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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

thanks 4 da pm n beautiful update! superbly written! Love Maan, Dadi and Annie's bond! Maan searches 4 the song on his music app! the song soothes him! Geet has a nightmare! who is Mahi???? Geet goes 2 the orphanage and forgets her pain! Annie and Maan gng shopping! Ahh I agree with dadi! Anju wants Geet to always be happy! lovely precap! cannot wait! update asap

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minelove24

@minelove24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
thanks 4 da pm n beautiful update! superbly written! Love Maan, Dadi and Annie's bond! Maan searches 4 the song on his music app! the song soothes him! Geet has a nightmare! who is Mahi???? Geet goes 2 the orphanage and forgets her pain! Annie and Maan gng shopping! Ahh I agree with dadi! Anju wants Geet to always be happy! lovely precap! cannot wait! update asap

Thanks.dear.. Will update soon.

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Lakshmi

@Vaidhumom

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Thanks for the PM dear

WOW...Amazing update dear...

Maan listened to Geet's song again...WOW 😳

Loved Geet's visit to the orphanage😊

Daadi aiming at Maan's marriage...as you said ...me saying "ME TOO" 😆

Does Maan and Geet knew each other before? Maybe will get an answer in the next part😉

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minelove24

@minelove24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom
Thanks for the PM dear
WOW...Amazing update dear...

Maan listened to Geet's song again...WOW 😳

Loved Geet's visit to the orphanage😊

Daadi aiming at Maan's marriage...as you said ...me saying "ME TOO" 😆

Does Maan and Geet knew each other before? Maybe will get an answer in the next part😉

Thanks dear...Ham sab too.. Aiming maan ki shadi 😆😆

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@astrisa

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Superb start
Geet is a singer just loved this her name is geet and she sings woah. Always have read Maan as the singer.
So kudos. Nice concept.
Msk is typical himself.
Nice characters

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@astrisa

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Part 2
Cute update
Maan has a sister Annie
Beautiful bonding btwn the 2
He loves Geet's songs
Geet has a backstory in her past
Precap is nice waiting 4 next
Add me in ur pm list plz