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Posted: 7 years ago
PART 11




BANNER BY LOVELYUMANG


BANNER BY MAANEETFAVO




NOTE:
blue italian words are maans self talk or his thoughts.
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Geet: no one is running away MR.KHURANA, WE WILL DO ALL PROCEEDINGS TOMORROW AFTERNOON ITSELF.

MAAN: you are always welcome, so can we all leave now.

Annie: haan bhai its already 7pm.
They all reach ground floor and settle up in maan's car.

MAAN'S CAR 7.20pm:

Maan on wheels adi beside him in passenger seat, geet behind maan annie and pinky behind adi. From the time geet settled in car she dint open her mouth which is not her normal type.

Maan eyes every now and then goes back to geet on side and rear view mirror, but now really he cant hold back and want his answers for whom geet was hugging in college with so much happiness on her face.. he was mentally framing words carefully not to give clue on his interest on her or him being their in college today afternoon. But before that adi broke the silence in car...

Adi: annie how did you reach kc in evening? If you informed i would have sent a car to hostel.

Annie: its ok bhai, actually geet's brother came to meet and surprise her so he dropped us on his way.

Adi: ohh so geet what was the surprise?
Geet's thoughts broke with adi calling her name.

Geet: hmm. What you asked?

Annie: geet what happened to you? You are looking dull, are you fine geetu

Geet: annie its nothing, little headache thats all. I will be fine. Haan adi you was asking something?

Adi: am asking about your brothers visit and annie was speaking about some surprise

Hearing about her brother once again her face turns bright gaining its glow...

Geet: haan adi, today my bhai came to meet me in college and yeah his surprise i really loved it.

Adi: what was the surprise that you loved so much?

Geet: its varun...
The very next second the name left her mouth all present in car jerks up with the sudden brake applyed by maan.

Adi: Maan sambal kar.

MAAN: hmm some idiot came in middle.. varun who would be this varun is he the one who geet was hugging in college?

Geet: but the road is clear no one is here.

MAAN: he has gone to hell for now, and who is driving me or you?..

Adi: ok maan drive carefully, geet you said about varun? what is so special about him

Geet: yeah varun, everything about him is special to me... now is he going to stay in delhi only am so happy. He is my partner... again the car stops with jerk

MAAN: what the hell... partner what business partner? no, then what? life partner? does she meant lover or fiancee??

Adi: what happened now maan?

MAAN: The same idiot came again.. adi you wait and watch am really going to kill him. He is again and again crossing my path. he said looking at geet from sidemirror

Geet: but Mr.Khurana i can't see anyone here. whole street is clear

MAAN: yeah you can't see geet. you can't see anything


Geet: what do you mean mr.Khurana. am i looking like blind for you

MAAN: i mean to say... nothing leave it

Adi: so geet you said something about varun.

Geet: haan adi he is my partner i mean crime partner..

MAAN crime partner, this girl is making me mad

Adi : CRIME PARTNER?

Geet: haan we do lot of masti's together from childhood, me pinky varun and sometimes arjun bhai also joins us.

Adi: so varun seems to be very close to you. Is he your neighbour or friend.

Geet: actually he is my close friend crime partner and also my bhai

Adi and maan: bhai? MAAN bhai but annie said she have only one brother then who is this.

Geet: haan bhai, why ?

Adi: just nothing, this varun seems to be a interesting character. And i thought you have only one brother arjun

Geet: haan varun is really a interesting character, varun is also my bhai totally i have 4 brother's. Except arjun other 3 are my cousins.

Maan self talk : ohh brother, he takes deep breath with relief of getting his answers atlast. So she was hugging my future brother in law. But now i want to know about her family completely before her other brother come to delhi and raise my BP. [/COLOR]

Adi: maan where r u lost the hostel is here.

Maan stops the car all three gets out and wishing eachother goodnight and leave.

Maan drives the car after few minutes adi saw smiling to himself and he dont want to lose the chance to tease him.



Adi: sooo...

MAAN: so.. what?

Adi: maan you are too fast man, first love happened then hug happened then now kiss happened... wow

MAAN: adi its all accidentally happened except love , You know everything happening around me then why are you asking

Adi: but now a days i dont get how, but many things happening suddenly

MAAN: what you are saying? Say clearly adi

Adi: am also working in KC for past 8yrs And i never get to know Kc has these many procedures for appointing an intern...

MAAN: haan adi these procedures are only for special interns... seriously i just want to play with her. I like it when her nose becomes red in anger SHE LOOKS CUTE IN ANGER

adi: wow what a day? MSK using words like cute. i thought you dont even know such words exist.

MAAN: such words exist but only for my misty. fightercock

Adi: maan you have to make her fall in love with you but you are planning to create some action sequences i think.

