Na Ja Mitran Ton Door- OS (MG version)~Updated 18th Sept 2017 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Congrats for this new os
Eagerly waiting


Thanks dear. Waiting for your feedback 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome yaar ... Geet rejected maan and married dev but dev treats her as servant ... Hah even geet hates him lol ... But maan is so much hurt and challenged geet and after some years she is watching his song in tv... She is indeed shocked and now regretting for rejecting him 😕.. But maaneet ek nahi hua na is mein ... Lekin koi baath nahin experiment kiya na bahuth acha hain yaar ... Write some more os like this 😳😃 lol loved last scene roti kissing dev hahha 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Reading. Thanks for updating tonight.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roopa_1

Awesome yaar ... Geet rejected maan and married dev but dev treats her as servant ... Hah even geet hates him lol ... But maan is so much hurt and challenged geet and after some years she is watching his song in tv... She is indeed shocked and now regretting for rejecting him 😕.. But maaneet ek nahi hua na is mein ... Lekin koi baath nahin experiment kiya na bahuth acha hain yaar ... Write some more os like this 😳😃 lol loved last scene roti kissing dev hahha 😆


Yeah...as i have told you just searching all the allies of writing and discovering new ways.
Glad that you liked it. Listen to that song, you will enjoy more then, 😃
You are first btw. Thanks a lot for your awesome feedback baby.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: solaceMG

Reading. Thanks for updating tonight.

My pleasure and waiting, 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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outstanding OS! thanks 4 da pm! wonderfully written! Geet rejected Maan 4 Dev! she is nw stuck with this grumpy fat man! she sees a song on TV n realises its Maan! She regrets what she did 2 Maan! its 2 late now! love the end when Dev got a flying roti on his face! nice song!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow. Awesome concept. Beautiful experiment I must say. So Geet is married to Dev and Their married life has got super dull. Dev doesn't like her. Nor does she likes him, real life mein aise bohot log honge jo aise bina pyaar ke shadi ko niva rahe honge.
Maan popstar baan gaya hain aur Geet aab chulha ghistey huwe uski Geet sunn rahi hain aur apne kismat ko kos rahi hain. LoL ha ha ha
Dukh bhi hain hansi bhi aa rahin hai
The song is very catchy indeed.
Awesome OS.
Waise I love the way you write everything but today I am surprised with your versaitility. Super.
Waiting for naja part 2. Wink wink
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for the pm. And yes definitely waiting for an erotic one from you. Lol me besharam ho chuki hun i knw :P
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu5

Congrats for the OS dear !

Awaiting for the update
:))


Thank you so very much dear!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations on your OS

So Geet actually married Dev and it was Maan that was a janitor in the past
but he had swore to become famous and so he did

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