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Posted: 7 years ago
#41
Congrtz on the new story
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#42
Awesome prologue
Maan was enjoying on beach but his plan got drenched due 2 his bro
Naintara is in love with dev
Tara n geet r sis
Geet is so cute n she loves food
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Very cute start waiting 4 next eagerly
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
lovely prologue
geet n Tara give real sibling vibes geet cute
maan ka vacation off oops because of dev
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good to see u here again
its a treat to read ur story
Maanmeet always my fav
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Chapter 1

Three days later

Geet Haunda got off the bus from Hoshiyarpur. she went to look for a taxi which could take her to the khaurana constructions.

Originally her sister Naintara was suppose to come but she had fallen ill and worrying her future mother in law would get hurt for her not coming, she had sent Geet in her place. Geet had refused to come initially but her greedy heart had not been able to the withstand the lure of using Naintara's mobile's free use for 6 months. She could call all her friends as many times as she wanted.

Wearing green salwar suit, her curly hairs tied in a loose braid, wearing her favorite chappals she entered the khaurana construction's main office. she hoped she wouldn't have to stay for long, her family thought she was on a college day trip.

Geet looked around in interest, her bright eyes keenly taking in everything. she went to the reception and told her that she was expected. The young girl took a look at her a dress and then, looked at the list on her computer,'' what name?''

Geet,'' Naintara.''

The girl nodded,''Yes, your name is on list. Please, have a seat, I will let it known that you are here.''

Geet smiled and went to take a seat on one of the sofas in the waiting area. Why did dev's mom called Naintara to office, she thought?

Geet had been waiting for 15 minutes when suddenly it felt like an earthquake had hit the office, employees were running here and there, straightening each other's ties, shouting for files. She watched the chaos in interest.

There was a call for ''Naintara''. Geet got up and went to the receptionist who had a most somber expression on her face now like someone had died.

The receptionist told her to wait, MSK was coming to meet her down here.

The girl looked at Geet in sympathy,poor soul what had she done to irritate MSK so much that he was coming down into the main foyer. Everyone knew what that meant. It meant termination for any employee but this girl she didn't seem like a worker of khaurana construction.

Oblivious to receptionist thoughts Geet opened her bag and cast a happy look at her dabbba aka lunch box which contained all her favorite food given to her by her Amma ji. First she will meet MSK aunty and then, she will have her lunch. she grabbed a chocolate bar from bag and started to eat it happily.

Maan Singh Khaurana walked with purpose, his eyes full of rage, he had to leave his well earned holiday,and now Dev, and Naintara were going to bear the burden of his anger.

His feet glued in surprise as he saw the girl standing in foyer, for a moment he stared at her unaware of his surroundings. It felt like an angel had descended the earth and decided to munch on the bar of bounty chocolate.

Geet finished her chocolate and then, turned to throw the wrapper, her eyes fell on a tall tanned man standing in hall staring at her. she threw an irritated glance at him, cheapo staring like that at her. Men were same be it in big cities or small towns. Just standing there looking at her like she had run away with his monthly rent.

she flicked an errant long curly hair lock behind her ear and went toward the waste bin to throw the wrapper.

When she moved, Maan came back to his senses, his cheeks flushed to a deep red in embarrassment as he realized what he had been doing, staring at a girl in his own office. Sure enough his employees had noticed his reaction. Few males were snickering while females were throwing jealous looks at girl.

He looked at receptionist as he remembered his reason for coming down here in the first place. The receptionist gestured toward the girl.

Maan stared at the girl again, she was Naintara? Somehow this made him more angry. He angrily strode toward her and thundered at her,'' How dare you!''

Geet looked at the him in surprise,'' Can't I throw the wrapper in bin?'' she asked innocently.

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Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago
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Maan frowned, wrapper?, he shook his head and shouted,'' Naintara how dare you think that you can join Khaurana family? You small town girl, You think it is easy to get rich by marrying a rich guy?''.

Geet looked at him as she thought,so this guy here had called her sister here to insult her?

Maan continued,'' I know girls like you. How much you want? 10 lac, 15 lac, 25 lac?'' He grabbed his check book from the pocket and strode over to the reception desk. He wrote the check and came back to Geet and held it out to her,'' Here take it and don't ever show your face to my family again.''

Those big hazel eyes looked at him and then, at the check. she reached out and took the check. Then, she looked back at him,'' Big fat tears pooled in those big eyes. Her cute face crumbled into a pitiful expression.

Maan reached forward he don't know to say what, may be to apologize but she spoke at that moment, her voice serene like the bells of mandir reached his ears and those of his employees,'' But I loved you so much. You said you will marry me, now...now you are giving me money?''

Few more tears fell down on those milky cheeks, she sniffed delicately and said,'' Small town girl? You big city boy showed your big heart. After everything paying me off with money? what about the symbol of our love.'' she put her hands on her tummy and stared at him in accusation.

Maan watched her shocked. what was this girl saying. His employees were looking at him now like he was the worst sort of scoundrel.

He said,'' What are you saying, our love? I don't even know you.''

Geet looked at him in despair,'' You don't know me? Good. I will leave then, I am taking this money with me because its for your baby, a baby you are abandoning. From now onward never show me your face,''

she took a tissue paper out and dabbed at her eyes and then, left the building. Maan was so shocked at what had happened that he walked back to his office like he was in dream. He had wanted to insult her instead she had managed to make him seem like a loose character in front of everyone. He sat down on chair with his head in hands.


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Geet happily strode outside, 25 lac! wow. She threw a satisfied glance back at the khaurana construction. That guy's face, it was worth looking. Who did he thought she was? she was a Haunda, geet Haunda. she had taught him a lesson. He had lost face among so many employees when he initially had planned to insult her sister.

she looked at the bank name on check, she better transfer the money. why say no to ghar ayi lakshami?
...

It was night time and Geet and Naintara were sitting on the floor of roof huddled together.

Naintara looked at the sad Geet sitting beside her. Naintara's eyes held disbelief and heart break,'' Dev died?''

Geet nodded somberly,'' He got bitten by a mad dog and they couldn't save him. His mom said that he wanted you to be happy, he said that choose a good guy and move on, in your happiness his soul will find peace.''

Naintara looked up at the sky as she slowly cried,'' He loved me so much.''

Geet nearly rolled her eyes but she controlled the urge,'' Di, his mom gave some money too, I have transferred it into our account. Its for your dowry.''

Naintara cried,'' But Dev, how could I think about anyone but him.''

Geet,'' For the peace of his soul, you have to move on di. show him how much you love him. The baker's son still stands outside all day just to catch a glimpse of you. If you say I can talk to his sister and move things forward.''

Naintara nodded sadly. she said in her heart,''Dev, I will do this for you.''

Geet patted her on shoulder as she thought the benefits of having baker in-laws, free ras malai every second day.

...

Geet had just come back from spending time with her pet ''dhano''. Her mood happy, she stepped into the house when she heard voices. Curious she went inside and peeked into the drawing room. What she saw made her jaw drop in surprise. Dev was sitting there with his family including that MSK. she heard the words,'' We are here to ask for the hand of your daughter Naintara in marriage.''

she stepped back, what! what about her ras malai?

Suddenly someone hit her on back, she turned to find Naintara standing there,looking at her in anger,'' You said he is dead!.''

Geet looked at her for a second and then gave her a big innocent smile,''Surprise! happy new year.''

Next chapter will be posted on 10th Jan :)

Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
lol yaha toh geet badtameez nikli lol 😆 Bitten by mad dog ?? Seriously .. Geet ko koi other idea nahin aaya kya .. Hahha kya dog bite karne se kisi ka death hojayega kya 😆 She seems like chulbuli type ... Msk ko shick dediya 🤣 hmm interesting ..i think maan is thinking geet as naintara and he thought that naintara is pregnant ... Dev and naina ki shaadi .. And geets last line happy new year 🤣 awesome update .. Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
too good update
dev dead Geet too much
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing update... I just loved this story... Specially geet character... Excellent way to deal the situations... But why dev proposal came suddenly when they were against it...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
I just love geet
weird cute character
can't stop laughing while reading you are awesome
ohh Mr khurana mesmerized by her beauty
surely he got angry because she turned out Tara

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