MAAN: haven't you heard a saying that a relation that starts with action sequence ends with romantic sequence.. and whatever it be love or war Maan Singh Khurana never lose.

Adi: but maan dont forget who your opponent is.

MAAN: yeah such a beautiful opponent, you doubt Msk's ability and charm?

Adi: not at all but this time i doubt if any action sequences happen you will win or not. I strongly believe geet is going to win

MAAN: why?

Adi: first you have to defend and attack your oppent to win... but i guess you wont even do anything if your misty comes before you, you will turn statue lost in you... and most importantly

MAAN: what? Adi don't forget MSK is a lion

Adi: even if sher jangal ka raaja ho, yah apane sheranee se pahale apane munh ko khol nahin sakata ... i know

maan glared at adi he also knows its the truth both reached home and went to freshenup to their respective rooms...

HOSTEL(7.25pm):

Pinky: Annie why DD is doing this we have only 5days to submit the appointment letter. Now we also want to prepare for this internship test...

Annie: haan then we also want to prepare for our semester exams...,

Geet: dhust dhanav, but anyways we have to go for proceedings tomorrow.. Morning itself we have to meet professor and get identity certificate.

Annie: we even have to take shasha snd tasha for intership.

Pinky: yeah its going to be hectic day tomorrow. . .

Geet: Atleast if work is over tomorrow we can start our exam revision from day after tomorrow...

Annie: Even we have to go for lunch on sunday

Geet: annie no dating still exams get over do you get it.

Annie: dating??? Oye geetu have you forgot sunday lunch at your brothers place.

Geet: ohh yeah i forgot my brother in your brother's chakker.

After discussing about days happenings geet and pinky asked annie to rest and went to collect dinner.

Geet sends pinky to collect dinner and she went to call balwant.

KHURANA Outhouse:

Maan freshenup and changes his dress and put the old one in laundry bag taking something from the packet and goes near geets picture in his room.



Geet see this he opens his fist in which there is a neatly folded cloth i mean handkerchief... geet this is your first gift to me. Our loves first symbol.



I know you wont understand see he opens the fold where his Name is neatly embroidered with some red lip mark above it.

Geet do you think i will wash away your first touch and claim on me, No misty i can't... its going to wait with me here in Km for your arrival. he said touching her cheeks in frame

Suddenly his phone rings diverting his attention from the huge frame of geet smiling in his room, he picks the call to hear his mishty's voice from otherside.

Geet: hello balwant?

Maan: hello aliya, how are you

Geet: am fine how are you ?

MAAN: yeah am good. I was thinking about why you didn't call yesterday.. i thought you dont want my friendship

Geet: ohh not at all balwant... am little busy yesterday, i always treat my friends and family on top of all.

MAAN: ohh its nice to hear, hmm coming to your family... you dint say anything about it.

Geet: why do you want to know?

MAAN: aliya dont get afraid am noways a danger to your family or you.. you can just give a outline no need of exact details and names. I think as a friend i have rights to know about you atleast this much

Geet: hmm... as a friend i too have rights to know about your family Mr.balwant singh


MAAN: first you stop calling me with MR tag... i can't hear it anymore whole evening i heard and its enough for today. I have a good name Ma... i mean balwant

Geet: you heard me calling you Mr. From evening how??

MAAN: not you geet but my clients interns staffs... so we are friends you can call me with my name.

Geet: ohh ok... then balwant you say about your family na... who and all live with you?

MAAN: hmm at present i live with
My friend come brother, granny and sister studing in hostel, thats all they are my family


Geet: ohh ok..

MAAN: now your turn aaliya.

Geet: hmm at present am staying in hostel, mine is a joint family dada dad mom chacha chachi my 4 brothers...

MAAN: you have a big family aaliya. I think you are the apple of your family

Geet: yeah , as i am the only girl child am so close to all especially am my dadaji's pet.. my brothers never forget to surprise me with gift this and that... i really love my family

Maan can feel her excitement in her voice when she is speaking about her family now he get why she was so happy to see varun. And speak about him to adi..

MAAN: aliya how was your day today.

Geet: its was super good until evening

MAAN: why what happen?

Geet: i met one dhust dhanav... what a attitude he thinks he is king of the world... i dont want to speak about him.

MAAN: hmm...ok, wont you ask how was my day aaliya

Geet: yeah how was your day?? Meetings.

MAAN: everything was normal until evening. Then my day turned wonderful.

Geet: why what happened??

MAAN: i met an angel? She made my day.

Geet: angel?? Who?? Your Girlfriend

MAAN: haan, my princess my girlfriend.

Geet: how many girlfriends you have..

MAAN: what type of question is this?

