative like...
can't wait to know...
looking forward for next part...
continue soon...
Edited by karamjeet - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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will comment tomorrow
too tired today
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update dii
Still confused
Geet is taking psychiatrist help
Brij didn't tell Geet past to Maan
Which make him angry
He asked from doctor and after knowing that shock him
Larkin woh past hai Kya humian bhii dii jaldi batto
Making her smile they consummate
But now he is cursing himself leaving her alone
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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super update baby . geet was fainted in the mall washroom due to darkness . maan & her friends brought her back in home & called brij . maan want to know about her but brij didn't tell him anything about geet's condition so he went to meet her doctor & threatened him then doctor told him everything , he remembered their past ... someone tortured geet & brij & geet & maan came close intimately but maan left her & leave India & result is geet's destruction . now maan was repenting .
eagerly waiting for next part .

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