(MG-OS) CLUMSY LOVE (Feb'2nd 2K18)

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Lakshmi

@Vaidhumom

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Wow...finally read it..😊

I had missed to read in farewell thread😊

AMAZING update my dear👏

They make a perfect mismatch...he a perfectionist and she a clumsy...but still they are made for each other😳. This has been beautifully expressed in this OS. .Amazingly written.👏

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Simple and lucid one shot

Liked it!! Well penned.

A tale of perfect mis match !! Maan and Geet's story depicts the tale of lovestory between discrepancy. Maan who is considered to be as a stickler of perfection fell in love with a beautiful maiden characterized with maladroit. Geet's uncoordinated and graceful deportment out shined her from entire crowd which ensnared Maan in web of love and affection. Loved their childhood cute memories which both remembered as wistfully happy times. Geet showered Maan with her clumsy demeanor whilst he was proposing her too but it was her inelegance and lack of guile that moved his heart and touched is soul. Lovely OS

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saf24

@saf24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

A really endearing OS. Loved the scenarios they were placed in and the way it all came together. Loved it. Great job a always.

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Nefret19

@Nefret19

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Oh my my I absolutely loved it. Its such a sweet and cute love story between Maaneet:):):) How cutely clumsy Geet becomes in Maan's presence and how Maan grows accustomed to it always thinking of her as that sweet childhood friend of his. And how he mentored her for her to develop herself...A very endearing tale of sweet love:):):)

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suni_104

@suni_104

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

wonderful update
Maan is full perfect geet full clumsy
geet coofe girl Maan is kind

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

I already read this story in the farewell thread dr...but didn't comment...it's an awesome story...Maan is Geet's boss but he's so sweet...Geet gets the job in place of her father who is ill...She makes mistakes for which she gets scolding from Maan and she gets scared of her job but he doesn't fire her...slowly they becomes good friends and Maan falls in love with Geet...Geet is so innocent and cute...Maan gets sad to know that a guy is coming to see Geet but gets very happy when she rejects that guy...he plans to propose her in fear of losing her...finally he proposes her leaving her shocked...She denies first since she belongs to a middle class family but Maan's gesture makes her accepts him...they are now a married couple enjoying their reception...loved it...thank u 4 pm...