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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

congrats for new story

very nice start

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T.Peru

@T.Peru

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Nice prologue & Ch

Hope Maan find his peace

Also Geet over come her past

Thanks for PM

Update soon

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Lakshmi

@Vaidhumom

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Hey...thanks for your PM. Just read it and thought of flashing this message.

Congrats on your first FF dear 👏

I am bookmarking it for time being...will read it tomorrow and comment...😳

Good Night 😳

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

First of all many many thanks for putting this story on IF and not sticking to blog only.👍🏼
Secondly Many Many congratulations for your first story!👏

When did that naive heart beat for him for the first time setting a melodious trend...
When did those erratic beats began to replicate each other into sublimation..
Never would be known, as It was oathed forever! With no starting nor an end!

Yeah i know I suck at writing poem and really need to stop doing this lol!! But reading your post it just popped in my mind...

Well coming to the concept - It is amazing.

CS- Nicely done 😊

All the best for this..Great starting ⭐️

Thanks for the PM. I would try my best to follow it...if my readers block allows me! 😳

Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago

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Maangeet

@maangeet.gmmg

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

lovely start dear superb waiting for more updates regularly

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minelove24

@minelove24

Inactive

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg
lovely start dear superb waiting for more updates regularly

sure dear..thanks for replying😳

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minelove24

@minelove24

Inactive

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Iptida
First of all many many thanks for putting this story on IF and not sticking to blog only.👍🏼
Secondly Many Many congratulations for your first story!👏

When did that naive heart beat for him for the first time setting a melodious trend...
When did those erratic beats began to replicate each other into sublimation..
Never would be known, as It was oathed forever! With no starting nor an end!

Yeah i know I suck at writing poem and really need to stop doing this lol!! But reading your post it just popped in my mind...
Well coming to the concept - It is amazing.
CS- Nicely done 😊
All the best for this..Great starting ⭐️

Thanks for the PM. I would try my best to follow it...if my readers block allows me! 😳

Thanks to u darling for ur supoort..
so nice poem.👏.will put in next part in suitable context..love u darling .☺️.hope u will do continue support to me..

love u darling and thanks for motivating me..😳

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minelove24

@minelove24

Inactive

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: trishtej

Thanks to u darling for ur supoort..

so nice poem.👏.will put in next part in suitable context..love u darling .☺️.hope u will do continue support to me..

love u darling and thanks for motivating me..😳

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minelove24

@minelove24

Inactive

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Nav2010
Awesome!! like button does not work

its ok dear..thanks for reading..hope u will support me further also..

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minelove24

@minelove24

Inactive

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom
Hey...thanks for your PM. Just read it and thought of flashing this message.
Congrats on your first FF dear 👏
I am bookmarking it for time being...will read it tomorrow and comment...😳

Good Night 😳

Thanks dear..😳😳read it when u will get time and let me know ur views..😳😳😳