Na Ja Mitran Ton Door- OS (MG version)~Updated 18th Sept 2017 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: taahir004

Congratulations on your OS

So Geet actually married Dev and it was Maan that was a janitor in the past
but he had swore to become famous and so he did


thank you so very much dear! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: anu5

Nice OS dear with different concept

Loved it!! Well penned !
Geet and dev are married and their martial life hit rough note. Geet once a college diva is now struck with a couch potato. She sees a song on TV and identifies the pop star as Maan. Geet rejected Maan for being a simple janitor and choose dev over him. She regrets her decision now but alas it's too late. Maan proved thyself to be a worthy person and moved forward in his life and geet was sulking with household chores.
Nice song dear
Thanks for the pm !
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Wow, I am very happy that you liked it.
Yeah i just thought there are so many aspects of love so let's give this one a try. Basically while writing one of my stories this kinda popped in my head.
Thank you so very much for your lovely comment dear! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
Wow that was just so Awesome
so Geet married Dev
while Maan was the janitor at college but today
he is famous and a singer
aah Geet should have hooked up with Maan
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nakh5683

Hehehe funny os iptida geet was married to a man who only eats and poor geet has to just cook and cook she is married to dev maan was a peon who had proposed geet but madam geet insult his love coz of his position as a peon but maan vowed to be successful and he is while as maan had said that geet will repenting just making rotis for rest of life and bot it was true dev is a self centered jerk who doesn't even cares for his wife self respect dear care to make it a ss


aww thanks a lot for your super sweet comment dear.
Very glad that you had find it funny. 😆
Beautiful analysis by you.
SS hehe don't know but thanks for the consideration. 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

Sad geet left maan for dev...
But now she is struck with a jerk...


Thanks a lot for your feedback dear!😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Congrats for OS...wonderful concept... dev was asking roti to geet for bf so while preparing rotis for dev she was watching song of maan on TV & she regrets to rejected maan who was peon & stuck with dev( fatty).. she felt sad with remembering maan's word but now its too late ... awe dev got flying roti from geet hahaha...excited for more updates(as SS)...thanks for pm.. (Sorry for late comment)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Nice with different concept ,loved it
maan out n dev geet married , geet regrets her decision nothing can be done
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very funny OS
Geet is cursing herself ki uss ne Maan se saadi na karke Dev ko select kiya
Aur abb usse uss ke liye sirf rotia belni padd rahi hai
Aur Maan ek Singer ban gaya hai 😃
Beautifully written
Loved it

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