(MG-OS) CLUMSY LOVE (Feb'2nd 2K18) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Wow...finally read it..😊

I had missed to read in farewell thread😊

AMAZING update my dear👏

They make a perfect mismatch...he a perfectionist and she a clumsy...but still they are made for each other😳. This has been beautifully expressed in this OS. .Amazingly written.👏

Originally posted by: anu5

Simple and lucid one shot

Liked it!! Well penned.

A tale of perfect mis match !! Maan and Geet's story depicts the tale of lovestory between discrepancy. Maan who is considered to be as a stickler of perfection fell in love with a beautiful maiden characterized with maladroit. Geet's uncoordinated and graceful deportment out shined her from entire crowd which ensnared Maan in web of love and affection. Loved their childhood cute memories which both remembered as wistfully happy times. Geet showered Maan with her clumsy demeanor whilst he was proposing her too but it was her inelegance and lack of guile that moved his heart and touched is soul. Lovely OS

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Originally posted by: -Gemini-

Beautiful OS😊

Originally posted by: saf24

A really endearing OS. Loved the scenarios they were placed in and the way it all came together. Loved it. Great job a always.

Originally posted by: Nefret19

Oh my my I absolutely loved it. Its such a sweet and cute love story between Maaneet:):):) How cutely clumsy Geet becomes in Maan's presence and how Maan grows accustomed to it always thinking of her as that sweet childhood friend of his. And how he mentored her for her to develop herself...A very endearing tale of sweet love:):):)

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06

I already read this story in the farewell thread dr...but didn't comment...it's an awesome story...Maan is Geet's boss but he's so sweet...Geet gets the job in place of her father who is ill...She makes mistakes for which she gets scolding from Maan and she gets scared of her job but he doesn't fire her...slowly they becomes good friends and Maan falls in love with Geet...Geet is so innocent and cute...Maan gets sad to know that a guy is coming to see Geet but gets very happy when she rejects that guy...he plans to propose her in fear of losing her...finally he proposes her leaving her shocked...She denies first since she belongs to a middle class family but Maan's gesture makes her accepts him...they are now a married couple enjoying their reception...loved it...thank u 4 pm...

Originally posted by: angeldream14

sweet n cute

so its was her fall or his surely his

Originally posted by: tammana.m

wowww superb part😊

geet did mistake ealier maan get angry bt now he to get habbit

the small geet maan story really cute😃

Originally posted by: taahir004

This is such a Beautiful OS

Mr Perfectionist and his Mrs Clumsy

together they Mr and Mrs Maan Singh Khurana

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

That's truly a clumsy wala love..He he he

Cute os doc