Geet: a very normal question now answer me

MAAN: maybe some 5 or 6 i guess

Geet: 5 or 6?? Really,

MAAN: haan aaliya , as much as mine and your name is true this is also true. I have 6 girlfriends..
Why aaliya are you feeling jealous..


Geet: y should i feel jealousy,

MAAN: that is what am saying dont feel jealous dear... you are my special girlfriend.

Geet: what? Am not

MAAN: you are... i guess you would not have forgotten my girlfriend equation.. ok ok am just kidding. I dont have any girlfriends as of now.

Geet: what??no girlfriend

MAAN: y are you getting shock for this also?.. what you ... ...

few seconds went in silence balwant didn't talk so geet called his name
Geet: HELLO BALWANT HELLO

MAAN: i will call you back later bye goodnight. He immediately cuts the call and walks towards mirror and stands before it shocked.

Adi's room(7.45pm)

Adi leaves to his room and freshenup and sits on soft with laptop to check mails. When he comes across a mail from the man he appointed to assist the team in south india for mission. Stating that they will start to delhi day after tomorrow in morning and will reach by afternoon, the head member also coming with them...

His happiness knows no bound after a long time everything is happening in a positive way. He has never see his friend smiling and living his life happily after what happened 3months back in Australia.. maan is now coming out of his lonesome life and trying to mingle with his family, he is also being positive in approaching GEET.

No one else other than me know how much he has fallen for geet its his destiny... the only thing stopping maan from outspeaking his feelings about her is his harsh reality. But if the reason for the peoples visit to delhi is successful then he will turn more like before an happy man. Adi's thoughts get distracted with a call.

He picks the call when his screen display an foreign number... he know who's it is.

Adi: hello mom

Lady: adi beta how are you and maan?.. have he accepted the reality

Adi: we are going good mom, you know him mom he is not a one to accept it... mission is going on but nothing is useful..

Lady: i can understand, anytime you need help regarding it dont hesitate to call me.

Adi: sure mom, how is dad

Lady: he is fine just now he returned from office. He dont like what you both are doing but he will also help you both..

Adi: i know mom,how are you

Lady: Am fine by the way he only asked me to call you and i forgot to say the reason for my call

Adi: what mom, anything important??

Lady : haan adi did you forgot what is tomorrow?... ... ... ... ...

Adi : thanks mom actually i forgot it, i will inform him dont worry mom we will handle it.

Laby: ok bye if you need anything call me you both take care of each other.

Adi's pov(8pm)

I cut the call after talking to mom, now how am i going to say this to maan. After a long time he was happy now only. But i can't even hide it from him, its consequences will be more than worst..

With hard heart i went out of my room to meet maan in his room when i neared his room i can hear him speaking to someone on phone and smiling standing near balcony door looking outside... from whatever i heard i know its geet. I stopped near the door which was opened wide...

I know the minute i say about tomorrow his smile will fly away i know that.. i can see maan moving near railing here and there like he is feeling uncomfortable. Suddenly his hold on railing tightens immediately i saw him moving towards mirror and he cuts the call, once he is before mirror i saw him standing still...

i know something is wrong so i moved towards him and stood behind him seeing our reflection on mirror.



His face is very much normal except his eyes showing our reality in reflection.


Now i know its an advance effect of tomorrow's happening. Still holding my eye sight on mirror i touched his shoulder to make him feel my presence. He closed his eyes for a second and opened it again now its normal he turned facing me but his face is fallen low.

Adi: Maan mom called me to inform us its full moon tomorrow

MAAN: ok, did you make the arrangements.

Adi: yeah i booked flight tickets. Tomorrow afternoon 3.00pm and we will reach their by 5.30 so we wont be among people while the moon raise on sky

I want to talk to him to make him feel good but i know Maan is not the one to show his vernability to anyone. .. . I stood there looking at his face which shows a mixed feeling of pain helplessness worry... he raised his face and looked straight at me

MAAN: are you fine? Do you need any help

Adi: yeah am fine, i think its effect of you standing out in moonlight for long...

I feel happy of being his friend all my life, at present he made me feel proud, he is thinking of me even when he is going through such a huge emotional,mental and physical turmoil which is too much for any human to handle.

MAAN: i need rest lets talk morning. Bye goodnight

Adi: hmm yeah, goodnight maan. I pat his back shoulder slightly 2 or 3 time as an sign to encourage him and started to move.. "i will be down if you need any help in night call me".

MAAN: hmmm. He closed his door same like he closed his heart from all..
I went to my room calling it a day to get the much needed rest before facing the next day.


DELHI UNIVERSITY HOSTEL(8.30PM)

Geet reached near canteen where pinky was waiting for her holding 3 food parcels in hand. Munching a chocolate in one hand...

Pinky: what happened, did you find anything suspicious.

