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.Ashleydevlin.

@.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: deep002
Congrats for new story, waiting for update dear

Thank you Deepa, I hope you will like this maaneet

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pop77

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Interesting story..
waiting for update..

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

not so simple concept
interesting

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

nice cs
wow u will update so fast
great won't have to wait
excited to read

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Haya1022bmw

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

interesting prologue
I want to read it more

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Khushibloom

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Great prologue

This geet is quite funny yaar 😆

Lol she can't see anything other than her food not even her own sis

She is so different here I am looking forward for more of her scenes 😛

Bechare maan ke chutti ki toh band bajadi gayi all thanks to his beloved brother

Let's see what geet would do after going to KC

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Khushibloom

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Very nice CS Maine abhi dekha ye 😛

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Nice character sketch dear.

Interesting prologue dear !!

Maan was enjoying and happy to have his own space and time for thyself but alas his Grand mother's call distrubed him owing to his brother's recent deeds. On other hand Geet is lively and bubbly girl and seems to be foodie as well. Geet's character is quite different and relatable too.

Nice precap !!

Is she going to KC to meet Khurana s on NT's behalf or owing to her Interview or something.

Thanks for the update.

:))

Edited by anu5 - 7 years ago

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Lovely character sketch! 😃

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

fascinating prologue! superbly written! wonder how Maan will handle the matter! Naintara and Dev in love but Dev's mom is unhappy with this! loved the intro of Maaneet! Geet and Naintara share a wonderful bond! so Geet is in Delhi! eager to know y she went to KC! will wait 4 Chap 1😃👏

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago