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minelove24

@minelove24

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: T.Peru
Nice prologue & Ch
Hope Maan find his peace
Also Geet over come her past
Thanks for PM
Update soon

Thanks dear..😳😳😳

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Rosmitha

@Rosmitha

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Congrats for the new story dear...

Nice prologue...

Waiting for next update...

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Welcome to the forum as a writer dear !!❤️

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Congrats on your first FF

Nice introduction.

Geet is a famous singer and achieved her success through her determination and hardwork. She has a backstory too. On other hand Maan is a business man living his life lavishly but has a void in his life.

Fab character sketch

Looking forward to the story

Thanks for the pm !

:))

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: trishtej

Thanks to u darling for ur supoort..
so nice poem.👏.will put in next part in suitable context..love u darling .☺️.hope u will do continue support to me..

love u darling and thanks for motivating me..😳

Pleasure is all mine.. Got a lot of motivation from my dearies so would love to contribute as well!

aww you find that nice, makes me glad...that would be an honor but be careful, don't ruin your flow just because of my abrupt thoughts hehe!😃😆

Love you too, do continue soon! 😳

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Iptida

Pleasure is all mine.. Got a lot of motivation from my dearies so would love to contribute as well!

aww you find that nice, makes me glad...that would be an honor but be careful, don't ruin your flow just because of my abrupt thoughts hehe!😃😆

Love you too, do continue soon! 😳

Omgg meri devil didu poems bhi likhthi hain 😉😃

By the way very sweet poem di .. Mere liye bhi ek likho na 😆😉