He Is Not a Robot ( Thread 1 ) - Page 25

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

<font color="#FF00FF"><font size="2">I really love your writing..
though it is very simple with no complex terms or phrases used..
but it's still great & classy.. At least you use proper grammar, & do not eat up the prepositions..
The concepts that you choose require simple & understandable language..
sometimes people have nice concepts, but they do not express them properly because of their poor writing skills whereas sometimes there is no concept at all & people simply use all the complex terms ever known to make it look something great..
Both of which I do not really enjoy..
sometimes it's simple writing that reach out to people & make them connect to the story..
You've got talent.. just a little improvisation is required..
a little more connection with emotions..
Really enjoy your writing.. But mind it commelina is still my favorite😉</font></font>

thnx ...and me too love commelina ...she is legend like Littmissbossy
and don't forget Lizzie ...I'm her fan


about writing I'm actually don't know how to complicate situation or hot stuff... 😳 see I lack in many, thnx for picking only one
and emotion yup its most difficult for me ..sometimes I can feel it but can't give them to words ...
and I don't think it will improve ever 😃 😆

Woah thx 4 ud
Jaldi jaldi comment krungi

thanks 4 da pm...

U r awesome as a writer mene phle b kha he kyu ki ajkal mjhe bhot kam writing pasand ati he
I hope u dn get urself muddled up in2 comparisons n b da way u r as ur original self is very good
N so is d ud i liked it
He is not a robot bt he has lots of emotions which he feels n xpresses
Pata nhi kia kr rhi he ladki hamari
Geet is still mere smjh k bhar 😃
Chalo he looks like robot bt geet tum kyu nhu dekh paa rahi ho he likes u n is trying his best 2 make u ease up
Loved maans line regarding kank n srk
They r in a party n talking abt exes lol
Maan hit on a married woman? That is so unlike him lol
His colorful affair sagas were interesting just like him
Waiting 4 geet 2 understand his view 4 once n try 2 act mature n cordial
Bt bichari abhi tak bhul nhi pai he dev ko
I hope maan will not turn in2 hum dil de chuke sanam ka ajay n try 2 reconcile his female devdas with her ex flame
Thx a lot 4 ud
Waiting eagerly 4 next

nice update ...
to be very honest I m getting irritated with geet's behaviour towards maan ...she don't like him it's fine but why she have to be so rude ? she behaves rudely with him most of the tym...
maan understand her so well ...

Originally posted by: deep002

Superb update dear

thnx for reading

Originally posted by: nigah

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6">Thanks for the pm and update was waiting for it...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6">Felling so sad for him ...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6">Geet never tries to understand him well how can she understand him he never shows any emotion ...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6">Maan always understands her so well ...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6">So maan had a research on her before👏👏👏... smart...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6">So he must be knowing about Dev ...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6">Keep going maan... apni bivi ka dil jeeto...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6">Waiting for next update and also update soon your other stories to...</font>

no maan was not aware about dev he did research on her but only her current life
she and dev broke up at London and for one year she living India so maan only knows about her past one year life
thnx for reading

Originally posted by: Pqwert207

Nice update

Aww i love this maan

Tooo honest

Geet still hav feelings for dev? poor maan

She s not trying to under stand him

Thnxz for pm

she too lost in past to see her future
thnx for reading

Originally posted by: neasya

awesome part dear...

will be waiting for the next part dear please update soon and thank you for the pm...

thnx for reading