He Is Not a Robot ( Thread 1 )

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Sneha

@neasya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#231

awesome part dear...

will be waiting for the next part dear please update soon and thank you for the pm...

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 7 years ago

#232

hilarious update geet attending a party with maan but hating it she is feeling like a trophy wife even maan dosen't like parties he is so colorful telling about his dating how he dated before but failed miserably geet laughing at his adventures gone bad but then his words hit her bad making her guilty as she was thinking about dev where her whole attention should be on maan but one geet notice that no one can understand her better than maan he had done research on her before marrying her but he is right that geet gives up her fights easily

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#233

Nice update dear

Liked it!!

Just to keep Maan's heart Geet agreed to accompany him for a party but ended up regretting her decision to attend it. Geet was contemplating over things after seeing the ambiance and felt thyself to be his trophy wife. Maan apropos to his honest and straight forward deportment shared about his ex- flames and colorful life to Geet and his failed attempts. Maan's utterance made her feel guilty and was in quandary and self analysis. Maan understand s Geet better than anyone can or does. Hope Maan wins her love and trust with his charming personality and deportment. Liked the way, how Maan's character is shaping up!!

Thanks for the pm!

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PEARLPOO

@PEARLPOO

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Posted: 7 years ago

#234

Rather than robotic I can say, he is a person who talks vid out filters hahaha but he's truthful which is very hard to b lyk DAT n his ex stories are awesome omg he's explaining her so neatly as if its a film story. Geet has been shown mirror abt her career n her way of taking things in lyf. Nice update splly maan character its making so curious abt what he vl speak next🤣 Thanq for pm.

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#235

Awe!! that was so sweet.. one woman man😳
Geet is lucky to have him yet she doesn't realize it..
maan & his failed relationships🤣
OMG!! he did actually say all that to madhu😲
Devdas wife was epic😆
Last part was really nice.. he understood her so well in such less time.
& here she calls him a robot.. Robot do not understand people's emotions..
She is thinking upon his words which is good..😉

I came back home after giving my practicals.. & logged in to my account..
& here I get a pleasant surprise.. Update😉
after such hectic day.. it was really awesome way to decompress..
I am laughing so hard that my stomach aches..
My brother is looking at me as if I am some runaway patient from a mental asylum..🤣

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#236

I really love your writing..
though it is very simple with no complex terms or phrases used..
but it's still great & classy.. At least you use proper grammar, & do not eat up the prepositions..
The concepts that you choose require simple & understandable language..
sometimes people have nice concepts, but they do not express them properly because of their poor writing skills whereas sometimes there is no concept at all & people simply use all the complex terms ever known to make it look something great..
Both of which I do not really enjoy..
sometimes it's simple writing that reach out to people & make them connect to the story..
You've got talent.. just a little improvisation is required..
a little more connection with emotions..
Really enjoy your writing.. But mind it commelina is still my favorite😉

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#237

great update

maan is really a understanding person

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#238

Awesome update.. .

Maan is such a cutie... I think robot name suits more for geet... She is not yet ready to move on with him. ..still thinking abt her ex She is not seeing his pure feelings and is more concerned abt his expressionless face.. Does the expressions even matter if he is expressing his feelings in words? ??

Loved the way he said that he is one woman man... Geet is really a devdas... He understands her very well... Hope she realise that...

Loved all the ex stories said by maan.. Lol thats very funny 🤣 all his love stories are incomplete... Omg he dated a married woman 😆 I never knew that boys have fantasies abt older women ... 😆His secretary story is more than awesome 🤣 sometimes kids become our saviours 😆

Maan made geet to once think abt her career... Glad that she is thinking abt his words...

😊

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T.Peru

@T.Peru

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+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#239

Nice update

Poor Maan

Also it good that they had little communication

Thanks for PM

Update soon

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preyasekar

@preyasekar

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#240

SUPER UPDATE
MAAN'S PAST IS HILARIOUS
GEET IS ALSO ENJOING WITH HIM
BUT REALLY GEET IS TRYING TO ACKNOWGE HIS CAPACITY HOW HE UNDERSTOOD HER VERY WELL NOT ONLY HER ALMOST EVERY SINGLE THING RELATED TO HER

I HOPE GEET WILL FALL IN LOVE WITH HIM SOON

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