Geet: nothing we discussed about his family.. geet said her everything except balwanth's teasing her. Ok now lets go annie will be waiting..

Annie geet and pinky all settled for dinner when suddenly geet started the topic.

Geet: annie you dint say about his family?

Annie: who's family geetu?

Geet: your lover i mean boyfriend,?

Annie: what about his family, why you are asking suddenly?

Pinky: annie dear we want to know about your choice and what made you fall for him.

Annie: ok... hmmm where to start, ok i will start about his family... he is basically not from delhi but currently shifted for his business reasons, so his sister is studing in hostel. He stays with his brother and he has dada.

Geet: dada? He said dadi?

Annie: who said? Geet what is cooking in your brain??

Pinky: Nothing annie, you know our geetu na she is day dreaming.. you continue.

Annie: ok, he is a mba graduate. Thatsall.

Pinky: what thatsall? Say other things about him. Does he looks like Dd handsome..

Annie: pinky stop this topic can we discuss about exam preparations... tomorrow we have a long day

Geet: yeah am also feeling sleepy.

Early morning all three gets ready and leave to campus soon to get the needed certificates and attend classes so they can leave afternoon to Kc for proceedings..

After the classes during lunch break the trio stops shasha and tasha and geet tells about the proceedings. And asked about them joining. Shasha ignored geet and started to speak to annie

Shasha: annie dear, we going shopping today so we will join later

pinky: Have you forgot we have to submit the appointment letter coming Monday.

tasha: sasha is speaking to annie, you low class villagers keep your mouth shut.

sasha: where you got internship? maybe some low class below standards company.

annie: i Bet you won't find any other company like this company all over world in our feild

tasha: yeah maybe such a low standard company in whole world

sasha: Few workers, MD would be an 60yrs old who dont have any brand value. who want to do internship there, we will find some other companies.

Geet: ok then, I will inform our professor about you both doing internship alone...

AND about your queries on company, its an MNC with branches all over the world and 5 branches in india, about MD he is rude and attitude king, but he is super handsome and his age must be within 26,

MAAN SINGH KHURANA AND KHURANA CONSTRUCTION IS ITSELF A BRAND WHICH SET'S THE VALUE FOR OTHERS.. then who cares for brand value.


annie: Geets lets leave we dont have to waste time on them... we have to reach Kc by 1.30pm.

PRECAP: GEET ANGRY ON MSK, MAAN'S OUTSTATION WORK AND STARTING OF AUSTRALIAN FLASHBACK.

NOTE: ANY GUESSING ABOUT MAAN'S REALITY? HOPE YOU LIKE THIS TWIST, FROM NEXT PART GEET'S POV WILL ALSO BE ADDED A LITTLE TO SHOW HER SIDE OF STORY.

THANKYOU ALL MY DEAR FRIENDS FOR YOUR CONTINUED SUPPORT.. TAKECARE.







Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Sorry I thought it is Rishbala virsion
I will wait until you update there because I don't want to be confused with the names
Edited by Hend_Refai - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 10
Nice update...
full of maaneet...
Maan n Geet ko usi ka dose de diya... lol
Precap seems interesting 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update jenny...
Loved maaneet's banter...
Seems like Maan is a wolf or something who becomes one on amavasya night or like that...
That's what I can perceive as of now...
baaki to tu hi reveal karegi 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update

finally poor maan got to know about varun 😆

geet n balwant talk was lovely

ohh maan n adi leaving ... away from everyone on full moon night
GOT IT 😉



Edited by maanshi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Something had happened to Maan in Australia but that something effects him on full moon
he is a werewolf or something
Geet getting information out of Balwant and he too wants to know more about Aliya
Sasha and Tasha always taunting Geet and Pinky this time Geet should not have told her that they will be at KC
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome twist yar..
Maan is cursed n so he turns out to animal on the full moon day..
N that is y keeps himself separate n lonely..
The lady.. Who is she???
In previous update Maan called her mom n now in this update even adi called the lady mom ??
Whose parents are they actually???
N Maan is upset with them due to this reality of his..
N so he is going far away not to hurt ppl..
N what's their mission ??
Curious about all... :-) ;-)


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Posted: 7 years ago
Brilliant update dear nd now story is going to be interestin . ...I'm eagerly waiting for the next part plz update soon ASAP nd thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superbbb update...
don't tell me u made maan a vampire or werewolf something... but its a interesting twist...
loved Maaneet phone conversation...
looking forward for next part...
Edited by karamjeet - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wonderful Update
Maan got relief knowing the guy is Geet,s brother whom she was hugging in college
Loved Adi teasing Maan
Geet called Balwant and both asked each other about their family
Very shocking twist , poor Maan he is not human and I think he is turning into werewolf , eagerly waiting for next

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